Hongguoji

[Vicious Tongue Book Review] I am an unusually poisonous tongue, so I ask the author to be very prepared. 1. First impression The title and cover of the book are both flawless, so skip it. 2. Introduction Finally I met a person whose introduction is not lengthy, which is very nice. Simple and clear without procrastination. 3. The first three chapters This opening chapter wiped out all the goodwill I had accumulated. What is the author trying to do by describing it in paragraphs? Ning not only describes it in paragraphs, but also does not divide it into paragraphs. Ning's segmentation is by far the biggest problem I've had. I recommend Ning to watch Xianting Luohua's "Nuan Jun", which has very strong segmentation skills. Avoid describing in paragraphs at the beginning of the article. Rather, describing in paragraphs like this consumes the reader's patience. And I personally think that Ning's description could be more concise and concise. The description serves the story, not the description takes over. In terms of plot, I saw that Ning's works are divided into ancient romance and classical fiction. In the second chapter, "Blue eyes are like shooting out needles"??? Isn't this an ancient proverb? Why are there blue eyes and orange hair? Is Ning writing about the goddess of ancient law? It's very dramatic. In addition, I think the label Ning refers to tactics. I don't know whether to go in the direction of a serious drama or not. If it were a serious drama, logically it would not be particularly suitable for a princess to inherit the throne. 4. Writing style Ning's writing style is indeed good, but please don't write for yourself. Appropriate description is the icing on the cake. If there are too many, it becomes cumbersome. Ning's description should be reduced appropriately and could be more concise. Generally speaking, too much description and paragraphs are shortcomings. The author please hold back your venomous tongue and hit me. ——Cheng Yici

Next week's book list "The Starting Point Masterpiece" is recommended for one week, please don't stop updating, author, come on!

The writing is okay, the writing style is okay, but the male protagonist needs to grow up. Although he has flaws, he can understand it. Come on, author, it's not easy.

Faster and faster to catch up with the progress 😁

I didn't expect that I could write so much about how powerful I am.

Keep working hard and success belongs to you!

Subscribe to a dozen chapters and read it to see if the author is good at it. He is definitely better than me anyway.

It looks pretty good. The author should work hard to improve it🌹🌹

Come on come on! Deep support~😁

I can't stop watching it, waiting for updates

How can I say that, the plot is acceptable, the shortcomings are at the climax, most people who read books now like this, I don't blame you

It's coming~😍😍😍 I think the writing is very attractive, I'm sure to follow it!

The sauce is bubbling, a cup of milk tea, hot popcorn, crispy snow cakes, raisins, and a small bench in the front row to read a big book ~ By the way, please visit each other ^_^

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

I just said something was weird, and after looking at it for a long time, I realized that it is rare to see girls picking up characters...

The author of Fire Tiger is invited to come and read it and vote for it 🙂

I forgot yesterday, I will make up more tomorrow 🙂

Congratulations on the launch, good luck to you~ Come on!

Wow, are all female channel books so awesome? More than fifty chapters are on the shelves👯👯👯👯

Received There are no tickets today, I will come back tomorrow Let's try new tea with new fire, poetry and wine take advantage of the youth. I wish your writing will improve by leaps and bounds I wish you a prosperous writing career A house full of flowers and three thousand guests, a sword that frosts fourteen states Don't forget the last thing, please take a look at my works Boss, if you support a ticket, you will definitely be dripping with tears.

It's fast enough, 890,000, so work hard!

It's over, should I continue to invest here? There is still a new book, please tell me the title of the new book