I Am Really an African Chief.

In fact, I had the urge to write a short review two days ago, but due to working days, I didn't have time to implement it. It happens to be Friday today, so I'll just say a few words. Danke's book, my most impressive reading record is the last one, "Golden Fishing Ground", and then I officially and completely entered the book in the last one, "Nordic". I'm a lazy person. I only pay for good books. If I don't have enough, I'll just use the browser. This may not please any author, so I have never joined any author's fan group, discussion group or support group. In short, I am a casual person in Wollongong, and I have never even thought about accompanying the last one. From the current point of view, there are three things worthy of recognition in Danke's book writing. The first is that he has worked hard and done homework on the place to be written. He is not taking it for granted and copying the conditions of one country or one region to another place. Not only that, he can also introduce some small knowledge and common sense. I have looked up the explanations of the names of animals, plants and microorganisms about seven or eight times in the past few days while reading this book. You may forget it soon, but you will be able to remember it quickly the next time you see it. Reading online novels can also stimulate interest in natural science, which is the advantage of this book. Second, Dankei's writing style has always been quite humorous. The relationship between the characters does not follow the template of "good guys deal with" or "bad guys deal with", but a nonsensical farce: good guys will also cheat each other, and the bad guys may also have shining points. When dealing with the bad guys, the protagonist can choose the Rambo route or be the Avanti. This is much better than simply mindlessly rushing along or pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger. Third, what I appreciate most is the attention to detail and humanistic care. Every character, whether he is a protagonist or a supporting character, positive or negative, three-dimensional or flat, has a very distinct personality. This distinctiveness not only comes from their words and actions, but also from their expressions, micro-expressions, psychological descriptions, small movements, etc. At present, I have not seen any of the main characters or important secondary characters being standard characters, which is much better than many writers. Let's talk about humanistic care. This humanistic care must first of all come from the protagonist's "non-killing", but it is by no means only the protagonist's or the author's "non-killing doctrine". On the contrary, the details of this humanistic care are often hidden in the description of the scenery every time the sun rises and the moon sets, the clouds come and the rain disperses, and every time the protagonist faces nature, animals and plants, or is with other characters. In many places, we can see the author's thoughts and reflections on life, humanity, the world and even the universe through the mouth of the protagonist, which is difficult to see in many other works. Having said the advantages, let's talk about the disadvantages. First, there is a lack of main line, or in other words, the main line lacks the climax brought by obvious dramatic conflicts. Strictly speaking, the lack of a main line in this book is biased. We can easily see that this is a farming novel that requires the help of the system to establish a private wildlife sanctuary and then reach the peak of life. However, this book lacks one dramatic climax after another to attract readers to keep reading. For example, we know that the protagonist has been fighting against the Tie X Gang for a long time. It is easy to foresee that the struggle between the protagonist (camp) and the Tie X Gang and the forces that may exist behind it will be a possible, continuous, and very necessary point of view. But unfortunately, the biggest climax of the current struggles is when the protagonist calls the whale through the elf and capsizes the bad guy's boat. And this looks, to be honest, like super powers playing house. Another climax comes when die-hard members of the Benx Gang break into the town and commit cruel and illegal acts. However, this matter was easily solved by the author, and then the protagonist and the beloved female character consolidated and deepened the emotional foundation. This approach not only makes readers feel that the protagonist is overqualified, but also feels that the protagonist clearly has the ability to destroy the earth, but he insists on doing embroidery. Obviously the details are handled well, but the author can always make the climax of a stage of dramatic conflict very plain. Big things are reduced to small things, and small things are reduced to small things. Second, the repetition of routines. As I said before, the author's writing skills are undoubtedly excellent, but in terms of routines, the author is undoubtedly uninnovative: A Chinese protagonist who strives to be localized Several optional local or foreign characters of the opposite sex that can be conquered Several local partners who can be relied on in the local area Several old classmates with close relationships, Old friends Several characters who can turn enemies into friends, several "acquaintances" who are not so reliable but can do things for money The villain leader who has always failed but always perseveres A pair of parents who are bound to urge marriage It can be said that although the character itself is not shaped in a facial shape, the positioning and function of the character are still stereotyped. Therefore, although the stage has crossed the globe from Northern Europe to the southernmost tip of Africa, some places will give readers an unbearable sense of familiarity or even déjà vu. I think this is probably one of the reasons why everyone said it was good after reading the details, but the results were not very good. There are many details of victory, but it is by no means just a victory in the details. In addition, there is another issue of scale. Here we are not just talking about the "driving" content in the article, but also about the some ridiculing content and tone. Under the current intensity of censorship, it may become sensitive, so it is recommended that the author consider it carefully and not be too aggressive. That's it, come on, author!

