Interstellar Star Sea Endless

The writing is too poor, and there is no way to develop the story well. Even at the beginning, the structure of the world is unclear, and there are many character problems. According to the chapters I have read, the heroine was nearly 30 years old before she traveled through time. Is a 30-year-old woman so childish? There are differences in behavior and thinking at different ages. It's not that you can't be confused, but that as an adult soul, the heroine is too dependent on others. Personality is not something that can be said, it is comprehensively reflected in all aspects of behavior and ability. There are also various repetitive and meaningless emphatic descriptions, and old-fashioned biography-style forced spoilers, which make this book quite difficult to read. There is a setting that is very attractive, but it makes me feel boring when I read it. The repeated inner drama can fill a whole chapter, and the story does not progress smoothly. Compared to another interstellar novel I read, it's not easy to be a man. The gap is too big. It's almost the same type. Although many settings are quite middle-grade, it reads very smoothly. I really recommend that the author streamline the writing, improve the character design, and make many details more reasonable and smooth. Third-person novels describe the story, not the protagonist. The protagonist is shown through the story, rather than using inner drama to construct the protagonist and then insert it into the story.

The writing is really good. The author has his own ideas and worldview. The female protagonist is also very good. I like articles like this, but I feel that the female villains written by the author are all a bit stereotyped and feel the same. I hope the author can write more personalized characters in the future. Overall, this novel is really good. I hope the author will continue to work hard (ง •̀_•́)ง

The concept is good, and the article seems to work, but there are too many sworn words piled between the lines, which is not relevant and I can't read it.

It really feels like a running account when reading, and the concept is really great! But the language makes it impossible for me to read!

Authors can write stories about smart people among ordinary people, such as stories about time-travelers about farming or about making a fortune. The author has the feelings of a literary youth (a slightly less cultural literacy of a literary youth, can he learn more poetry?), And he can write love stories with a heavy emphasis on romance! However, the author still writes less articles about big guys, because the author has a weak character and heart, and does not have the heart to be strong! Top geniuses may not be easy to fight, or they may be quiet and focus on their own hobbies, or they may avoid interacting with others because they are far more intelligent than ordinary people, or they may have a peaceful mind and not compare themselves with others, or they may be temporarily weak and avoid the sharp edge of their enemies! But if these top geniuses have a normal mentality, they will have strong self-confidence! Proud and unwilling to admit defeat! A strong heart! He may not attack the opponent, he may temporarily avoid the enemy, but it is absolutely impossible for him to pray that he will not encounter the enemy for the rest of his life, and to avoid the enemy for the rest of his life! Cheating yourself to live in the spirit of Ah Q! The self-esteem and self-confidence of geniuses will make them continue to work hard and firmly believe that they will stand upright in front of the enemy, making the enemy fear and even avoid them! ! ! What I wrote may not be expressive (but there is absolutely no malice). In short, I just want to say that a truly strong person not only has talent and superb skills, but also has a strong heart (not admitting defeat, strong and confident)! You can judge the situation and avoid the sharp edge temporarily, but you can never think about hiding for the rest of your life (Ah Q spirit: I am not hiding, I just don't provoke the other party)!

The setting is very good, but the sense of immersion in this article is not good. It is always verbose in irrelevant places, and the grand points that should be written are not written.

The story at the beginning is quite attractive, but the writing is too weak later on.

With good ideas and delicate emotional stories, female channel novels are different. Even hard science fiction is full of tenderness.

I'm here to try the poison. It's well written. Although the plot is a bit flat at the beginning, it becomes more and more interesting as you read later. The story has a complete structure, rich characters, and comprehensive scene descriptions. The pace is a little slow, but as you continue to watch the plot, the sense of immersion will gradually strengthen. Thank you so much for letting me try the poison, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

I've read more than 60 chapters, and the author's writing style is so literary. The combat description can be studied again. 20 Moves or 30 moves, the description is weak. The dialogue between the characters is too polite (personal feeling, if the setting is a polite environment, just pretend I didn't say it), and the changes in the mental state are a little bit, and the writing power is not enough. For example, in Star Wars, the protagonists suddenly had a change in their thinking after watching the video. What exactly they saw shocked their souls. This is just the author telling readers, oh, the protagonist here is more motivated. But I, as a reader, cannot empathize. It just feels stiff. I'm sorry for my harsh words. I hope the author can improve to a higher level. I hope a good story matches good writing. Will continue to support.

