NPC Goddess Apocalypse

I have been chasing books for a while, and now I have such a magical number as 234. It is fun to come out again and introduce this book to new friends (funny) If you like any of the following factors, please stick to it 1. Conspiracy theory (the atmosphere is not very heavy 2333) 2. Supporting protagonist 3. A game that is so real that it teases players 4. Soft science fiction elements 5. The protagonist who is teased by the guide >6. I argued with the author (crossed out) ... Actually, there are many more, but I can't list them because I read the comments. The most important thing is that I hope you don't be affected by other people's comments when reading the comments and then click on the first chapter. Although there are indeed some things that most people don't like, but what if you are the one-in-a-thousand peerless master😂, so I still hope someone can join me in this chapter to say that the recent chapters have been too deserted 😭

Acting is divided into experience school, method school, etc., And reading is similar. Some people will introduce the protagonist, and some will watch from a God's perspective. However, the beginning of the article describing how beautiful the protagonist is, and then being so cruel, is still in the first five chapters, which really persuades people to give up.

The introduction said it was an interesting thing, but in fact all I saw was that it kept abusing the owner. In the early stage, the supporting characters were all like Grandma Rong of Zha Ziwei, and they always did something to the protagonist. I stopped watching it later when I couldn't stand it anymore, I don't know what it was like. There may be such enthusiasts, but if you hate the abuse of masters, please be cautious, so I will withdraw first.

After reading about the author I can honestly say that I came here from Zhihu. I didn't answer the question after reading it, so I came directly to check it out. I personally think this book is promising (except for the explosive data, I really think it will explode) Writing a book is all about revising and revising, and good articles are all the result of revision. As for writing a book, one's wish is always one's sustenance. (Although I don't know what the disease is, I still wish you good health) No matter the market, I will personally support you

First of all, I wanted to transform myself, but I didn't expect that there was a miracle of survival! The first three chapters are a little bit toxic, after all, most people don't like abusers, but I always feel like there's something deceitful about it. The story behind it is okay, and I can see the author growing up a little bit. But I still have to complain, firstly, there are too many flaws in the front; secondly, the experience is too explosive; thirdly, the update is too slow, will it be updated every day or is it just an individual? Overall, good luck to you, author! Three hundred thousand words is the starting point, all of them are booked.

It doesn't matter if the protagonist is a male, but if the protagonist is a female, I read the book as my wife and daughter. It hurts me if you abuse me like this. Not to mention this is a transformation novel. When I clicked on the book Dark Summoner, I realized that I was a pervert.

No one watched😢😢😢crying

Some book friends said that my data is too explosive I completely copied the data from DNF's experience value. . Because the experience value will play a big role in the future So I have to be so explosive But I admit that sometimes I write hi Forgot to add it hahaha. For example, a book friend reminded me It costs 50W to reach level 25 It only costs 150W from 25 to 30? I admit it was my mistake If I change it again, I always feel emmm (actually I am lazy) So I wrote it later in the article Gong Chenxi can draw 20% of other characters to add her halo The experience gained in Chengzhong It can be regarded as a fool in the past Thank you for your corrections. I will try not to be so arrogant in the following articles I was really wrong Begging for forgiveness

The plot is very straightforward, and it feels like there is no foreshadowing. It suddenly jumps from one point to another. Try to foreshadow a little to avoid jumps in the plot.

Sure enough, it is a daily introduction to poison. The abuser in the opening scene can be tolerated, but you are either ntr or pregnant in the opening scene. I am really embarrassed. You are so abused that even a female video would not dare to write like this. The poison has slipped away.

I think the biggest drawback of this novel is that the protagonist always has unrealistic fantasies. The key is that he has to say that he has tried every means to go back to the game even though he has traveled through time. I wonder why you can't see the real world. If other time-travel novels start to take advantage of the players in the second chapter, the protagonist is always below the line in IQ, just like a fool.

I wanted to see the interaction between the player and the protagonist, and I saw the title of the book and thought it would be interesting, so I came in. But after so many chapters, I can't even see the shadow of the player. This book was originally written quite well (although it is not a true original fantasy, but the author describes the storyline very smoothly and the characters are very three-dimensional), but I came here to read the players, so the article is not on topic, which makes me feel very awkward (~_~;). I think the results will be better if the order of the players' appearance is sped up or the title of the book is simply changed (✪▽✪).

Tell me about your feelings about the first six chapters. The protagonist was imprisoned, beaten, almost pregnant, and had bad luck. It can only be said that it is a pity that the protagonist did not die at the beginning.

No, you just transformed, so the action characteristics are all male? Why don't you let me watch it? It's awkward no matter how you watch it. Go watch the game next door, Yggdrasil.

Does it start like this? He likes to torture his master, and he almost released poison. It's only right that no one will watch.

How should I put it? It's clear that the protagonist's tentative identity is an NPC in the game, but there are so many words. The description of players and reality only appears in a small space, and the sense of existence is extremely low. It doesn't matter if the game settings are removed and it is read as an alien novel. If it is expected to be a very long novel, it is okay, but it is really not good that 500,000 words have not yet entered the main topic.

Coming from Tieba, I think it's okay, but the plot progression is a bit too straightforward.

I think the plot is pretty good, but the writing needs to be improved. I'll read more when reviewing. There have been more updates recently, and there are more language errors. 2333

The protagonist is so beautiful, but she is delicate and frail, and only focuses on resistance and flesh. She is a pure rbq.

I took over the audio production of this book, and the starting point should be synchronized later. Himalayas: Cultivated Corn

Author: Is this book single?

I was persuaded to quit after just five chapters. I don't understand the benefit of writing like this. Who would read the rest if I don't want to read the first part?

This is incomparable to a super god mechanic, one day and one hell

So cute, I can see you getting cut.

It is highly overlapped with Super Mechanic, and it overly depicts the appearance of the characters and ignores the plot. I suggest the author read more other works.

Little Yellow Book, I am still the protagonist

Do you book friends have any ideas?

Come on, author, I think your book is very interesting. It may not be too exciting, but the world view is big and the plot is quite fresh. I hope you can stick to it with your support.