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Actually, I'm not discriminating. Do women have to be sick for a few days every month when they play? Do we have to avoid those days in tournaments, otherwise they will have debuffs throughout the game?
Own personal opinion
If you want to play professionally... You should remember the CDs of common hero skills, right? Do you need to remember the skill damage? Do you need to remember the release limit distance? How many soldiers should be remembered from 2 to 3 to 6? These are all the basics... The more advanced ones, the card speed is pulled, the attack distance is flat... I was lucky enough to visit the youth training of a club. Like those in some novels, the live broadcast is usually started and the game is played directly. This is not the case... The live broadcast can only be broadcast after taking time. Customized training and replenishment training are required every day. The intensity of the training match is extremely high... I'm not saying it, it's many times more intense than those of us who work in the office... And girls' physical condition, they have menstrual cramps every month... Some people say that after countless years, they are used to it... Some people get used to it and cry with menstrual cramps? And a little bit of physical discomfort on the field will cause a lack of concentration... When you are playing matching and ranking, you suddenly have a stomachache and want to go to the toilet. Can you still perform wonderful operations in this game? The author wrote about the women's team according to the idea. We have nothing to say about this, but if you write about the women's team killing indiscriminately in some game, that would be too much... Art comes from life, but what you write is a novel that is closer to reality... It is not a fantasy. Fantasy novel... That's it. No matter how much I say, you'll feel annoyed. After all, I just read the previous one, and I haven't seen it on the shelves yet and haven't spent any money... I just looked at the comment area to see if there are any poisonous points that would dissuade me after it was put on the shelves... I wish the author to write better and better, and I'll take my leave now.
Sorry, I failed, it really poisoned me Poisonous weeds Poisonous weeds Poisonous weeds
I just started watching it today and it felt a little bland. . . Since the protagonist is the anchor at the beginning, I think he rarely interacts with the audience. Also interspersed with relatively few jokes
In fact, the writing was very good at the beginning, so I subscribed as soon as it came out. But when I got to the women's team later, I really couldn't stand it at all! I gave the author my opinion, and the author said he would not change it! Then there is nothing more to say, farewell!
"Sailor"
Two against five, or two against five without any economic advantage, is outrageous. I wouldn't even dare to write like this in a novel...
Women's teams are not suitable for LoL. Three points are character, physique, and thinking. Girls' personalities are the kind of careful ones. It's fine for one person to be careful in LoL. If five people are careful, they can't win at all (according to us, it's called cautious at best and cowardly at worst). Next, let's talk about physical fitness. It's divided into two points: body and hand speed. Girls can't stay up late for a long time. Hand speed is generally not as good as men's. Then there's thinking. Men will try their best to expand their advantage when the wind is down, although it may be dangerous. , Girls will be more stable, so that the opponent will have more time and resources to develop. If the strength gap is big enough, it will be okay. If the gap is not big, it will be easy to come back later. When the wind is against the wind, men will guard the tower and change when they have the opportunity. Women may guard. Anyone who has played knows the consequences of this. Finally, let me tell the author, more than 90% of the lol novels read in Qidian are men. It is difficult for normal men to have a sense of substitution. You should go to the female channel. Your writing style is very good.
Actually, this book could be written better, but the women's team really can't. I am also a psychiatrist and a female gamer. I understand. A team of 5 women is basically a mess. More than 2 women in a team are very troublesome and cannot be brought up at all. Moreover, professional League of Legends players require a lot of time to practice and analyze, boring recruitment, various tactics, etc. The protagonist has an aura, which is normal, but others do not. Each position requires at least 67 experts to be familiar with, and depending on the version, it also requires a lot of practice. This must stay up late to train, but the physiological structure of women does not support staying up late to practice repeatedly, etc. But if you don't practice a lot, you will definitely lose your proficiency. Moreover, when playing games, the brain quickly analyzes that women do not have an advantage. First of all, women are much less powerful than men. E-sports can intensify physical exertion during stressful times. It is obviously prone to operational deformation. Furthermore, reading novels is mainly about realizing a dream, or being a substitute, or adding people you like into it. If no one knows anyone, there is no sense of substitution and it is boring. Now the players Ah Shui and Shao Shao are in the bottom lane. I don't know how strong they will be. I thought Jin Gugu was also included in the list. I can change it later. I can change the outline.
