I Won the Mvp in Zhai Dou Wen

This book is on the Qingyun List. Uncle Mo didn't know it at first. He didn't even read the introduction and went to read the main text. Looking at the result, huh? Not bad yo꒰ ˘͙ ᵌ˘͙꒱♡ Then I returned to the home page of the work, only to find that I had been to Qingyun, hmm (nodding) The beginning of the article briefly introduces the background without being sloppy at all. The author handled this better. Some works overemphasize the background in the early stage, making readers feel bored and unable to read. It is said that if you want to attract readers, you must set up a small ** in the early stage. When he saw the eldest lady going to trouble Feng Yongying, accusing her of stealing things, Momo's mind came up with the idea of ​​an unloved daughter being bullied by her sisters, and then the heroine being reborn to take revenge. The result is unexpected. This is all Feng Yongying's plan, and it is the eldest lady Feng Yongning who is misunderstood. After that, the modern woman was reborn into the villain Feng Yongning and started a new life journey. It is said that contradictions are what drive the development of the plot. Conflicts appear, threaten the protagonist, the protagonist resolves the contradiction, and then starts the next contradiction. This is such a repetitive process. If there were no contradictions, the plot would be uneventful and boring. A few characters appeared at the beginning of the article. At first, I was a little confused about the real heroine Feng Yongning and the female supporting character Feng Yongying. I was inevitably worried that the author would make the early writing complicated and confuse the readers. After reading two more chapters, I found that the author has good control over the characters, and each character has distinct characteristics. The heroine Feng Yongning is attentive, smart, and decisive. She does not panic when encountering difficulties and will avenge herself. She will repay double the kindness others do to her. Sometimes a little naughty, which is very likeable. The supporting characters in the house, including the aunt and several sisters, have quite distinct personalities. After all, my aunt came from a bad background. Even though she was favored and scheming, she was still not as good as our ladies and couldn't get on the stage. Yongying follows her mother, she is quite scheming and has many tricks, but she also knows how to assess the situation. On the contrary, Yongjia is a bit mindless, acts impulsively, and is not reserved. The father who is the heroine of the family, no matter who he is, is an official after all, and everything can be put aside before interests. As for the male protagonist in the book, he doesn't appear much. He gives the impression that he is very stable and protective of the female protagonist, but he is not an unintelligent doting. It can be seen that this book has a male protagonist, but it is still mainly about house fighting, supplemented by emotions. Writing ancient proverbs is actually a test of writing skills. If it is not written well, it will make people feel like it is modern and make readers feel like they are out of the drama. Some ancient Chinese authors have a lot of descriptions of houses, clothing, etc. In their books, which makes people feel very lengthy and cumbersome. This is not what is called good writing. The description of foreign objects in this book is just right, not too much, not too little. The author's writing style is good, and many details are presented in the form of ancient proverbs. For example, "Taifu" was used by people in the old days to ask each other's surname and surname when meeting for the first time. There are also some etiquette in ancient times, which are also well written. It can be seen that the author has put great effort into them. Let's talk about the things on the surface, the book title, book cover, introduction and chapter names. These may seem simple, but they are important. When a reader is reading a book, the general process is as follows: Book title ☞ Book cover ☞ (Introduction) ☞ (Chapter list) ☞ Text I won the MVP in the Zhai Dou article. This name is very interesting and very clear, Zhai Du, which highlights the theme. Afterwards, give an introduction, roughly stating the background, protagonist, and general content. Not too long, not too short, just right. But Uncle Mo thinks that the last sentence can be removed. The chapter title is also very interesting. It probably highlights the main content or main characters of this chapter, which is very attractive. If we talk about the shortcomings of this book, there are slightly less details such as the expressions and movements of the characters, and there are some slight incoherence in the interweaving and transition of the plot, which can be ignored (๑˙ϖ˙๑) Q&A session⁽ⁿᵔᵕᵔⁿ⁾ Q1: What was Jiuer's original intention in writing this book? Long Jiu: I have always preferred writing. I hope to create completely different characters from my writing. I first started writing this book because I read a house-fighting novel, and I found the heroine's witty character very attractive to me, and the male protagonist was also well portrayed. That's why I had the idea to start writing a book, hoping that I could also write such brilliant male and female protagonists. ......(For more questions and answers, see the column on Uncle Mo's homepage, the column is more interesting⊙∀⊙!)

The writing of this book is good and the plot is smooth. It is worth reading. Get fat first.

I am very active in waiting for more every day, please improve.

I am getting farther and farther on the road to fighting against the street... Every time I am recommended, I feel that the editor is helping the poor 😁

What I write always reminds me of myself. I don't know why, but it is obviously different from me in the novel...

The plot is compact, exciting, and enjoyable to watch.