I read a few books on Shells, Fishing Ground and the Town Mayor Fishing Village; I read the beginning of Treasure King and didn't read it because I didn't like the genre; Nordic only read part of it and finished it after reading it, and then I came here. I added it to the bookshelf several times and then deleted it because of the opening.       ，，，，！ Whether he came to South Africa as an exchange during graduate school or was directly dispatched to South Africa from China, in short, this is an adult who was born in China and completed college in China, and is a party member. First, the Chinese people's education on the importance of human life can be said to have started from an early age. When a roommate dies, a normal person's first reaction would be to call the police or contact the outside world. However, the protagonist starts a different life like a normal person, which feels rather blunt. Although things come together later, how long did it take for him to come together? Second, the protagonist was taken across almost the entire country to a strange place, and was assigned the main mission system task by Goldfinger. He actually started selling jewelry and buying land so directly. He started such a bold operation while talking about security. Who gave him such courage? Third, the parents and classmates in China were notified that the protagonist was missing or dead, and the protagonist's actions became even more confusing after he found out about it. He made two phone calls, one to his classmates and one to his parents. Shouldn't I contact the superior department after this? No need to reissue passport? There is no need to solve the passport and household registration issues through official channels. After all, you are a person who has been reported missing or dead. According to normal operations, you need to cancel your account in the country. If you don't handle it, you will be a black account in the country. How can you return to the country? And whether the protagonist goes to South Africa for graduate school in the name of an exchange student, or is studying in China and is sent to South Africa, can you still go to school? Even if I can't get it, do I still need to contact the instructor? However, the protagonist's operation is that as soon as the two phone calls are made, he goes to farm like a normal person. It can be seen from the above that this is the quality of party members? Is this what graduate students do? Don't let party member graduate students get into trouble. Which person who can join the party in college is not a human being? I'm done complaining and feel good! Regardless of whether I saw the bullet casing or not, or whether I would change it, I continued reading anyway.

