From a Civil Servant to a Continent-Wide Superstar

After reading more than 40 chapters, I found that the setting of the novel is actually very good, but the protagonist is poorly portrayed. He is greedy for money and has no plan for doing things. It is useless for the system to worry about him and force him to make progress. Then the author has no priority, no focus, and it looks quite confusing. There is a novel and a music. Either the music serves the novel, or the novel adds color to the music, and it can also be linked to increase the feeling of pleasure. The protagonist is not motivated and greedy for money. It is really too poisonous. In this kind of world, you don't want to write to become stronger, but always think about making money, 눈_눈

Well, I only read the first few hundred chapters and it feels good. Come and support me! The imagination is not bad, the shelves are relatively large, and I can feel that the author wants to write a relatively grand world view. Judging from the title of the novel, he wants to write a genre that is in full bloom. Secondly, the protagonist is as his name suggests, he is very cowardly, very interesting, and The protagonist is very caring, and I can see the progress of the protagonist, but the progress in mentality is not obvious, at least not as good as the progress in strength. I don't know if this is because the author is digging a hole. For example, the protagonist will stumble here (a touch of regret and tragedy will make people impressed!). The story lines of the supporting characters gradually unfold, and the characters gradually become fleshed out. In fact, compared to the protagonist, I am more looking forward to the love-hate stories between the diverse supporting characters. There are many small foreshadowings from the past that are easy to forget. The map is changed too frequently, and it feels like the protagonist is always running around, just like the feeling of a novice online game character running around taking tasks. You can dig more into the small stories of each map to enrich the supporting roles. The sense of history in the story is also great. The thousands of years of history of the novel world revealed through just a few words are exciting. Also, will Tiandao. Com and Yaoshen. Com interact with each other in the end? I'm waiting for the day when my vest will explode! I don't know the use of the Internet for entertainment. There must be other uses that I haven't seen yet. Come on ↖(^ω^)↗ Overall, this is a novel worth looking forward to. Looking forward to the update (⊙o⊙)!

The protagonist is an ordinary person, and there are two golden fingers. One is the world rules (Alaya), which is similar to the setting of literary style. However, this development is too one-sided. It can also be developed into a station b mode later. It is currently just a starting point mode. . . . The income is that Alaya's credit points will feel better, an alternative gold standard. . The other is an auxiliary, which directly digs out everything the protagonist has read verbatim (memory digger?)... There is also the concept of limited memory loans or charges. This cheat can be used to hide the protagonist. . . Maybe it's the consciousness of a certain big boss, and the protagonist is invited to experiment in this world with strange rules, which is the development of the big boss. . . After reading three chapters, there are not many bad points. The author is also very diligent and can correct errors and loopholes, which is very good. . . . Let me guess the later development - knowledge recognition in this world is profit. The protagonist is the principal in the early stage of copying books, and in the later stage, he can start to transform the beautiful new world. After all, industry will prosper the country, and you can get the greatest benefits by realizing the ideas recognized by the world in reality. This world is like an embryo. The born baby will be able to be self-reliant after repaying its debts, and by the way, it can also improve the essence of the placenta... One: You can learn from the setting of the Tower of Babel, create a reincarnation world, produce and sell it yourself Two: Go to other worlds to exchange rules, one belt, one road or something, a win-win situation Three: The collision of wisdom can improve the nature of your world Four: The boss is very satisfied with the experiment,...... I can't make it up anymore. ?

To be honest, the subject matter of this novel is very novel and very good. Even in the first 50 chapters, I thought this book could be regarded as a god as long as it is not broken, but at least it can be regarded as a masterpiece. But the more it goes on, the more I feel that I can't stand it anymore. The protagonist's way of thinking always feels abnormal, very silly, very silly, I don't ask you to write that the protagonist is very smart and upright, but after reading more than 60 chapters, the protagonist is still very naive and greedy for money. I really don't understand why the author can only write about this kind of person in his image creation. Even if you write about a righteous middle-school boy with an online IQ who has gone through nine years of compulsory education, it won't seem like you are insulting his IQ. Or people who have been tempered by society and know how to seek the best interests for themselves will do.

This monthly ticket looks like a fake. Shuangwen didn't notice it. The character feels a little low in IQ, which is too uncomfortable.

Deminers report! The subject matter of the novel is quite novel, and I didn't go to bed until 3:30 in the morning after reading it. The following are some of the bigger poisonous points. Firstly, the character of the protagonist is probably a bit too much to describe as shit. At best, it can be considered a pile of rubbish. The second is a plot, it is said that an internet celebrity is sick and needs the heart of a god to save her, and the protagonist has this ability. Then the following plot can probably be guessed. The hearts of three gods who could protect mankind are exchanged for the life of an Internet celebrity. I can only say, Ning is awesome!

Just write a novel well. As mentioned earlier, novels are the most important thing about Tiandi. Com. As a result, the music game must be developed. I find that this is the case for all novels written in the Wenzonggong genre. I'll give you a little bit of all kinds of mess. Make the protagonist omnipotent. My balls hurt when I see it. Died by poisoning. The most important thing is that this kind of author doesn't read book reviews, and is totally enjoying himself. He will wait until later to read a new book and try it again. Poison poison poison

I have to say mmp, since you, the author, have decided to have only one female protagonist, you should not write emotional scenes with other female supporting characters. This makes you very unhappy.

I haven't read the book, I just want to ask, why is this book on the suspense ranking?

