Marvel's Magneto Is a Good Guy

I grabbed the Illuminati at the beginning. It was very creative and exciting. I hope it can continue to be exciting.

The contract has been signed, everyone is welcome to comment 🙏

Magneto's charm is powerful because he is the leader of the Brotherhood of Mutants, because he is extremely attentive and persistent towards mutants, and because of his unique personality charm, not because of his coldness. This book of yours gives me the feeling that it is like taking the dross and excluding the essence. It is boring to read.

I saw the latest chapter, cheers for the author. I just feel like the writing at the end is a bit tight, but luckily I just have to finish it at my own pace. Don't TJ.

The most important thing is that in the first ninety chapters of this book, did the protagonist really do anything that would help mutants survive? It's purely for my own entertainment. If Lao Wan himself knew about this, he would kill anyone who acted in his name in a minute. The old man in the comics has a very good personality. Although he takes the blame every day, he always sticks to his moral bottom line, kills decisively, and truly clears the way for the future of mutants. After knowing that Quicksilver and Scarlet Witch are not biologically related (the comics about the Axis of Good and Evil event around 20134, some people don't know it is normal), he doesn't care. Compared with this kind of bad thing, and compared with saving the future of mutants first, what does it mean to him? In the novel, I guess forget it. . . . I have seen both movies and comics. Who Lao Wan is depends on the perspective of a mutant (he bears no responsibility to humans, humans are not worthy of his kindness and forgiveness, and more than a dozen relatives died at the hands of Auschwitz and humans, otherwise he would not be so resolutely anti-human), his beliefs, not his abilities, and his identity. The devil in the eyes of humans, the fallen angel in the eyes of mutants, and the deadly savior. He is a representative of realism. He talks less and does more. Even though his abilities are almost paralyzed and he is hunted by SHIELD, he is still silently protecting mutants instead of using his abilities to dominate the asteroid M he built. Also, Shock Girl seems to be a member of the Inhumans. Lao Wan almost died because of Terrigen Mist (the treasure of the Inhumans), which caused another racial cleansing of mutants. If they were together in the comics, they would probably kill each other directly, let alone these things. Children are affectionate, indecisive, and greedy for pleasure. Lao Wan will never have these characteristics. That doesn't mean he hasn't had it before. But it has disappeared with the death of Magda. The four identities he has had. Max Eisenhardt, a child who survived Auschwitz, witnessed the tragic death of his entire family. Magnus, a failed emperor, a survivor of the massacre in the Kingdom of Genosha, witnessed the corpses of 1,600 mutant kings and people everywhere, the man with no tomorrow, the most feared revenger of the sentry robots, the lover of his deceased wife Magda, the father of his late eldest daughter Anna, the adoptive father of his adopted daughter Wanda and his adopted son Pietro. Eric Lensher, the biological father of the youngest daughter Polaris Lorna, the lover of Susanna (Lorna's mother), the failed leader of the Brotherhood of Mutants, the eternal master of the Monks of Desire, a great protector of X-Men and mutants, and an internationally wanted terrorist. Magneto, who gave mankind the most terrifying code name, was once regarded as the savior of mutants by the Dawn of Dawn, fought bloody battles with Red Attack, tried to reverse the fate of the 616 main universe and the 1610 ultimate universe, and failed miserably (delayed for a few minutes, the entire Avengers was unable to do so) If he is allowed to replace the Illuminati, the Secret War may finally have to go head-to-head with the Transcendent Protoss, because Lao Wan will never allow the extinction of mutants, and will do whatever it takes to force him to death.) A man who can reverse the earth's magnetic poles and single-handedly challenge the Avengers and X-Men, but is difficult to kill. Alas, I hope Marvel will treat Lao Wan better after restarting the X-Men.

Who told you that Magneto is not a good person? Magneto is a mutant. Of course he stands on the side of a mutant. When the two countries are fighting, do you still think that the enemy will have a hero from your country?

The first nine chapters are dominated by Magneto's vision, supplemented by pig's feet, calm and wise, knowing the gains and losses of advance and retreat. The following is that after traveling through the multiverse, he was interfered by the Ancient One. Pig's Foot's vision is dominated. Although he has Magneto's memory and abilities, he is somewhat mentally retarded, funny, holy mother, and licking dog. The poisonous point is here. Personally, I think 80% of people like the first nine chapters. The sense of substitution is stronger and the reading is more enjoyable. Feel better! After the ninth chapter, retarded, funny, holy mother, and licking the dog. There are also favorites. Probably a lot!