Frankly speaking, this book is not an ordinary poison, it is highly poisonous. It has no logic at all. Men will really feel physically uncomfortable after reading it. However, it can be seen that the author just wants to write a novel for himself, that is, for self-pleasure. He does not consider logic and does not expect the audience to read it or not. To put it bluntly, it doesn't matter whether you who read the book live or die. As long as I am happy, it's okay. Fortunately, the author is a woman. These bookworms in Qidian are somewhat gentlemanly and want to show face in front of girls, but Give your opinion in the comment area. If it were a boy, according to the concentration of poisonous points in this novel, this comment area would have been filled with smoke and turned into a mother hunter in Zaun 😅. At the least, it could be a personal attack with a blade on you, or at worst, your mother could explode. Author, if you really want to be on a male channel and want to be a part of the author's career, you should really pay more attention to the rationality of the story. At least, don't bullshit. I almost had a brain hemorrhage when I beat gold and silver at a high level and was beaten into a Muggle. And this high-level score is achieved by yourself. Did you know that if another male author were to write it, his family tree would really rise to the sky? There are also things that readers are unwilling to correct after pointing out mistakes. Don't talk about the outline. If the outline has been determined and cannot be changed, you think that everyone does not know that you are prevaricating them, but they are embarrassed to point you out. Basically, any bookworm who has been around Qidian for a while knows that it is not too difficult to change the outline, because you only need to change one part. It's just one paragraph, which is the paragraph that they think is the poisonous point, the unreasonable paragraph. You can use the original outline for the rest, and they will also tell you how to change the paragraph you want to change. Failure to change it is a question of ability, and not intending to change it is a question of attitude. The readers basically just want you to change the poisonous point. How to change it is another matter. But as long as you change it, they will basically not hold you back. If there is a problem with the outline, then you will have to change it. A wrong outline will basically lead to a bad novel. Of course, if you are just writing a novel to make yourself happy, please just ignore my words, but I would like to trouble you next time you write a novel, write the words "write a novel for yourself" in the introduction, so that you are good, I am good, everyone, so as not to Being scolded, after all, with your writing style that you don't plan to change, the things you write may not be suitable for male channels. Over time, you will really encounter so-called online violence and personal attacks. I suggest you switch to female channels in the future. Your writing style will be more suitable. PS: I still hope you can change it. I really can't survive the women's team 😅...
The author is quite admirable. First of all, the level of the book. Regarding the game, I am a platinum player and feel that I have learned a lot. This is rare. After so many years in the league, the average player is the king of keyboards and can speak a lot of things no matter how many dishes he has. The author of a certain chapter said, "I get more inspiration when I write about games." Looking at lol e-sports articles, this is very surprising and enviable. I have never been interested in character archetypes and gags, but I can see that the author is very attentive. As for the parts outside the game, even though I don't want to read them, I can't say they are poorly written. I don't know if it's as I guessed. The author was somewhat cautious and restrained, trying not to rush into writing what he wanted to write and cause possible poisonous points. Then there are people. "Wisdom is easy to be hurt, but deep love will not last long." Characters are often the projection of the author. The protagonist thinks a lot, quickly, and carefully, and those who can successfully create such a protagonist are also sensitive and delicate in their mental thinking. The various hesitations, confusions and withdrawals faced by the protagonist should be more or less experienced by the author himself. The protagonist is tired of winning all the way, and such long and detailed writing will never be easy. These are the things that affect readers' enjoyment, but they are also things that the author cannot abandon, right? I formed a women's team after winning the championship, and my reading experience was interrupted. I feel that this book is unfortunately not what I wanted it to be. I am a little bit unhappy about it, and I also want to see what other people think of it. As expected. Then I saw where my reading progress was, and in what state did the author persist for a long time? Includes replies to chapters and comments. I'm sure there are admirable things in it that I don't have but admire. Originally, I would say "we meet each other so late". But if I were to catch up on updates and reach my current progress, I would probably abandon the book. Or, like many people in the comment area, they try their best to change the author's thinking, and finally make a difference. But it takes fifteen minutes to persuade people to surrender, but fifty minutes does not. I have to finish it after all.
Picking the floor
I haven't been able to see you picking on me, so I feel a little guilty for no reason... When I looked back, I picked out a few of them. I'll create a building here. If you find any bugs in what I wrote or have any comments or suggestions, you can mention them here.
