Daily Life in Another World in the Chinese Comic System

It's too poisonous, you're told to quit at the beginning, there's a lot of text with all kinds of emojis, there's no paragraphing, and the system is so disgusting!

The writing style is a bit immature. It looks like a new author at first glance. He doesn't know how to write. It's too compact.

Is Douluo Dalu also worthy of being called a national comic? I smiled and left

I was persuaded to quit at the beginning, so let's just give him a girl at the beginning. The protagonist's martial arts spirits are all powerful? ? ? This was a routine from a few years ago.

The writing is too young, and even Douluo Continent does not even write about your soul ring. You just play ball, and there is also a plot. There are not many plots that readers want to read. Overall, this is a novel for practicing writing.

After reading the first few chapters, I feel that the protagonist's personality is a little bit different, and there are too many expressions. Appropriate expressions can appear in the right places. If there are too many, it will be a bit annoying. One of the biggest problems is the problem of the system. If it is a tool system, it is fine, but a system with its own thoughts, especially when there is a previous host (the system says that the previous host died in Douqi Continent, still want to Letting the protagonist use the body of a previous host) will probably dissuade a lot of people. By the way, in a village of beggars, the tree of life, the pen with the power of yin and yang, the needle with the power of the five elements, the elephant with dragon blood, or something else, the three-eyed monkey, these martial arts are not simple at first sight. Is it a bit too far-fetched to emphasize again that so many awesome martial arts appear in a village of beggars at the same time?

Speechless, to be honest, even those with feelings in the system are not interested in watching it.

After reading the second chapter, I was finally drowned by the author.

In the early stage, you wrote down the combat effectiveness of Hua Jianghu so low. Then you wrote another martial arts character with particularly high combat effectiveness. And that martial artist's combat effectiveness is not as high as that of Jianghu. Do you think your combat power will explode?

Too wasteful. It's a little bit flying and I can't stop. Discourage.

Haha →_→, the protagonist of this book is a tool man, who is responsible for improving the quality of martial arts of civilians in Douluo Continent 🤫

The beginning of Chapter 1 is not very good. If possible, I hope the author can change the title of the protagonist "Master". After all, no modern person in time travel would call himself that. This is a poisonous point and makes it really uncomfortable to read.

Can you please stop messing with the system so much? It looks so embarrassing!

When writing about Chinese comics, you can write about Under One Person, Zhenhun Street, The Demonic Patriarch, etc. They are all pretty good.

Isn't Oscar's martial spirit a sausage? Why did it become tofu?

Dai Mubai shipped more than 30 level soul masters, not even 40, and there was clearly a team of 8 people. You are called 7 Sages, and you are forcing yourself to post the original! ! !