I hate Nick Fury very much, I hope the protagonist will not kneel down and lick the Avengers

The editor strongly recommends that it is getting more and more poisonous 😅

What did the author think? Are you on the side of humanity, peace or mutants? ………… In fact, Marvel can make a spaceship to leave the earth, and it is no problem to find an uninhabited planet to survive, so that there is no need to compete with humans for this and that. I particularly suspect that the Marvel writers are deliberately weakening humans and strengthening superheroes, making humans dispensable. In fact, humans can fly into the universe and colonize planets. ………… At the same time, I don't understand what's so good about the earth. It would be great to go to the universe and see other civilizations.

If Magneto himself saw you writing about him like this, he would probably kill you through the screen, holding the power of Magneto.

He carries Magneto's body, but does not inherit Magneto's charisma. What a cold Magneto, but you wrote him into a funny + tengu.

Don't the biological Quicksilver and Witches smell good? , I was convinced by having a shock wave girl.

This book is actually finished at Chapter 8. After all, the pig's feet have been replaced.

The plot is a bit boring now. Every time something happens, the protagonist goes to check it out, only to find that it is all his fault. Once or twice is fine, any more will be disgusting.

I don't understand why the character of the protagonist in the first nine chapters is very good and there is no need to bring out the Ancient One and then reorganize the soul of the protagonist. This is superfluous. The character of the protagonist in the previous nine chapters is actually very good. Why do you have to change the character of the protagonist again and drag out the fact that the soul of the protagonist is affected by Magneto? I haven't watched it since Ancient One. It's so damn toxic.

I couldn't understand racism before, so I couldn't understand the mutant leader. Now I can't even breathe, but I understand Magneto, and I also understand the awesomeness of our Chinese nation, we are the future.

Author, you really can't write big scenes. Why do you include physical combat in every fighting scene? You have to remember that Lao Wan is a scene person. Since you wrote about Magneto, it is impossible for the body to transcend superpowers, otherwise it would be putting the cart before the horse. Electromagnetic guns, magnets, metals, etc., It doesn't matter. You can just stand still and use skills. If you ask Lao Wan to release iron and punch at the same time, is it embarrassing? Isn't the Ebony Throat in Avengers 3 delicious? An elegant and domineering scene. Forgive me, the author, but I have never seen Magneto swinging his fists in comics or movies. We readers will have scenes in our minds when we read books, but when I think about Magneto hitting people with his fists, I get black lines all over my face.

A fan novel that feels worse than the original comic

Magneto is not a bad person in the first place, it is the malice of this world that constantly forces him, destroys him, forces him to twist and turn dark, and forces him to do some ruthless things. Even if it wasn't Eric, someone with the same life experience as him would have done something similar to him, even darker and without a bottom line, as long as he hadn't been tortured to death. So don't hold on to some mythical sense of superiority and think, "If it were you, you wouldn't do anything like that…".

Uncle Guo once said that if everyone says good things about a person, then this person must be dead or not far away from death. People who are alive must have good opinions and bad opinions. 😄😄 I think the same is true for novels. How can any novel be perfect? There will definitely be people who like it and people who won't. If they are all agreed upon, it would be too false...🤫🤫 This is my first time writing a novel, so there must be many things wrong with it. You are welcome to criticize me! 😓😓 Well, under normal circumstances, posts will not be deleted or banned unless uncivilized behavior is encountered...😏😏 Of course, everyone has an ID card and has their own face, so they will definitely stay rational, right? 😁😁 Okay, everyone is welcome to read and criticize me. Well, read in a civilized manner and criticize others rationally 😢😢

Ever since Howard went dark, I felt that this book was becoming less and less interesting as I read it. The multiple timelines simply discouraged me from quitting. I'm leaving. Goodbye!

This was obviously a good start, but after the soul left the body, his character took a complete turn. Especially the psychological descriptions in the following paragraphs gave me the feeling that the protagonist traveled to American comics to save people in distress.

This. I don't like any name. Why is this Magneto a good guy? Does that mean the Magneto in the comics is a bad guy?

Licking the dog, licking the dog, you are so awesome

After reading the first ten chapters, I feel that the author has something he wants to write, but he committed a taboo in fan fiction and did not consider the readers' feelings too much. It is not very friendly to readers who have not read Marvel comics and limits the audience group.

Sure enough, three golden chapters! As for the back? It feels like it was written by another person!

Magneto from Marvel is a saint. He is a good person and good deeds all day long but does not care about fellow mutants. He has no interest in women. This is not a saint.

When I saw this kind of writing that combined the X-Men and the Marvel Cinematic Universe, I just said goodbye.

By the way, is there anything else about astronomy that plays with magnetism or the four basic forces of the universe, unified force fields, etc. Please recommend it (good writing)