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The clear flow of entertainment articles! For now, although they are all based on memes that have been circulated for a long time, and occasionally look a bit awkward, they are generally quite creative! As a bookworm, it's still worth reading! Stay tuned
It's okay. I'll write it slowly and give it a few days to read. Cheers, author.
I thought of a novel, I am Liu Xing who has children at home, hehe🤓
A little bit of rants and suggestions
After reading the free chapter, I can't hold back any complaints in my heart. First of all, both the topic selection and the entry point are refreshing, and the writing style is also really good. As for the plot, don't force it on Wen Chao Gong's novel. Personally, I feel that the author's biggest failure lies in character creation. Leaving aside the protagonist for now, Xu An is simply annoying. I can tell that the author wants to write that Xu An and Xu Ping are the kind of relatives who love and kill each other. They usually cheat on you without discussing it, but they will go out of their way to help you at critical moments. But it was obvious that he used too much force. Xu An deliberately made Xu Ping's girlfriend misunderstand that he was cheating on him, which caused Xu Ping's girlfriend to strip Xu Ping naked in a rage and throw him in the hotel. After Xu An did this and learned about Xu Ping's tragic situation, he had no intention of repenting and was very proud. This gives readers the feeling of being ignorant and unmeasured, even the best. Let's talk about Xu An's roommate. I also understand that the author wants to write about a father who loves and protects his children, but will find his way back if he is hurt at all. But this idea of revenge is really weird. Do you think that a father who loves his children and takes the initiative to open a company to protect them from being polluted by the entertainment industry actually comes up with a way to cause trouble for his roommates by going into battle himself and taking the initiative to make trouble, and he also takes the initiative to tell his daughter about this method that we think is despicable and even dirty? The characters are obviously contradictory. No need, really no need, just forward the pictures sent by her roommate to her roommate's sponsor father, which will definitely be enough for her to drink. The same goes for what follows. You yourself teach your son to pay attention to his behavior in the entertainment industry, don't go around flirting with women, and in the blink of an eye you are discussing acting skills with an actress in a hotel room... Isn't this giving excuses to the paparazzi? What makes me most tired is that the protagonist always responds passively, and the routine has always been: There is trouble online ↣ The protagonist thinks the problem is not big and ignores it ↣ Makes the problem big ↣ Issues a statement ↣ Conflict ↣ Slap in the face From the perspective of plot rationality, the entire public relations department is in name only. The protagonist is also clearly not thinking long term. In the later stage, it is very likely that the plot will be driven by the villain seeking death, and then the protagonist will be slapped in the face. From the perspective of writing techniques, the slap in the face is not smooth enough, and the writing routine is a bit serious. I personally recommend assigning a tool person to the protagonist, who is mainly responsible for holding the protagonist before he performs any intelligence-reducing operation. To be fair, the protagonist's character is very pleasing to the plot, and he is very suitable for fighting against the villain, and this conflict is a very natural development of the plot. An old salty fish who cares about his children. He loves his children, so he will fight back if others hurt his children. But at the same time, he is an old salty fish and will not focus on one thing for a long time. Giving up halfway is his normal operation, so the villain can take advantage of his salty fish period to find trouble for him. But there is no conflict between salted fish and foresight. The author has also written about the insightful side of the protagonist before. As long as the author does not deliberately perform some zz operations for the sake of writing, I believe that the results will get better and better.
Do you want to take a photo in the name of the people?
The main character doesn't look like he's in his 40s, he's clearly in his 20s.
Friends who have the ability, please support me. There are more than 7,000 collections, and only 140 first orders, not to mention the others, are really miserable. If you calculate this way, you may not have 200 yuan a month. I am too tired. I originally thought I would be able to code five or six chapters during today's holiday, but seeing this result, I really can't do it anymore. Don't worry, I don't know how to be a eunuch, I will definitely continue to write. I just hope that everyone can support me a little more. I am grateful, thank you! ! !
A few words from my heart
The author's imagination and writing fluency are quite good, but I have to say that the topic selection at the beginning is really a mistake, it is too poisonous! It's been 9102 years, and I don't believe there are still people who don't know that I plagiarized the entire article in AiPiZi... For some people, this matter may not be that serious. I guess the author didn't mean it, but just didn't care that much. On the matter of anti-plagiarism, I don't mean to be arrogant or anything like that, but I would like to remind you that you, the author, are also a creator now. I think the harm caused by plagiarism to creators no longer needs anyone to say anything. Others can ignore it, but as a creator, shouting for plagiarism and plagiarized works is tantamount to digging your own grave. That's all, I hope the author can keep up the good work and look forward to your next work.
