Taoist Xu Hong

After reading more than 20 chapters, I can't read and the plot is confusing.

I have recommended it every day since I was qualified to recommend it. I am willing to use my meager strength to increase the motivation to continue writing! Come on, support you! !

Have you read the author's book yourself? To be honest, what is it writing? The more I read it, the more awkward it becomes. Also, you are too obsessed with data. At most, you write data three times in one chapter. Is it necessary to be so stupid?

I like this book. It feels very warm and enjoyable. I must recommend it!

🙂I hope you can continue to do so~ 🌹 🌹

Well! I won't mention the word count. Maybe I have little cultural knowledge and can't understand what the protagonist is doing. What does the author want to express?

Don't watch it anymore, the protagonist has a brain problem, so he needs to improve his cooking skills first. I also know that the world is cruel but I still have no control over it, and my appetite is more important than death. 🐮Leather

I'm exhausted, so I'll change the map. It's an old routine. If you can't continue writing, just change the map and rewrite it. It's uncomfortable to watch. Keep it! ! !

The protagonist always plays the role of soy sauce

The writing is messy, some characters are not introduced, and various relationships are not clearly written. I was fascinated by it. Author, you might as well not write anything and let the readers make up their own minds. After looking at it for a long time, I didn't react. Who wants to accept me as my apprentice? You might as well classify it into the suspense category.

I, x, the author, can you slow down a little bit? It's so hard to find this book, it's so slow.

The glass beads in the little girl's hand should not be that simple. I look forward to what changes will happen later.

Lu Renwu came to visit with the most powerful Xianyu Wangte. A few days ago, he had met the first and second strongest men on the Xuanyi list. Now, I have also used Qian's magic to reach the seventh place on the Xuanyi list. Today, Jin Xuanyi's list has changed, and the second place has actually entered the list of heavenly beings, which is incredible... I see that your martial arts skills are very high in the starting hand, and the moves are executed in a decent manner, but there is a little awkwardness in that the spirit and names of the moves are a little messy. I am outspoken, and I hope you don't care, because if you care, I can't help you, so let's fight each other if you don't accept it. Hahahahahahaha~

The front is okay, but the back is a mess.

It has been added to the bookshelf, welcome to visit again.

I like this writing style, especially the cultural background setting and cultivation process. I have both reference and my own creativity. The slap in the face is also lively. The author please check it in time before posting to see if there are any typos.

Read the book and support the masterpiece.

The main character's personality is so unlikeable. The writing also feels weird! It slipped away.

What are you writing about, nothing exciting