In Fact, She Knows Everything

After reading it today, I think it is better not to write the dialogue as it is now. It is better to write a carriage return. Now the dialogue does not feel good to read without line breaks (in my personal opinion).

I took a look... It's quite interesting so far. I'll save it for observation. Come on, author! D(`･∀･)b! However, I suggest you change the punctuation... Where there should be a period, there are so many...,,,,,,, It makes people a little tired~