Film and Television Plane Collector

The author's writing skills are limited, so come on! Poisonous points: 1. The police station first checks the identity of the person who reported the crime, and it will take less than half an hour to find the criminal. 2. He reveals his abilities to He Lan in an awkward way, which is very embarrassing. It has the atmosphere of a youth idol fantasy drama (it is taboo in the world not to reveal specialness first, the dog will be the king in the end). 3. The protagonist's own personality characteristics are not obvious, and the self-esteem is too high (the character is very low) (height of 1.65 Meters, the appearance simulation is optimized, and the dialogue with the character is obviously not about himself, how inferior is this).

After reading so many chapters, I just want to ask about the visual effect of the simulation function, how the touch is deceived, and how to solve the problem of clothing size in the first episode of buying clothes. There are very few Sha Niu fandoms. I am also looking forward to seeing Sha Niu fandoms. But the author, you can't just care about yourself. You must also consider the readers' feelings.

Magic mobile phone, invest in you, the publicity does not say it, but I hope the heroine is He Lan, not a stud 🤭

Author, think about it, have you found that many of your things have changed the future? , Actually want to embark on the path of cultivation, some of Sha Niu's functions have to be lost, such as traveling through time and space, which is a taboo in the world, because you may cause a series of changes, of course, film and television time travel can be retained, this aspect will not affect the future The general manager recommends not to travel through time and space in the world other than Sha Niu and go back to the past and future, otherwise it will feel like it is meaningless to follow the story, After embarking on the path of cultivation, you can acquire some high-tech in Sha Niu's future world, open a company in the real world, and let your parents live a good life. You can also train some loyal subordinates to teach them cultivation, so that your power can be stable in the real world. After all, there are still many darkness in the real world. By letting yourself lead your subordinates to establish your own power in all the worlds, you will also become stronger. , After all, there are really very few things written by a lone ranger. It is much more interesting if you have a good brother.

Just after investing, you signed the contract🌹🌹🌹

Come on! The magic phone brings back childhood memories!

The author thinks carefully and prepares an outline before writing. There are so many poisonous points in the first 6 chapters. The first point is that a time-traveling gangster actually dared to go to the police station to call the police. At first glance, the author has never been to the police station. No matter when you go to the police station to report a crime or the defendant, your personal information will be checked. Even if you don't bring your ID card, you still have to report your number, and this is Beijing. Secondly, after I got Sha Niu, I changed my body shape and became 20 centimeters taller. Is it so much taller? Before you got Sha Niu, everyone at the police station was blind?

First of all, the writing style is average. Secondly, I like the subject matter. Just like when I watched the driving plot on a certain homepage website, I could ignore some plot flaws. However, I still hope that the author's writing skills can be improved.

It is recommended not to change the plot too much, which means that the author has to write a lot of original plots or update the world frequently. The former will be disadvantaged when compared with the original plot, and the latter will not be read even if a world cannot be written more than a few chapters.

In fact, I have always had an idea that the protagonist travels to the magic phone to get the silly girl, then travels to the Digimon world and the human world to transfer functions, and then uses the special rules of the digital world to devour and fuse everything that has been transferred to the protagonist, and then returns to the human world to turn it into the protagonist's talent. That is really super powerful.

I like it very much, hope to continue making more

Will there be a female protagonist? I always feel that if a time-travel novel has a female protagonist, it will collapse.

Creating is very hard and takes a lot of brain power! My hair has turned gray and lost some, so I don't know if it's worth it now. All book friends, please vote for me! A vote is optional for you, but for me it is the motivation to create!

I hope to write more domestic film and television plots.

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