I wrote a book review before when I read Chapter 30. Now that I have read the latest chapter, I have a few points to add. I saw the author saying that the results were very poor. In fact, the writing is getting better and better now, but I personally think there are a few very key points. First, at the beginning, the dead person teleported to the poisonous spot in the northeast. The author should quickly revise it. For those of us who have seen it now, it doesn't matter anymore, but new book friends will definitely dissuade many people. When I saw Chapter 30, if it weren't for the name "Full Metal Cartridge", I would have stopped reading it. It's not difficult to take some time to revise it. For example, if you were kidnapped by the two smugglers and taken to the Northeast, you could steal their money and diamonds, and then call the police to deal with the death of your colleague. Wouldn't this be reasonable? Even if we have poisoned more than a thousand people now, will the people behind continue to poison us? Then you can't blame no one for watching. Second, the problem of pattern and style. To be honest, I don't have much expectations for this book. I thought about it seriously, maybe it has something to do with the layout. How should I put it? The fishing ground you wrote about is in Canada, a developed city in a developed country. They inherited a small fishing ground, worked hard to develop themselves, and became a big landowner, a world-famous rich man, and an upper-class capitalist figure. Coupled with the mystery of exploring the sea in the heart of the ocean, the pattern is there. I am always looking forward to the plot that follows. Later, the treasure hunter's structure was smaller, but he started from warehouse auctions, traveled all over the United States, and obtained fresh and novel antiques or treasures again and again, and the novelty of hunting was also gained. Later, the Golden Fishing Village returned to China, and its layout became smaller. However, leading the villagers to get rich and working hard to make their hometown better and better was also a pattern. Immediately after "Xianmen", I didn't feel any sense of expectation anymore. The writing on "Golden Finger" collapsed. I didn't know what I wanted to do in Iceland. Just write about daily life to survive? I think any successful book has style and an attractive main line. Even if it is a mindless and cool novel, as long as it is popular, it actually has a main line pattern. For example, the gourmet live broadcast that I had long forgotten and didn't want to watch. In a word, you can become the chef god of the universe and you will know what the main plot is. The earth can no longer show off, and I will go to various planets to promote Chinese food. Although it is very brainless, I am very excited and excited. I am looking forward to the various alien species that continue to appear, and how to trick them into cheating money and technology. Now this book, in Africa, is a dirty and messy place that does not attract readers. What do you want to develop it into? What kind of future do you want to describe to readers? Africa's biggest landowner? The best animal and plant paradise in the world? A true spiritual haven for peaceful people and caring people? Someone the world looks up to and respects? Set a goal first and let readers know it. I suggest that in this broken place like Africa, since there are elves to help, especially blood elves and war elves behind us, we should either be ruthless in our actions, fight for territory reasonably, expand our territory and influence step by step, and make everyone afraid. No one dares to mess with you in Africa. Either it should be written in a noble way, and the development of peaceful coexistence can be respected by everyone and become a spiritual belief beloved by Africans. In short, make a decision first and then develop yourself. Three, territorial development planning issues. This is also an important reason why I have no sense of expectation until now. A hammer in the east and a mallet in the west, too scattered. Can't we have an outline plan for the development of the territory? Since there are gold fingers, use gold fingers more. For example, continuously release tasks. Within how long, there must be 1,000 species of animals and plants in the territory. Within how long, the territory must be expanded to the coast. How much area must be expanded? How long must it take to earn 100 million in cash. After waiting for 100 million, release tasks to build a city lord's palace, a residential area, a veterinary hospital, and later a school. Have you ever played the Might and Magic game? Now that there are elves, if you combine them with the game's routines, you will be full of expectations, and you can continue to explode troops, instead of only 5 elves coming out like now. Use your golden fingers more often and let the pig's feet develop step by step through each task. This will attract people to read chapter by chapter. The combination of farming writing and system flow makes writing a pleasure! But again, don't write it as a fantasy about supernatural powers. No matter how many elves there are, they only serve the development of the territory. Fourth, it's still a matter of fun. The writing now is much better than in the previous period. There are more pets and more characters appearing. But it still gives people a casual and plain feeling. To put it bluntly, it's not cool enough. It's already been 200 chapters. As the Lord of the Elves, can't the Iron Breaker Beast Gang be dealt with? At present, the scope of influence does not even extend beyond the resort town. It is always the hotel owner, his sister, brother-in-law, and a few insignificant supporting characters. No one knows the awesomeness of the Pig Trotter Sanctuary until now. It's as if he is already the most powerful and richest person in the world, but only he knows it. I know you may not want to use the previous routine of making money to buy land, a yacht, an airplane, and start a company. No need. With the Tree of Life constantly releasing tasks and so many elves helping, isn't it easy to have fun? Goldfinger, the base construction system is flowing, internal development is getting better and better, external dissatisfaction is suppressed, through various tasks, and then weaving a small happy story, is it difficult? There are so many beeps again, please refer to the author. In addition, other book friends should not criticize me, for example, if you are good at it, why don't you write about it? Only a loyal fan of cartridges would write this seriously.

I have read more than 500 chapters, and my overall feeling is: it is a slow-burning farming novel without any bad points, but the rhythm is not smooth enough. The author is obviously a master of farming literature, so some of the settings are very complete. He has a detailed understanding of South Africa's customs, flora and fauna, social status and even history. This is great and is the main motivation for me to continue reading. It shows us a more realistic South Africa, and it is obvious that the author has worked hard. But on the contrary, I think the biggest problem is that the main line is not clear enough. For the first hundred or so chapters, I thought it was a system text, and the tree of life is the system. However, as a system text, the main line is not clear enough, and there is no development goal. At first, it was said to build an elf city (I remember), but later this elf city disappeared, and there were no more elves in the back. The last few elves did not deserve to have names. Later, the main line seemed to be the establishment of a nature reserve. This is also a good main line, but it is too delayed. There are many unnecessary plots interspersed in the middle, such as sending those dozen little black people home. I skipped through the middle of it. To put it bluntly, it is to attract the northern white rhino. There is no need to write such details about the gold diggers and bandit tribes in the middle. Another example is when the protagonist takes Nicole and the old knight home. This plot was too long and took more than 20 chapters. You are writing about an African chief, not a Northeastern veteran. Seven or eight chapters are enough to write about things that Nicole is interested in, such as rime, snow, grave visits, and engagement. I felt it was a bit awkward to have to add a plot about stealing a dog. I think this book should not be very long, with the main line of establishing a protected area, and the ultimate goal can be to establish a world-class protected area. Intersperse some emotions, poaching, and documentary plots in the middle, grasp the overall rhythm, and arrange it reasonably to make it more enjoyable. 1 To 1.3 Million words is enough. Any more would seem like a drag, which is how I feel now. Finally, regarding the subject of South Africa, it has its advantages and limitations. The advantage is that it is novel and attractive. The limitation lies in the current social situation in South Africa. The male and female protagonists are destined not to stay in South Africa. In the end of the farming novel, they have to give up their land. This ending is very uncomfortable.                                                                                                                           izing, but the main line is unclear and the pace is slow.

