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This book is so embarrassing. A college graduate looks like someone who didn't graduate from elementary school. The author didn't even check it after he finished writing. The plot must at least be reasonable and reasonable. This book can be saved by a major overhaul. The protagonist should be more stable, and it's not an invincible novel.

The subject matter is very novel and great. I hope the author will continue writing!

During the exorcism on the train, the onlookers didn't have much reaction, as if they were used to it. This is a background. When he arrived at his hometown, his sister said it was a scientific society. Two backgrounds in one book? There is also a B&B opened next to the paper shop. Are you trying to poison me?

The subject matter is really good, but your plot writing is too unreasonable. I was speechless at the beginning of the high-speed train section. I forced myself to read dozens of chapters, but nothing changed at all. I really couldn't stand it anymore. I suggest the author re-open a new book or revise the whole text. Really, a very good subject, don't ruin it like this

The title of the book does not match the content. The plot is cliche and nothing new. The protagonist has an unhappy personality. No wonder the book is not popular

The subject matter chosen is good but the writing style, alas

A very good novel, with a novel golden finger setting, "Yin Yang Realm", land reclamation, farming, upgrading and fighting monsters, my favorite type, keep going

Yes, keep updating. I thought it was supernatural based on the title of the book, but it turns out it's not. Haha, it's very novel.

The subject matter is novel. After reading the beginning, I have the urge to continue exploring. It is a very good reading experience. Come on, speed up the update, and support it with votes and rewards!

The subject matter is good, it's just the author's writing style, hey

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 28. To advance the plot, someone who I've only met once signed up for the protagonist without even asking him? The protagonist really agreed

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It's so poisonous, the writing style is blunt, and it's basically an all-female cast. Except for the protagonist, the male character is basically an old man. The plot is very strange, secret, and the ore is given away on demand. It's very generous. People who practice are not taboo about showing their wealth. Return to the Holy Mother, the Talisman Magic Sword, give it away casually, throw it away, there are too many poisonous points, and it has a tendency to be a harem novel.

The writing style is really embarrassing The first dozens of chapters are written like fast food.

When I see police beauties and school beauties, I find it boring.

I can't stand it anymore! The protagonist has been cheating, giving away all the good things to others for free, and he is still too cautious when there is such a big secret.

I feel that this book is more suitable for physical publication. It is one of the few books that is not awkward when viewed in the first person.

The content is substantial, the plot is focused and not procrastinating, and the plot is relaxed and relaxed. The text and paragraphs describing the elements of the book's subject matter are also very good. What is lacking is the transition between some paragraphs and the flexibility in plot arrangement. For example, the first chapter at the beginning is a bit far-fetched. Furthermore, the plot is a bit too bland. The plot unfolds passively, there is no direct main plot of the protagonist, and there are some indispensable excitement points that attract readers. There is still room for further improvement, and you can do better in the future.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I have no energy at all. I am just looking for work in a paper-making shop 🤫

The subject matter is outstanding and the writing style is limited. Come on, the author.

Hit or miss. Yang but not Yang. The subject matter is very good. Limited writing.

It's so good that I won't give my recommendation vote to my own book, but to you. If you stop watching, I will give you a golden boy and send it to you. Please improve.

Is the beginning of "Poison" good? The protagonist draws a charm to drive away ghosts in public. What is the reaction of a normal person? No one called the police, just let nature take its course?

The author's narrative is so confusing, I can't tell the difference between first person and third person in the first five chapters!

This. . It took you a year to write to reach this point?

Wow~ The introduction at the beginning is eye-catching, the narrative is neat, well-organized and very attractive. Wow~ Actually, I also write a book, but I don't dare to advertise, for fear of...

My nm, there are seven or eight female supporting characters as soon as I come in. .

Not bad, I like this type very much, the writing is very good, 🤭🤭🤭I just never have enough updates.

If the author works hard to write more than 2 million words and maintains the standard, one million starting coins will be given 🌹

She confessed at the beginning that she didn't get angry in the face of ridicule and treated him like her sister, and she took good care of him. When she confessed to the problem, she seemed to be the granddaughter of the old man who adopted her. She was so imaginative.