My Sister Wants to Become an Immortal

No, what have you written in these dozens of chapters recently? The water is fine for you, but feeding💩 is too much. It is inexplicable to write about a little boy who takes advantage of Ye Bai, touches and kisses him, and pushes Qiu Cheng. The key female protagonists have no reaction at all. It can be said that they know that the pig's feet are cultivated and are not afraid, but they are very hostile to others. This is fine, but they are going to give away the sister later? Have you even started feeding? It's really inexplicable and strange. Suddenly the style of painting changes drastically. The writing was so good at the beginning, but now I start to let myself go? Speechless, really speechless.

Author, please change your profession, you are not suitable for writing books. 🙂

The title of the book is Sister, but the heroine is not a sister. I am afraid that my sister will sleep with someone else and then take it back.

I read the comments, and I couldn't help but wonder what the author wrote next, so I quickly skipped the chapter. . .

I really like your book. Really, Tang Baobao is my favorite one. It's really a pity. If you have a new book, please reply to me. Even if I'm not on this platform, I will support you.

Come on, Tang Baobao, you are the straightest.

Regardless of how the writing is, I really admire the author's mentality. He can still persevere after being scolded like this.

Finish the previous books first. Don't have a Minotaur plot in the emotional scenes. I really don't like it. I can't stand Gongba either. Some advice from (My Girlfriend is a Really Big Star reader)

The eggs are cooked😁😁😁😁😁

The previous novel is unfinished and a new one has been started. Author I really want to send you a blade.

My Girlfriend Is Really a Big Star. I haven't finished yet and started a new book. 🔨🔨🔨

This book is really a pity I have read the author's previous works which are quite good, and the first few dozen pictures in this book also gave me an amazing feeling. But after more than 100 chapters, it seems like a different author has changed, and it has nothing to do with the previous content. Almost none of the previous characters appear. Moreover, the content is becoming more and more irrelevant, just like boiled water, and it is completely tasteless to read. Oh, I hope the author will write a new book

. . . . The plot was beyond my imagination, a bit fast. . .

What the hell was it written? After more than 100 chapters, the writing was inexplicable, as if it was a different person. Rubbish

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If the website is written by another person, it is written in the contract that another person can continue writing under the author's pen name.

Please, the author's update is very nice. I enjoyed reading this book.

I'm convinced. The title of the book is "Sister" and the heroine is not "Sister", especially the sister who also likes someone else. If it is written like this, please don't write the protagonist and her sister so close at the beginning. Later, she falls in love with someone else. Everyone will feel uncomfortable. Even if it is written back later, everyone will feel uncomfortable. Author Jun, please pay attention next time. I feel a little uncomfortable watching this plot.

Come on, believe in yourself, when will there be a new book?