There Is a Bar in Houhai

It's free of charge. How can I put it this way? When I saw the place on the banks of the Seine, I really felt that the relationship was too sudden. The previous writing was very good, the writing style was very smooth, and it was very touching. As soon as the heroine appeared, I felt that I fell in love with her without much foreshadowing. It was too abrupt, and there was not much foreshadowing. After meeting her twice, she chatted on WeChat and then confessed her love? I blindly guessed that the author wanted to express love at first sight, starting with appearance, but from my personal point of view, the writing was not very good and it progressed too quickly. It's better to slow down the emotional scenes. If they are too fast, it will feel incomprehensible. How did the relationship come about? What have you experienced? The characters and scenes have no three-dimensional image. (I have always believed that love will grow over time, hazy enough to like it, very slow, half a year is too short and three years will not last long, and I happen to be in this state now)

It is a mediocre novel, the writing style is not very outstanding, and I feel that the author is not very great. When I saw the slap-in-the-face chapters, I felt that this novel was cold. Originally, the parallel world was still the original character of China Entertainment, and you didn't open a harem. The early stage was mediocre. In order to please you, you don't know how many readers who can insist on subscribing, you slapped them in the face and poisoned them. I really don't want to collect and subscribe. I recommended it yesterday. I read Fatty. You have written 500 chapters. You are very persistent. Keep your current fans. You can listen to your opinions. I feel that it will be good if this book can have 2,000 subscriptions. Come on.

I was bored and came across a book that Qidian recommended. I felt that although the article was bland, it was still readable. Many people complained when I read the comments, but I don't think it was that bad.

Qin Mohan is the heroine, right? Based on Reba? It's very uncomfortable and a bit unbearable. Liang Hui, who was modeled after Yang Mi, was already uncomfortable when she appeared. These stars have too many dark spots and no bright spots. They rely purely on speculation and scandals to maintain their popularity. They are used to be heroines and supporting actresses. They are either whitewashed, fake, or truthful, and they will be ripped apart by their fans, so it is very difficult, especially to persuade them to quit. If the heroine wants to write about people in the entertainment industry, it is best to have nothing to do with celebrities in real life and purely rely on her own construction. I feel that this will be much better. I have read a book about the urban goddess. Whether it is the heroine who learns to dance or the female supporting character who enters the entertainment industry, there is no real prototype. The writing is very good and there is no poison. The archetypal female stars in the entertainment industry are written as supporting roles, which feels pretty good.

After the heroine came out, whenever there was a chapter with a heroine, it felt very awkward.

There is nothing wrong with the heroine's character now, but the setting that she has to devote herself to her career is a hidden poison! There is a reason why actors generally look for partners and peers. Think about it, you open a film and television company, find a good script, find a good male lead, and then let your wife play the female lead. Where do you watch them kiss and touch, and you also let everyone in the theater watch your wife kiss and touch others. Are you a pimp or a pervert in your heart?         ，，？

Many netizens complained about some chapters, especially the scene where the two met. To be honest, Fatty is my first time writing a novel, and some of the passages were forced to be written. After seeing everyone's complaints, I went back and read it again, and planned to take the time to modify the content. All modified chapters will not affect the subsequent plot. If you are interested, you can go back and read it.

I care, so I am more serious about it. In the work related, the protagonist has some talent in music. Why is it not included in the previous life? I have endured a lot of hardships, started my own business, has a talent for advertising, and won a grand prize. It is not mentioned in the works, and it was not reflected after my rebirth.

Talking about personal sense, Dilireba has always felt that she is ugly. I have asked many friends, and half of them said that they really don't think she is very beautiful, and she looks a bit strange. But some say they are beautiful, haha!

Is there something wrong with the protagonist's setting? A person who worked hard to build a company in his previous life and experienced cancer suicide would become depressed because his parents divorced? An adult being raised by an older sister? Are you afraid you won't be able to survive if you have money? Although he will long for family affection, he will not become a child who knows nothing, right? You might as well write that the protagonist time travels from when he was three years old

Well... I feel very lucky to have read this book. After work, what I am most looking forward to is the update of your book. Come on...

In fact, this book was okay at first, but after the heroine came out, I felt awkward no matter how I read it. I felt that the author should be a woman, a rich, talented and handsome man who lacked love since childhood, kneeling and licking me, but in order to be a good actor, I didn't care at all, and could make the necessary sacrifices for the great art, ah! What a Mary Sue female channel novel!