I always thought this book was about a family with children.
Thinking of a family with children: My name is Xia Xue, my name is Xia Yu, my name is Xia Binghai~
What are you writing? I want to see your son? What I want to see is the awesome pig's feet
After all, it's a good book, so leave something behind. The biggest shortcoming is that the protagonist is over 40 years old and has a son and daughter in college. Maybe the author is of this age, so there is such a setting, but you have to know that most of the readers are young people, and even a large proportion of students are students. How can you make readers feel a sense of involvement when you have a protagonist in their 40s? You said that no matter how handsome the protagonist is, he is still 40 years old and has children. Are you going to read it on behalf of your children? If you have a chance, I will drop this book and re-open it. The other aspects of the writing are okay and not toxic. Seriously write a story about a young man who travels to another world to join the entertainment industry. I guarantee that the results will be good.
Although the plot is a bit inconsistent, I can still read it. The summary is that despite its shortcomings, there are still bright spots. Many people complain that the protagonist is too old. Just go and read the elderly superstars and you will know. The age of the protagonist in this book is not bad.
I thought it was a fanfic of (Family with Children).
I am so excited watching it, so you are calling me a eunuch! ! !
I took advantage of the meal time after get off work to go back to the dormitory to have a few words.
First of all, about the issue of "Love Apartment". Many book friends say that writing about "Love Apartment" will persuade you to quit. I would like to explain it to you here. To be honest, I didn't think much about it at first. I just thought that the show was low-cost and didn't have high requirements for location, director, and actors, so it was a good start. Plus, I liked it very much, had watched it several times, and was familiar with it, so I wrote it. I really didn't expect that people would be so resistant to it, so I can only say sorry. But I want to make it clear that this is an entertainment novel, not a love apartment fanfic. The love apartment part was finished quickly. You can read the rest. After all, we can't flip the table just because we don't like a dish, right? The second thing to note is the issue of updates. Since I am not a full-time employee, I might starve to death. Now I work 12 hours a day, every day, and there is no such thing as weekend breaks. After all, who would be willing to take a break on weekends with twice the salary? Apart from eating, drinking and sleeping, I can only squeeze out at most 5 or 6 hours after get off work every day. Plus, I am a handicapped person, so two shifts is already the limit. Sometimes neither update can be done, like today. I came back from get off work in the morning and wrote an update. It was already 11 o'clock after revising it. I planned to take a nap and get up at 4 o'clock to update another update. The alarm clock was set, but I was too tired and fell asleep so deeply that my roommate woke me up. Then my roommate turned off my alarm clock. As soon as I woke up, I was almost late. Naturally, I didn't have time to update the second chapter. I can only say sorry to everyone here. But don't worry, no matter how busy I am, I will never be a eunuch. After all, I really want to make writing novels my career. If my grades in the later period are acceptable and I can support myself, I will quit my job and concentrate on writing novels. The reason is also very simple. I can't see the future in my current job, but a novel writer can at least dream of earning a million dollars a month. Okay, 1:30 is almost here, I should go to work. I would like to thank those who vote for me every day. Some people vote for more than a dozen at a time. I feel like I am being taken care of. There are too many people, and some people's names are particularly difficult to type. I won't name them one by one. I would like to express my gratitude this time and thank you for your support. Finally, I would like to ask for recommendations, collections and investments here, thank you all.
Snake spirit disease, you can read whatever the author writes. If you like, read it. If you don't want to read it, just leave it alone.
It's too miserable for you, your collection is so small. It's very well written, why do so few people read it?
Have a good rest and see you again later.
Doesn't anyone think that Zhang Guangyuan will end up being a young man? Why do I think he will rebel in the end?
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Which piece of garbage competes with Langya Bang? ? There is still pressure in Nirvana in Fire. Unless the actors and directors are not good, where will the pressure come from? If you compete with Nirvana in Fire, you can only suppress it with a sword.
The first few chapters are okay, but the plot behind it is too confusing.
I also thought about reading it after a while, hoping to gain some weight, but who would have thought that it would stop updating?
I found it quite enjoyable. The protagonist's temper is really to my liking The real entertainment industry is really mean. But there is really no way to change this phenomenon. After all, public opinion generated by rumors is indeed more attractive than rigorous clarifications.
I feel like your lack of subscriptions may mean your writing is too flat. Mainly because there is no outstanding female protagonist.
In fact, you can work part-time for a lot of time. Find some jobs that have a fixed eight hours. It's more relaxed and you don't have to make too much, so you can have time to write novels.