The heroine doesn't have any objections, and the writing is very good, but the women's team... I really can't keep up with it.
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I was poisoned, tell me how you feel. I can accept that the protagonist is the strongest, but I can't accept that a few female void players suddenly pop up. Nowadays, many people no longer play in the league as cloud players, but they all watch the games, hoping to see that the people in the past are still persisting, and hope that they can realize their dreams. The airborne female contestants have no sense of identity, no memes and no famous scenes. I really want an all-female team. You can be effeminate and accept it.
The heroine? ? Go crazy! Women can play this game well! Nine out of ten female anchors will do it for them
The comment section is really scary. I casually browsed through the rankings in Qidian. The male protagonist Long Aotian came from scratch. In his twenties, there are many people who can destroy the world or dominate the world. Why can even something completely unreasonable like a system leak be accepted, but something like the theoretical probability of the female protagonist being the strongest player cannot be accepted?
This author is awesome. He created an all-female team and lost a lot of readers😎😎😎
The first League of Legends novel I read with a female protagonist should be, F L The top laner Empress, that one is really well written, but it's a pity that it's the eunuch. The front of this book is really good, although I don't like QG very much. Later, it talks about setting up a women's team, and I read all the introductions of the players. I don't know why the protagonist agreed to play with them. In the jungle, she can only be a shooter and jungler and doesn't like to catch people. The support can only use heroes with hooks. The shooter is too aggressive and her skills are average. The mid laner is old and has poor skills and can only be a functional hero. The protagonist might as well join EDG or RNG. EDG just lacks a top laner. RNG has Puppy, Xiangguo and Xiaohu, and Puppy is an old teammate, or IG is fine. The protagonist is in the top lane, and his teammates are the S8 championship lineup. The protagonist is better than the Shy is stronger. Winning the championship is a simple matter. After all, IG is the team that won the first LPL championship. It has many fans, and the boss is Principal Wang. It is not short of money. It even said that the assistant can be replaced by the female assistant. I believe readers will be more accepting. Isn't it much better than establishing a female team? And it's easier to write this way, as there's no need to create so many original characters.
Moba games are really not something that girls can persist in. The hero pool requires proficiency. Six or seven new heroes appear every year, and heroes are redone and heroes with different positions are developed. Version Equipment Understanding The details of the laning are constantly changing, and the female body cannot handle the intensity of 15 hours of training every day. the shy has high talent, and s8 also nodded to practice the release time of Thain's Q skill. I don't know if the protagonist's talent can reach the ceiling. Professional indiscriminate killing, the silver tower shrinking thing is too fake. It is recommended to watch Suning, the bin king of passers-by. Pulling details, exchanging blood, and controlling skill CDs are really too bad. It's not that easy for a professional guy to get his job.
I read that many people have strong opinions on the women's team, but the author also said that she wanted to write about the women's team from the beginning, so I will simply give my opinion. First, it is not impossible to form a female team, but the process and starting point of your formation of a female team are very problematic. When you were in qg, the protagonist was dissatisfied with his teammates and felt that they were not good enough, so they all had to be led by the protagonist. So if you kicked them out and formed a new team, they would have to be of similar players. Now you have brought in five random female players. Aren't you just chasing people away? And according to the author's description of the level of these players, they are all masters and diamond level, but the problem is that this level cannot even enter the youth training camp. If you directly replace players, or replace players of Uzi's level, you will drive away a large number of LPL fans. Second, the emotional scene is awkward 😓. It can be seen that the author wants to write about the love between teammates as a way to adjust, but to be honest, in competitive writing, you really shouldn't write about love between teammates. It is very embarrassing. The relationship between teammates is different from the relationship between you and your best friend. Finally, it can be seen that the author sister spent a lot of energy and did a lot of work writing this book. I hope you can stick to it.
They are all empty characters. Those who have never played LoL and only read novels will have no sense of immersion.
I haven't watched it yet, but I want to ask my aunt what to do when the game comes.
S immediately made a handicap on horseback and ended up losing? They all cheated to such an extent that they changed their hairstyles and started to fight back and then lost? It's not difficult to come up with a one-time black routine to win the Bo1, such as Pansen Rock Bird and the like. Writing a lot of finals and then losing, winning runner-up and gaining respect from the LPL is ridiculous. A student with a score of 99 will always be scolded more than a student with a score of 59, let alone in an environment like online e-sports. Don't understand