Mountains and Seas

The setting is good, but the writing is too messy

The subject matter is good, but the writing is terrible. Are you a primary school student?

The writing is indeed a bit messy, it would be better to separate the language and narration

The subject matter is good! I hope the author will continue to work hard! Work hard to improve!

Lao Tie, are you writing a group portrait? I look so confused

What you wrote is too hasty and messy, I can't read it at all

Changfu, can I call you this? Liu Runxiang said

How should I put it, the punctuation is a bit messy, sometimes I don't know who is speaking, and the plot is a bit blurry, but the writing is pretty good, please keep up the good work.

The first chapter doesn't work. He doesn't understand anything and acts like a fool. The old man also appeared out of nowhere.

I still need to work harder on the psychological portrayal. I really like the subject matter.

You warrior is so funny. Could it be that you are from some kind of hermit family? It feels like you are a writer who becomes a physical education teacher. Your skills are also very awkward.

Has anyone played a game with the background of Classic of Mountains and Seas? It has a large open world and a circular planet, and you can fly out of outer space. If you want to play, you can search for Delusion Mountains and Seas, which was originally codenamed Xilang.