A Perfect Island

Why should there be a woman and animals? It's better to watch wilderness survival type.

Every time the protagonist's emotions break out, they feel particularly contagious and can impress every reader.

A pastoral leisure novel that you write is full of pretentiousness and slaps in the face, and it also keeps playing conspiracy! Abandoned

Doesn't a tiger's tongue have barbs?

Another little white text! Write less Goldfinger dialogue! !

Um, this island hasn't been discovered by anyone yet?

Come on💪, author, you are the most handsome boy

Chapter 21 is about the protagonist having a phone call with his parents after escaping from danger. Chapter 90 is about the protagonist's parents disappearing when he was two years old and receiving letters after their death. In the middle, it is about how his father is on another planet. Are you a ghost?

I don't dare to read this type of novel anymore, anyway, it's basically just eunuchs in dozens of chapters!

The first chapter is poisonous, and the beginning of the second chapter is completely poisonous. In the first chapter, you bet your life that the octopus won't bite you, haha ​​^_^. Besides, after the system smashed you in the face at the end, there were no mood swings. You bought an island and didn't check it out immediately, but you still feel hungry? The author wants to break the chapter and make it so exciting that you can train it~_~.

This type of novel should be bland, with some funny characters, it's a failure.

😭😭Not enough to watch

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What did the author think? In the first chapter, the protagonist was cuckolded, in front of his face. Actually boarded a luxury cruise ship! Do you think luxury cruise ships are really that easy to board? There's no need to do this to highlight your girlfriend's snobbery! Damn, this is so poisonous to me, I won't be happy if I don't complain about it. I have been going to Internet cafes to read novels since 2004, and I can't stand it. I strongly recommend the author to revise it, otherwise I really can't follow the plot. Forget it, give it up. I can still afford a few megabytes of traffic. Don't make excuses for yourself, saying it's just for the sake of the next plot. Unless you have had such an experience in reality, it's all nonsense.