When I Come to Another World

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I finally met a discerning uncle. Yes, Xiaoyan is a scumbag. We didn't feel it when we watched it, but now we suddenly realize that we didn't realize it back then. So, Xiaoyan is really not a good person. He tortured him to the point of death. It's best not to torture him to death when doing things, just keep playing with him, and then kill him at the end. It's best not to write about female protagonists in this book, especially Equity Equity, they are also a bitch and a fucking bitch. Stock serial numbers are not a good thing. Smaller ones but not much are fine. You can write them down and I won't listen to you. Do it or don't write it down? You said that because women are too troublesome, men can't have women, because having women is very troublesome.

Jiangjiang is here, the front row is bench, melon seeds, soda, Xiaoxiaosu, and the back row is sports drink, spicy strips, and crispy cookies. Come and watch the big masterpiece. By the way, please visit each other, ^_^

In fact, when I read other people's novels, I found them full of problems. The author is a taciturn person, and he doesn't know how to turn things around, go overboard, or communicate. Writing this book is just an attempt. I hope everyone can point out my problems. Please please! 🙏

All the hard work will eventually pay off, and the people I want to find in the book club circle rarely appear. Manual {"NickName":"Talking Elbow","UserId":329104337}, and the FL Justice who silently recommended it at the beginning. Thanks for the support! Love you...

Well, I just wrote the first few chapters to write famous scenes. You can skip the first five chapters if you don't like it. I feel like this is what persuades people to quit. Otherwise, why would no one read it? I have been writing it for more than 20 days, and there is not even a living person. Only the justice silently voted for recommendation. Then, come on, the baby is about to sign. The contract has been sent out

By the way, does anyone read my book? Relative? ? Otherwise, I don't even want to write it.

In fact, except for the famous scene at the beginning, this book is a bit watery, but the back part is okay. There are no major poisonous points, and the characters come out of the factory quite naturally. The coherence of the writing needs to be improved, but it is much better than other fanfics. The premise is that those famous scenes can be removed.

Although I haven't read Battle of the Sky, your book is concise and clear, and it's still worth reading.

I'll go, yes, I'm a little excited about Xiao Xun'er's state, and feel terrible. If Xiao Yan really does that, it's over, unimaginable. I don't know why I want to continue watching the follow-up plot.

I want to know if Xiao Yan was... Like that by Xiao Xun'er?

I am currently chasing "Die Breaking the Sky". Do you want to change the rhythm of chasing? Only four were moved.

Thank you for your support. Now I have learned how to improve my word count. It's another day full of support!

The author is very good. If he didn't write fan fiction for fun, but carefully coded his own story, he would definitely become a big boss...

Come on, author, he writes about daily life well and his writing style is okay. I look forward to the protagonist being Xiao Xuner... Hehehehehe

So what did you write about the blocked chapter? 🤓

972165616 Erci.

Come on, it has been collected, please visit again

If you fall in love with a character in a novel that you have never seen before, that is not because you like them, but because you are greedy for their bodies, and the protagonist is despicable! 😡😡

I think it's very interesting. After waiting for a few days, the author gave up.