Looking for answers After reading the previous posts, the heroine always mentioned that person. I would like to ask if the heroine loved one person very much in her previous life. The meaning of living is for one person. Her life in the previous life also revolved around one person and she did not have a life of her own. Is that true?

Answer: This novel was first published on Qidian. Com. The number of readers here in the bookstore gradually increased after this book had a million words, so the reviews so far are pitiful. In fact, there are few on any platform. It may also be that after reading it, everyone felt that the article had too many flaws, or that there was nothing wrong with it (allow me to be narcissistic, haha). I think the most likely reason is myself. In fact, there are many shortcomings, and I am aware of them. There was still a month in between because of the current coding, so there were a lot of typos. I am currently saving the manuscript stably, and I will work hard to come up with ideas and try to avoid typos. Thank you to the lovely readers on all platforms. I have received everyone's affirmation and the unreasonable points pointed out and made adjustments. I read every one of your comments carefully. I am very touched when I receive your comments. I am a person who is easily satisfied. Don't worry, little cuties, this story is what I have always wanted to write, and I will finish it seriously. According to the previous outline, I will try my best to write this bright world as it is in my mind. I wish you all good luck, peace, happiness, good health, and delicious food. Finally, everyone is welcome to tease~ Forcibly, a hundred, hee hee.

The concept is very good, but the text always makes me feel uncomfortable when reading it, and I can't lift my spirits. It's too literary and contains too many spoilers. I'm not good at expressing myself. In short, it makes people read without excitement. The plot that should be exciting always seems to be mediocre.

The author's writing is quite good, but there is one thing. When explaining one thing, he will explain it repeatedly later, which seems very wordy.

It's well written, a bit slow, but it's suitable for me to read, so I'll read it slowly! ! !

This interstellar novel has a different style, and I look forward to continuing to read it.

The names of the male and female protagonists look like the protagonists of Korean dramas (ethical dramas) 😂

Is this really the trick? . The person named Ye who longed for marriage did not come to fruition and turned out to be the male protagonist. . Why. . I really am not suitable for watching movies with male protagonists. .

The plot concept is good, but some parts are always too literary, which is inexplicably inappropriate with interstellar literature, and from time to time it is literary and artistic, but the readability is not that high. In special scenes, literary arts add color, if you just say something literary or read a poem, it is not interstellar, it is back to a thousand years ago...

Fine. Indeed, compared with those exquisitely designed articles, the text is a bit more casual. But I can feel that the author was quite happy writing it.

Yes, it's a pity that the female supporting character is written in such a bad way. Both her parents are Alliance generals and have good family backgrounds. At least there should be no functional training for the female supporting character. It would be too low for the male protagonist to always bully the female supporting character, but you can write a new book, such as a new book about the female supporting character counterattacking or something. But the vastness of the interstellar space written by the author is very picturesque, beautiful and good!

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Congratulations to the author Bacteria! Take care of yourself! I wish you a good baby and good luck to the author! Also, is the due date in October the National Day month? Is it a Libra baby? Health is the most important, everything else comes second. There is no rush to update, I am saving it for the time being, hahaha The expectant mother and the baby should eat well, sleep well and be energetic🌹

Congratulations on the completion🌹 Smooth, healthy and happy author🌹

In the first three pictures, the protagonist didn't even appear. . Accepted

In which chapter do the male and female protagonists recognize people from their previous lives?

I accidentally voted out all the votes today. You don't need to vote for me today. You can vote tomorrow 😭

The author writes slowly when he has time, and finishes the book when he feels it is ready. When you finish something, no matter what the result is, you will feel a sense of accomplishment.

Let me ask, does the male protagonist have many roles? Are there a lot of emotional scenes? Feeling aggrieved? There are too many emotional dramas so I won't watch them.

Fei Fei said he owed you four votes today, and the operations officer and I will make up for it.