Meng Hui Liang Sword

The first person version should dissuade me a lot, but I quit after reading the first page...

It's New Year's Eve. I wish you all a happy Spring Festival and thank you for your support.

First person, it's so uncomfortable to watch

Well, I don't know whether the book is good or bad, but it's really uncomfortable to read in the first person.

I don't know what to write about. The protagonist is nothing like CrossFire, and it's in the first person. It makes me sick, 88

When is it? Still speaking in the first person, are you stupid?

The introduction said that he was looking for Li Yunlong, but then he turned into Li Yunlong? Isn't this headline-making? If you go to work, your resume does not match who you are and you let everyone know about it.

After watching it for a long time, I still didn't understand. Are you looking for Li Yunlong or is it him? What's his name? You made me so dizzy! ! !

Didn't the protagonist travel through time to Li Yunlong and tell him why Mao wanted to call him Li Yunlong? Isn't he embarrassed by his own name?

First person, oh, I couldn't stand it any longer and vomited

The first person makes me want to vomit. Why write in first person? There were several first-person novels that became popular, but they were all killed.

Although I like the sword very much, I don't like the first person version!

In fact, in the Iron Triangle, Ding Wei was the biggest official. In the War of Liberation, Li Yunlong and Kong Jie were both division commanders. Ding Wei was the commander of the column. After being awarded the title in 1955, Ding Wei actually became the chief of staff of the Beijing Military Region.

Thank you for your opinions, but I hope that when you give your opinions, you can mention the plot or characters you want, instead of mentioning things I have already written, whether it is being a red kid, following Chu Yunfei, or participating in the Nanchang Uprising, because these cannot be changed. You can think about the stories on the Long March and how to fight against Little Japan. I will adopt all your good opinions. Thank you again for your support.

Is this a novel? Isn't it a narrative? First person brainless

No one is watching the first person version 🤐 I can't stand it! ! !

Where did Li Yunlong go

First person, still so good...

1927? I'll just assume you wrote it wrong. What the hell is the first person? This is not a narrative, but a novel. If you write a novel in the first person, aren't you looking for death?

Me, me, where is my nymph? It's a good thing to have a sense of immersion, but the first person has long been swept into the dustbin of history, and the first person is still used! I won't watch it unless I change it.

The protagonist's use of the word "I" makes people uncomfortable, and they don't want to watch it.

He became the deputy company commander for no reason, and he became the regimental commander even though he was in the Jute Uprising, and he disbanded the team. What the hell is this?