I have read more than 40 chapters, but if you are bored, you can still read it. It is not interesting. The protagonist is reborn in a wealthy family, a properly rich second generation, and with the memories of rebirth, he invests in some businesses in the United States and makes a lot of money. After returning to China, his life is unremarkable. There are no plots of pretending to criticize and slap someone in the face (in fact, I don't like plots of forcing criticism and slap in the face. Maybe the author just wants to find a new way and not write these plots), and there are no various business wars and other things. Occasionally, he sings some songs from his past life. Let's not talk about the emotional drama, everyone is complaining! To sum up, it is the ordinary life of the rich second generation (the kind of rich second generation with a net worth of tens of billions). The author tells us that we really cannot imagine the life of rich people, because I did not expect that it is really the same as ordinary people! Reborn as the second generation of rich people, in fact, deep down they are still the same as before! 😁😁😁

The male protagonist has a deformed personality and is a licking dog. Which billionaire walks around a woman like a licking dog every day? I don't understand what's going on with the heroine at all. I can't understand the emotional scenes at all.

. . An excellent dedicated actress. . . Gee, most men wouldn't find such a person as their wife. . One day your child points to the screen and says why the person kissing mom is not his dad? When I'm angry with you, just say that your wife is a good talker and she'll be so angry. . . (Not talking about this book)

I feel very uncomfortable when writing about a heroine, and it makes me uncomfortable to watch. It's fine to write about a fictional character, but it's not good to watch when it's based on a prototype. It's so stupid that I fell in love at first sight. Bye bye, the more I look at it, the more uncomfortable I feel.

I've read less than ten chapters, let me know what you think. 1. The story told is illogical and inexplicable. 2. The description seems to be of an autistic person, which is extremely pretentious. 3. The protagonist is wolf-hearted. A nanny can make you feel emotional, but your biological grandfather doesn't care at all? 4. The protagonist is no longer short of money, so he still hangs out in the small ditch of music and copies songs? Then why not give the protagonist a diaosi character? 5. The protagonist's family is a big boss in the cultural system. His father is rich and his grandpa's family is rich. What the hell are you doing? 6. If you want to live a plain life, don't write about this or that. If you want to write about business, just do business. A mess. Reading feels like being force-fed shit! I don't know what kind of perseverance those people who pay the money have to see through it. Where does the sense of substitution come from?

The first scene was very cool, but then the heroine appeared, and it was based on a certain actress who only knew how to hype a masterpiece with no strength. She was instantly as disgusting as if she had eaten a fly. The more she watched later, the more disgusting she became, and she couldn't stand it anymore! If the single heroine was an outsider, I think the results would be even better!

This book can actually reflect some realities, that is, the power of the Manchus in the entertainment industry is really great. Although they cannot cover the sky with one hand, there is definitely half the sky. In addition, the Qing palace dramas in the TV series in previous years simply reflected bad values, but they still managed to pass the test... It really makes people speechless...

There is a problem with the character. The first few chapters were calm and calm, and she looked like she was looking down on the world. Since I wrote the heroine, she has become like this. She makes appointments for dinner and play dates, and sends WeChat messages to her every day. It is too contradictory. You should take your time when writing the heroine. Why should a person who is fifty years old treat a girl like this without any feelings? The character is so broken that I can't stand it anymore.

This heroine's setting is too poisonous, I can't handle it... It's too hard to resist!

The choice of the heroine was not good, if it were a childhood sweetheart, it would definitely be better than this one. And as soon as the heroine comes out, it feels like the protagonist starts licking a dog

After reading both of your works, they didn't go beyond the third chapter, and there was nothing to attract the readers' desire.

Pigfoot was a successful person in his previous life. After his rebirth, he had a net worth of tens of billions. The author wiped out the character of Pigfoot in his previous life as he wrote. He turned into a licking dog with a net worth of tens of billions. He lacks a sense of identity in his heart. After knowing him for two days and taking advantage of him, he will feel that others do not care about him and treat him as a brother. He has been recognized by others. There is no need to read this setting.

Do authors nowadays write books with a dog-licking mentality?

Show off your foreign wine all the time

How lonely is a pig's foot? With a net worth of tens of billions, when I come back, I will give you a little brother and give you a little brother. Why, this one takes advantage and treats you as one of his own. The other one says a few nice words to you and treats you as a brother. Old Shell Pain

It turns out this book is called "The Domineering President Falls in Love with Me"😂

Two hundred articles out of millions of words? ? Shennong came out and talked about it

Seriously, this book is too messy to write. Looking at the songs written by the male protagonist and the songs that appear in the world in the book, my head hurts. Because it is said to be fictional, but there are real singers appearing. What a mess! Books are meant to immerse readers into the world, and the way you write them makes people laugh.