Fragrance Remains

Read to Chapter 45. I don't know if you have seen the layout of the APP, or if you haven't paid attention to this aspect. When you click on a chapter of the book, the introduction with words crowded together makes you uncomfortable at first impression. Secondly, overall, it seems that you want to say everything clearly, but you have to explain more in order to express it clearly. If I read your book through 'listening', I believe I can attract a wave of 'listeners'. (Because I persisted like this, and my eyes are really tired.) It can be seen that you have put enough effort into the background of the story. It once made me suspect that the author was a person who has lived through that era. This is where I have the deepest experience. But the characters created, whether male or female, cannot arouse personal liking. Many scenes gave me the urge to explode with nausea. I don't know if you want to create a big explosion in such a 'chaotic' state. But your depression has been accumulated for too long so far. If you don't create one or several characters or opportunities that can change this 'chaos' in the next chapters, you may gradually lose the readers you have accumulated.

Dear readers, since this is my first time writing a novel, my writing skills are not very good. I often have to express a character's inner world, and I have to think about a sentence over and over for a long time. Please forgive me. Please point out any areas that are not well written. Thank you all.

Dear friends, yesterday I talked about "Zhuoxi". As soon as I got up, my whole neck hurt so much that I couldn't move. It hurt even when I swallowed my saliva. I'm seeing a doctor. I can't make an update in time today. Please forgive me.