If you don't like a single heroine, so be it! If the heroine is written to death, this book can go from a 2 to a 6.

How many people still remember that the protagonist has a system, but how many chapters has this system been hidden?

Plagiarism for the rise of the human race! (Manual funny)

This book is so complicated that I don't even know what the author wants to say. I want to talk about it face to face, but it falls behind.

To put it simply, what the hell is written at the end 😅

Too lazy to read the original version, but I can reward you

The creativity is good but the writing is poor. The protagonist is very unlikable. If you are bored to pass the time, you can scroll and take a look ~

There are still many more chapters to be written for Wenzhao Gong. Why did you just say it was unfinished? I have been chasing Wen Chao Gong since the beginning. I didn't expect that in the end, you lost your relaxed and cheerful writing style, and the climax was not made to feel passionate. It made me feel like this It would be nice if the story can end, but it should never end. The feelings of family and country, the warmth and warmth of people, the writing made me feel that this story has lost its original intention and will never come back. It made me feel that my subscription point was inexplicable, disappointing and pity

This book has the potential to become a god, so please give it to the author＾0＾~

I hope the author will continue to work hard and not be influenced by book reviews. I have seen too many authors fail because their book reviews blindly cater to readers' tastes. Book reviews can be used as a reference, but they still have to focus on their own outlines.

I already have a premonition that this book will be the best in Sanjiang. It's good to read. I'll update it soon.

This kind of slutty heroine is really drunk. There are only five gods in the human race to protect the safety of the human race. The heroine needs a heart from a god to live, and a heart from a god can only live for one year. Why does the protagonist depend on this woman? The existence of this woman is a scourge that destroys human beings. For this scourge, the protagonist gave her a heart when the human god Guili gave her a heart, and when it disappeared into ashes, he did not want to see it. He created a god to give her a heart, and then disappeared into ashes, and then kept repeating. This kind of woman should be humanely destroyed And this protagonist, the structure is too small, only seeking profit, and has no ability, low vision, giving me a feeling of extreme inferiority.

I just read this book and I think it is very creative and the protagonist has a good personality. It's just that sometimes it's a bit awkward to advance the plot, and as a cool novel, I often feel like I'm about to reach the climax and then hold back, which is quite uncomfortable when I can't get up or down. . The most obvious part is the part where the protagonist is trying to make money and ends up standing under a dangerous wall. I saw a lot of people criticizing it, which I also found quite embarrassing. There are many solutions, such as adding system skills, for example, you can have multiple clones (similar to the Zhaotian Gang, the strongest anti-routine system), or you can directly disguise yourself, or you can create another online name when you reach a certain amount of money, you can also imitate Tiandao to send messages to the entire network, etc. . This book is mainly a light-hearted novel, and the protagonist could be a little more flirtatious. I feel that the protagonist is too small now, and it is a bit embarrassing to insist on money. . Personal suggestion, I hope the author can see it.

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Twenty chapters ago, it was a fairy grass, and then it turned into a poisonous weed.

After reading more than 30 chapters, I just can't stand it any longer. Can the author come up with an incident to raise the IQ of this lousy protagonist? Wouldn't it be bad to compromise such a good idea with the character of the protagonist? Don't ask the protagonist to kill decisively, just write like a normal person. The protagonist in your story looks like a retard. They all want this and are afraid of that. Looking frustrated. I wonder which reader will come back and spend money to find trouble. If you really don't ask for anything else, you can write about your interactions with the person in charge. Stop being afraid of this or that. There are many themes like Wenzhao Gong. Take a look at how the character of the protagonist is set and changed. Doesn't it smell good?

Nine recommendations every day, others have to add more, I remain silent

Shennong's Test of Poison: The creativity of this book is indeed pretty good, but other than that, it's really hard to complain... (I read it on other genuine free channels, so don't talk about fan value) 1. Zhuxian, God's Tomb and Zhetian are just classics in the past, but what the heck did they choose in the end, Confucianism, Taoism and the Great Monkey. There is no Journey to the West, so I just wrote The Legend of Wukong and The Big Monkey. I don't know how to express it. Damn it 🤫🤫 2. Now there is a routine where the villain cannot be killed. The protagonist turns against his good friend, and the villain accepts him as his disciple, and then they fight 3. Introduction A single female protagonist was chosen, and then... The protagonist and his best friend turned against each other because of the second female protagonist. The second female protagonist liked the male protagonist, and the best friend was so angry that he wanted to kill the male protagonist. He also spent a lot of time describing the female protagonist's feelings, but in the end he refused to accept it 4. Xiaoxi turned from a young girl into a little girl. Is the protagonist really raising her as a daughter? Since it's a single heroine, don't engage in these things. Just ask whether you will accept it in the end? It really disgusts readers

What is the difference between a bad novel and a eunuch novel?

Booked them all, the book is good, but not enough. A monthly vote is required. Not fine?

I just looked at the previous point and saw that I actually wanted to live for a year with the heart of God. I didn't want to look at it for a moment. Such a person has never been destroyed by humanity. Just like a country has several nuclear weapons (which will be consumed, and it is not certain whether there will be any in the future) to protect the country. If someone wants to use one to keep a person alive for a year, see if it will be humanely destroyed by everyone. Even the emperors in the feudal period would be humanely destroyed, while the leaders in the slave period were only likely to survive. That means he dares to think, not dare to say, let alone do, so the author dares to let others say it.