Crowdfunding the Entire Universe from the Spiritual Cage

After watching the sixth episode I also want to blow up the Golden Hall

I just came here for the spirit cage

Take me with you from the golden hall!

Well, everyone's opinions and questions about this book can be left here, and the author will respond uniformly.

The title of the book has been temporarily changed from [Crowdfunding the Whole Universe] to [Crowdfunding the Whole Universe from the Spirit Cage] I hope that friends who like spirit cages can find it more easily.

Long review with spoilers Disclaimer!!!! The following content only represents my personal opinion. I hope readers who see this comment will not let my comment affect your reading. [The poisonous tongue is very serious. If the author wants to delete it, just delete it! But I hope the author can take my comments seriously] Let's talk about the overall situation first! ! ! It is basically certain that this is the path of Zhutianliu. There is a small problem - some people will think that this book is riding on the popularity of the spirit cage. There is basically nothing about the smoothness of the plot. According to the standards of online articles, the writing style is acceptable, but the author still has a lot of room for improvement. There is a slight flaw in the logic. The logic is reasonable in terms of fighting, but when I read it, I always felt that there were some places that were awkward, but I couldn't explain the specific reasons. [Remarks] I am a person who is very picky about logic. Crowdfunding changes the plot in animation and novels. The setting itself is innovative enough to attract the audience's attention. The creativity should come from the comment area of ​​station B! (Then again, I gave that comment a plus one). It can be said that bombing the Golden Hall is based on the ideas of too many Lingcage fans (including me). However, this is also a limitation. When Gutian updates the second half of the season in November, this will lose a certain amount of shine. Let's talk about the details. The protagonist travels between the earth and the spirit cage world in a reverse time-travel situation. Obviously the operation methods of the two world timelines must be explained to some extent [The best way is that when the protagonist is in that world, the time in that world advances, which perfectly solves the problem of the protagonist disappearing but no one notices]. It's quite technical to make a fool of yourself. You must know that it's very easy to mislead the character. But my personal suggestion is not to make too many mistakes. The problem of krypton gold, since it can be krypton gold, since there are big bosses, at the same time, krypton gold can be made in the spirit cage world. Then when they enter the lighthouse, can't they just spend money to buy explosives? In the scene where the crowdfunder went up to the lighthouse, if you want to say that the protagonist went up, there is indeed nothing wrong with it, but other people... It's really hard to say. The lighthouse floats in the air, and there are gravity bodies inside as guards. Things to note when writing This is done very well, I basically have nothing to say. The only thing to pay attention to is the special event. Transitions are sometimes a bit fast. For example, when the protagonist pretends to be dead and switches to the conversation with the level-loving beast. Finally, let's talk about the spirit cage alone. In the article, the author made technical complaints about some things in the spirit cage, which is a reflection of good writing style. But I want to put aside the novel and talk about the spirit cage alone. 1The character of old Ellen. This person must be a stable person, otherwise the right person may not be able to produce a talent like Mark. As for when he and Mark were fighting, they let themselves go... They couldn't survive on the ground set by the spiritual cage, and exile meant death. Before death, let yourself go and be completely righteous. 2 There are no tanks or artillery in the spirit cage world. They mainly transport supplies and do not fight on the ground, so they have no need for these. At the same time, they can only play a combat role. Going to the ground to collect supplies will not always encounter level-loving beasts, which is a waste of energy. It is necessary to complain that powerful weapons such as rocket launchers can be carried. But... It didn't appear inside. 3 Glider Is this really a thing? The coffin plate was lifted and replaced with a titanium alloy one, but it was lifted again. 4 Level-loving Beasts They are really not as mentally retarded as you wrote. They communicate with each other to achieve information sharing and cooperate in combat. According to the estimation of a big boss at Station B, a level-loving beast can single-handedly defeat 9 ordinary soldiers who are fully armed.

How do you say it? I really don't understand.

A bit interesting😃