Chivalrous Generation System

After reading the beginning, I can tell that this book will not be popular. It's so vulgar and has so many bad words.

The good guy system is too difficult. Being a good guy is too tiring and stupid. The chivalrous system is just a tool. Is it okay to kill bad guys only when they are profitable? If there is no benefit, don't waste your time. What's the use of saving people. Lots of flaws. The protagonist's IQ is worrying. When he meets a beautiful woman in the wild, everyone knows what the man wants. It's definitely not about kneeling and licking her. Read more about the author of Water Margin and you will know

I just read more than forty chapters and asked the author, is the protagonist a bitch? The protagonist was almost killed by the female thief, but was let go again and again? Or is the female thief the heroine? ... Let's change it. It's not easy after so many chapters. The protagonist's IQ is getting stronger, the supporting character's IQ is a little more online, and the protagonist is more decisive in killing. It's so embarrassing to see this... Writing is not easy, but if you keep it up like this, the book will be useless. The first twenty chapters look aggravating, and the last two chapters are frustrating. Chapter 20 I finally realized that I can't read this book with too much IQ... The subject matter is okay, but what is the situation when all the IQs are not online? The protagonist, villain, and supporting characters have all become intelligent. First of all, the protagonist goes to save people, and everyone and the rescued people laugh at the protagonist. What the hell is that? Twice? She also scolded the protagonist... This looked embarrassing. Secondly, did the female thief suddenly lose her wits as soon as she arrived? Everyone almost drew their swords against the protagonist. Tian Gang almost had a heart attack on the protagonist one second, and the next second he almost had sex with the protagonist because of a woman he didn't know... Damn, licking🐶 Thirdly, the female thief almost killed the protagonist. The protagonist himself said that he would die if he reacted slowly, but when he saw that it was a woman, he immediately let him go, twice... Promise me, the protagonist will not be a licker, okay? Fourth, the overall IQ should be mentioned. From the beginning, none of the villains, protagonists, and supporting characters had an above-average IQ, especially the innate master of the escort agency. He refused to accept the protagonist because he had weapons on both hands~ Damn it, I can only hold one weapon, so you can only hold one weapon＠(￣-￣)＠Aren't those who practice boxing and palm skills even more disadvantaged? There are no weapons. Does he have to throw away the weapons when he fights with others? That person is done practicing plum blossom thorn, and basically can't use weapons in this life (ಥ_ಥ)... I have read more than 40 chapters so far, and these are the big poisonous points. I won't talk about the small ones. Just change them if you can. There are not many chapters now. I suggest the author put himself into it when writing, what would you do, so that there will be no situation where the IQ is not online

I would like to ask if the editor proactively approached you to sign the contract? You don't need to sign a contract if you have more than 100,000 words?

Brother, when will you publish a new book?

Children who don't read new books are not good children

…… Investment failed……

Um... After reading the first twenty-four chapters... I feel a little aggrieved＠(￣-￣)＠Can I help someone like that? And the scolding was so unpleasant ╭(╯ε╰)╮Although I understand that it is for the sake of chivalry, I still feel aggrieved... Let's see what the author writes later.

It made me angry and funny, not like someone writing a novel

I have read the first eight chapters, and the big poisonous points are gone, but the small flaws are still there, but the problem is not big, it is that Zhujiao's character is a bit self-centered. Of course, there are such people in reality. After all, time travelers will have this problem. It depends on how the author grasps it later. Suddenly, the ninth chapter has not been changed, and the plot seems incoherent. The most important supporting character's IQ must be on the standard line. Don't see the protagonist coming to save them but instead laughing at the protagonist. (Even if the villain who is rescued looks down on him, he must Hidden in my heart, people who have been around for a few years are not that stupid.) And the protagonist should not be a licker. If the female thief is not an important role, she should die (the most important thing is that she sneaked up on the protagonist and almost killed him). Tian Gang's reaction was also wrong. The protagonist just saved their lives, and in the blink of an eye, the female thief glared at the protagonist after just a few words. This is a bit ridiculous. In the end, the innate master should withdraw from the competition. As an innate master, he has no face at all. It looks too embarrassing.

Why didn't you write it? Don't give up! No matter how unsatisfactory your writing is, you must persevere. Only with experience can you gain something.

Just write according to your own thoughts, and don't read too much about other people's opinions. Of course, I'm not telling you to work behind closed doors. You should also study more TV dramas and other novels.

In addition, you haven't updated for five days. I want to say don't let my investment fail 😄😄😄

Ahhhh, it's been six days😆😆

Here we go, come on↖(^ω^)↗

It feels like playing a game. Already submitted, please support the author.

Chapter 1, Take action when you see justice, chivalry appears, In the Martial Arts Hall of XX County, XX Prefecture, XX Country "Fifty pounds, get up!" A thin young man grabbed the stone in front of him hard and tried to lift it, but even if the young man used all his strength, he could only shake the stone a few times. "Hahahaha! Chen Xiami, don't waste your efforts. You have a body as weak as Xiami, and you still want to learn martial arts? I'm afraid a gust of wind will blow you down! You said, right!" "That's right! That's right! You are as thin as a girl , No, she is weaker than a girl. She may not even be able to beat Aunt Li's chicken at the entrance of the village (ಥ_ಥ)" "Hahahaha! I'm laughing so hard, this Chen Xiami still wants to practice martial arts." Several young strong men around said mockingly at the thin young man in the middle. "Okay, you guys, don't laugh. We are all from the same village. You can't see each other without looking up. Chen Xi, you have tried it too. Your body is not good and you are not suitable for martial arts training. You should find another way out. Why do you have to learn boxing?" A tall middle-aged man made a voice. When the thin young man heard the judgment of Boxer Zhang, who was quite famous in the county, he was like a thunderbolt from the blue, "I, I... Boxer Zhang, please excuse me, I will leave now." After a long time, the thin young man staggered out of the martial arts hall. The young man left the martial arts hall and walked on the cold street in a daze, "Although I knew that my body was not good, I didn't expect to be so thin. I thought that when I came to this world, I would see scenery that I had never seen in my previous life, but I can't even practice the most basic martial arts. God, it's me, Chen Xiabou, who is like this Life? ..." "You, what do you want to do? Tell you! I am not easy to bully." "Oh? Little lady (ಥ_ಥ), why did we bully you?" A few idle thugs stopped a girl ( •̀∀•́ ) "Don't, don't come here, I, I, am not afraid of you, I, I'm going to scream! Someone is here!! Help!" Chen Blind, who was in a daze, saw a few rogues and subconsciously turned to leave, but heard the girl's cry for help. He turned around and saw the girl asking for help. In a daze, Chen Blind, who came from the Celestial Dynasty and experienced the twenty-four-character divine education, said without thinking, "Let go of that girl! Let me..." He didn't finish his words! "Hey, the host acted bravely when he saw justice, and the chivalrous system is now online." ( •̀∀•́ )Hmm, I can't describe the appearance, and I can unify the faces of all the people on the road. The author has a look, a template written by a handicapped book friend, you can read it as long as it is not poisonous,

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~