First of all, I really, really like the writing style of Danke, which makes people feel very comfortable. That feeling of plainness with a touch of warmth is what attracted me to read the entire book Fishing Farm, half of the book Treasure Picker, and one third of the town mayor. In fact, every time Danke releases a new book, I will read it, but some are due to updates, some are because my taste does not match, or because I don't like a certain plot or character in it. In short, for various reasons, most of them give up after reading about a hundred chapters. How can I put it this way? This is the book that I gave up on the fastest because the settings at the beginning were not explained clearly. As a setting monster and a logic monster, I can't stand something stuck here that could have been explained clearly or the setting changed. Because I know that Danke is not incapable of solving this problem, so I feel particularly uncomfortable. After reading more than ten chapters, I still feel uneasy. After searching for a long time, I found that there is no follow-up, which is a big poison for logic monsters. Maybe this is just a small thing, but due to small differences, many small details have illogical logic, vague settings, and are inconsistent with common sense, causing the framework of this book to become crooked. Even the structural frame of a building is crooked. No matter how you build or decorate later, you will not be able to erase the slightest sense of weirdness. For example: the writing style of a novel is like the soft furnishings of a house. Whether the final style is Nordic simplicity, Chinese retro, European gorgeousness or American pastoral all depends on it, which is the initial impression that attracts readers. The story of a novel is like the decoration of a house. You can only tell the quality after reading it more and living for a longer time. A bad story is like the decoration of a house that is not good. There will be various problems such as floor collapse, paint peeling off the walls, water leakage from the ceiling, etc., Causing the audience to leave. The framework, rhythm, setting or routine of a novel, just like the foundation or building structure of a house, play an important role in determining the direction of the subsequent article. Only if these three are correct can it become an outstanding work. From my personal point of view, the framework and rhythm setting of the book Danke is not very clear. I know Danke wants to write about the protection of wild animals, but so far it seems that the protagonist gives me the impression that he is a hammer and a stick. He has no idea of ​​​​protecting wild animals, but he does those things inexplicably. His own behavior is illogical. Besides, in a chaotic developing country, which is neither able to build infrastructure nor willing to fight and kill, how can it provide the conditions for you to live a leisurely farming life like a pension? I think Eggshell has gone a bit wrong. The protagonist's pet, the heroine, and other supporting characters are just some of the highlights. The most important thing is the shaping of the protagonist. What kind of person he is and what kind of things he will do based on his personality. This is the key to the development of the story. The innovation of the novel is not just the innovation of the background, but the innovation of the protagonist's personality. To be honest, no matter how the stories and backgrounds of your later novels change, I still feel that the protagonists are just the fisherman with a different skin. The characters are basically the same, so even if the country is changed and some animals are changed, there is nothing new. I think this is the reason why one new book is not as good as the other. The male protagonist cannot be stereotyped, but must have a clear positioning, and what he does must be in line with his own personality logic. Only then can he shape other characters and ultimately form a three-dimensional world in the novel. Some personal opinions, after reading a lot of comments and Danke's confusion about the results. As a bookworm who has been reading online novels for 7 or 8 years, I type these words out of emotion. I hope it will be helpful to Danke. Thank you for the touching experience your fishery brings to me. Come on, I believe you will make a breakthrough in the end!

