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If you have to fight to the death, it's better to slap you in the face with pretentiousness. You are so stupid, it reminds me of the book "I'm a Super Star" (the writing is not as good as a water fish). Forget it, let's read it again.
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Does this count as a door-to-door son-in-law? Does this author lack common sense or is it because of different customs? Whose surname does the child have? Is the mother's family's attitude particularly strong when they get married? None. How can this be a door-to-door son-in-law?
To be honest, the author must have written the first three chapters himself, which directly dissuades a large number of readers. The first is the character. If he can be driven to depression, then the original owner must be living a bad life on his wife's side. The protagonist's spirit has passed away, so if there is a systematic situation, isn't it possible to divorce and go home? Anyway, isn't it said that "the parents are strongly opposed"? That proves that there are parents. Also, when the wife and father were sick, they said they wanted grandchildren, so they got married in a hurry, but now that the wife is famous and can have children? So do you want to take over or continue to stay in this emotionless home? We read cool stories and you are allowed to suppress first and then improve, but don't let the protagonist whose IQ cannot be saved even by the system, poison people to death. Also, in the third chapter, sexually suggestive words such as "no ambition", "can't hold it with one hand", "someday" and "noodles" are too vulgar. It's not that you're not allowed to drive, but the cars written by others are just enough to make you laugh. This chapter felt like it was copied mechanically, like driving on a muddy road. I couldn't laugh, I almost vomited. If the writing had been better, "Driving" wouldn't have seemed vulgar, but instead would have been a tacitly funny thing. The few chapters written by the author gave me the impression that they were impulsive articles, articles with poor writing style. How did this kind of book get published in Sanjiang? The quality is so bad. Is there any py deal with the editor? In addition, authors who write novels seriously are very worthy of respect. If the author of this book is also serious about writing novels, then first of all, I would like to say: I'm sorry, but please work hard to practice your writing skills and think about what you are writing novels about: character, plot, and writing style. The requirements for writing a cool article are not too high: it conforms to the three views, the plot logic is decent, and the sentences are smooth and basically not toxic. In addition, to borrow the words of some readers I have read: the protagonist's IQ represents the author's IQ. Let me add one more thing, unless the character requires it, the protagonist's three views are basically the author's three views.
To be honest, Qingqing, didn't Yang Chaoyue just cry? Is there anything outstanding about gaining sympathy? There are many people who are prettier than him.
Completely indifferent? I can't stand it! Maybe not my cup of tea! You said you married into a married woman? ! Have you considered your parents' feelings? And what did your wife do for you? Are they all from your wife's family? What about your home? Did your parents raise you like that? Rural? So it means waking up early and working late at night to support you until you grow up? I haven't seen you write anything about the hero's family until now? ! This kind of character is completely unfeeling! Is there a system that makes you stay at your wife's house like this? ! All I can say is that the male protagonist is worse than that! Never mind! Don't watch it, it's not suitable for me! It really doesn't matter if you get married! But if your parents who support you can't even understand it, then I can't figure it out!
The protagonist's background is not clearly introduced. The son-in-law's family must not be very wealthy. When he makes money, shouldn't he think of his parents first? I have been watching the main character making love to his sister-in-law Niwai and his wife. Do you think everyone likes to watch this kind of main character?
The first two chapters of this novel are so poisonous that even Shen Nong cannot bear it. The protagonist's predecessors were all forced to death by this family, and they didn't want to be treated like licking dogs. And the protagonist traveled back in time and said, "Isn't it delicious for him to be a soft rice?" Isn't it delicious to lick a dog? It makes people vomit blood and whitewashes the family like crazy. It makes people vomit blood. I wonder if there will be a twist later. I can't bear it anymore. Goodbye.
Author, you are so poisonous. You went to Fudan University to be a door-to-door son-in-law, and you are still so miserable. This is a very poisonous beginning.
After reading the introduction, does the author have any misunderstandings about the term Hua Dan? At the very least, Huadan refers to those who act. No matter how the meaning of the word changes, it can't be applied to a handsome idol with no film and television achievements and not even music achievements worth mentioning, right?
The author's writing is good, but as a straight man, I still left. I'm sorry that the book shortage can't make me let go of my dignity.
Sanjiang is in such a bad state...
It doesn't make you vomit, it's really poisonous. The author himself writes inconsistently. I suggest that it would be better to change the beginning of the book. Deep Love and Responsibility. The subject matter of this book is not bad. It's just that the beginning is very toxic. At the beginning, the author explained that the reason for time travel was because the previous owner died of depression. If there was someone in Shan Fan's family who cared about the original owner, he would not have become depressed. He was very friendly with his sister-in-law right after time travel, and even flirted with his wife. With such a relationship, could the original owner become depressed and ill? See Chapter 6: Killed in Action. 😐
After reading the beginning, all I can say is, can you still have feelings after time travel without getting divorced? It still fell on this tree, which is hard to watch. I guess I will be shocked and slapped in the face from now on...
Never call yourself Brother Xuan on formal occasions, as this will make you very unpopular. Fans said yes, when did Andy Lau introduce himself as Brother Hua? You might as well call me Xuanzi, neither close nor a stranger, for your future consideration. I can't be on the show anymore. The host introduced: This is Brother Xuan. How old are you? Are there any anchors who call themselves brother now?
Let me mention some bugs to the author here 1: It only took a netizen one day to find the brother-in-law (male protagonist) from his sister's live broadcast room. It wouldn't take more than a few days for the female protagonist's identity to be exposed. This kind of thing is easy to get cheated 2 It has been said before that the male protagonist is a brother-in-law (at least fans in the live broadcast room know it), that is, he has a wife. He is also flirting with the female protagonist in the show. Will the fans say that the male protagonist is a scumbag without knowing it? You also said in your article that fans say they are talented and beautiful. Shouldn't we scold the male protagonist when we don't know their relationship? After all, how can a one-month internet celebrity compare with the traffic of a legitimate celebrity? I'm just saying that if you are a big fan of the author, please don't criticize me.
The introduction persuades you to quit, and transcending it can be considered very popular? Hehe
Seeing that 80% of the book reviews are trolls, I feel relieved, haha 😁
I also gave gifts to live broadcasts. But I want to say that those who ask fans for gifts are not good people.
What age is it? I don't even bother to look at this introduction list.