Digression: The author wants to test the waters for a breakthrough in the past two years. He should test the waters by opening a vest, and then return to the large size after the poisonous milk is finished. After the fishing ground, the style returned to leisure, but it was difficult to see a breakthrough. Some of my opinions: ①Background is very important. You can see Nanshan leisurely. The background of the fishing ground is Maple Leaf Country, which is inaccessible among developed countries. There are no worldly baggage and worries, and you can enjoy yourself leisurely! In other contexts, for example, the complex interpersonal interactions in fishing villages are a burden that cannot be shaken off, and for example, when small town residents are involved in the government, no matter how you write, it will not be good. For example, Africa: The first impression of Africa is not that the land is fertile but that the black brothers are struggling to survive! In the context of survival, is it suitable to be leisurely and contented? ②Protagonist design, leisurely play the protagonist, who needs to escape from the world in modern society? According to this angle, the character is set according to the background and context. ③The plot, only the routines can keep people's hearts. Don't be afraid of getting old with the routines, but be afraid of not being able to use them well! Having been attracted by the fishery, your subsequent works gradually lost popularity? The first order supports one. Do it and cherish it

The shells are big. I finally saw your new book. I have been waiting for a long time 😭😭😭😭

I'll keep the monthly tickets for you, come on 🙂

Quick to put on the shelves, no way to vote monthly

It's been great, I look forward to your return! In fact, Africa is suitable for many adventures. I think even if it is not realistic, so what? This is a novel! This is the world that brings freshness and excitement to our ordinary lives. There are so many more possibilities in Africa!

Your writing is really good. I have been following it since the first book. This kind of relaxed life is what I yearn for. I will always support you.

It feels okay, but the rhythm is a bit weird. Maybe I want to write too much and can't take care of it all. A little bit in the east, a little bit in the west. Also, as for the heroine, will there be one this time? I feel that the two girls I met are both good women. Can we consider more female leads? And in Africa, I am still Chinese... It doesn't feel like a big problem

Come on, Shell~well written~(*°∀°)=3

I'll keep the monthly tickets for you, come on 🙂

The writing is good and the details are well carved, but the main plot is not explained clearly. It is not clear what the protagonist wants to do during this operation, and the character is full of flaws, which makes people not want to continue reading.

The monthly votes have been filled up. Fortunately, the notification of the bullet shell was in time, otherwise I would not be able to vote for one ticket

Compare this book, some books are really poorly written

South Africa, KwaZulu, Natal, Commercial Street, a Chinese store manager shot and killed two robbers. A total of 7 people robbed, a shootout broke out, and the store manager called the police (local Chinese police center). True, awesome!

Seeing Danke complaining about his poor grades, the fellow author would like to say a few words. I think he has fallen into a misunderstanding. Repeating himself does not mean that he will get poor grades. Why is he afraid of continuing to write the fish farm series? Do you feel uninspired or do readers just not buy it? If you don't have inspiration, that's it. If you worry about readers not being sold, you really think too much. Readers only care about whether it is good or not, regardless of whether it is repeated or not. For example, Lin Hai has written about football for so many years, such as Dou Po and Wu Dong are similar 😏

I've just finished the book, so I'm here👀 The new Classical Fairy Tale 👏👀Where do the monsters go👏

This crappy book is probably the worst one by the author.

I just saw the news about Sovereignty today, and also saw the videos of the German and French revolutions. I wanted to read a novel to calm my mood, but this book was recommended to me every day. It's not that the book is not good, it's that the mood is too complicated...

I dare not look at it! Stay tuned! I was afraid that I would lose control and finished reading it! I have read every book in Cartridge several times! Except for the Immortal Sect... The Immortal Sect is really...! Hmm~! You know!

To what extent is a novel well-written? There are fan fiction and h-texts. From this point of view, Danke, you are awesome. After all, in this type of novel, your golden fishing ground is the only one where someone writes fan-fiction h-texts. The others are written by some people such as the best servants, the best young masters, etc. So in some respects, your influence is no worse than that of Yu Yan, Feng Huo Xi, and the princes. 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁Come on!

They don't notify you when a new book is released, and they don't encourage it on the official account. If I hadn't searched for your name, I wouldn't have known you had published a new book!

The writing becomes more and more exciting 🤭🤭🤭🤭

Before I knew it, Bulletshell had reached its sixth book, but why couldn't you write the new book promotion after the completion of the previous one? If it hadn't suddenly occurred to you in the middle of the night and I would have taken a look at it, I wouldn't have known you had opened a new book. . . I am keeping abreast of new books, and only vote for recommendations every day. I will read them later when they are fattened up.

North America, Oceania, Asia, Europe, Africa, and by gathering South America and Antarctica, you can summon the dragon and make a wish to farm in another world.

After holding back 500,000 words, I ran out of breath. I felt so empty, lonely, and cold. . .

The author's first book is the best of all, but it's a mess