Magical Girl: Gradually Darkening Story

This is the first time I have read this kind of transformation novel with some yandere attributes. There has been a real shortage of books recently. This book is quite good. I hope the author can stick to it 🌹 Come on, author!

Unlike some other novels, this novel has a moving power. At first I thought I understood her, but later I realized that was not the case. Read it slowly, as if you are feeling the loneliness and loneliness with her. She must have taken on too much by walking alone. Maybe this is a tragedy, heartache, but don't know what to do.

The sauce is bubbling, a cup of milk tea, hot popcorn, crispy snow cakes, raisins, and a small bench in the front row to read a big book~

Come on, author, the recommendation votes have been cast.

It's good to update the author. After all, it's a new book. Three thousand words a day is pretty good.

Good book, 50 coins for one chapter, settlement on the shelves, great support to the author 👍👍 Post it as proof

Come on, it's well written and has been collected.

This is a magical world, but the difference is that the girl has an uncle's heart. I'm really looking forward to it. 😎😎😎😎

The sense of immersion is very poor, it is difficult to read, and sometimes I look confused.

Damn it, I just invested a thousand points, the author is no longer a eunuch. In other words, it feels like there are a little less chasing shots.

If this book hadn't been on my bookshelf and I had come back to read the plot a few times, I really wouldn't have known that my book review had been deleted. At the beginning, I found that this book was definitely going to be confusing, because you didn't write about that feeling at all. It seemed like the blackening was caused by the stimulation of the external environment, not your original psychology. Anyway, when reading books now, don't talk about abuse in the main text. You'd better make the protagonist have an IQ. The smaller the character, the more IQ and EQ should be given.

Chun Baidang said I feel sick when I see someone getting married Let alone an ambiguous relationship

Is the author a middle school student? It uses too many unnecessary adjectives and metaphors, which makes the reading awkward and half-baked. It will definitely become your dark history as the author. I can imagine how ashamed you will be when you come back to read this article in a few years, haha! How to control one's desire for expression is a problem that an author must face to make progress. A novel is not prose. Too many embellishments and metaphors may seem gorgeous but are actually unnecessary or even harmful. Speak out and apologize!

Is it a change? There are so many male scenes. It's really scary to watch them.

Marry a lily instead, that is, marry a girl, and you will still be a lily 😏

It makes me feel bad. Is it important to be male or female? In such a world where the strong are respected. I really can't figure out why I have to worry so much about my character just because I'm missing that little flesh. It made me irritated and a little confused. Why don't you commit suicide if you don't like changing into a girl? This kind of character is emphasized in so many chapters in the early stage, and the dissuading effect is extremely strong! It is also suitable for some people who like to watch this kind of masochistic tendency. Especially when it's out of control, it's inexplicable. The writing style is still a bit unsmooth and hard to understand. Another wave of persuasion to quit. In fact, this type of subject matter is very novel, but I feel that the author did not write it well.

It's a long paragraph, and I feel it's a little exaggerated. To me it's still quite toxic... But it's actually quite well written, but there are some issues with the details.

Magic power is out of control. In a different world, people lose control every day. Are there no specialized prevention and treatment institutions? For example, a psychiatrist or something like that... The male soul of the protagonist does not bring the rationality and restraint from a male perspective, but instead amplifies the delicacy and sensitivity of the female body. The beauty of the characters can be seen everywhere, various bilingbiling auras, the loneliness and restlessness of adolescence, and idealized descriptions. The author is definitely a girl. Looking at the protagonist's mental illness and darkening, I hope there will be a good ending. Just don't transform into an evil god. Becoming an evil god is a masterpiece...

I'm quite willing to sacrifice my gender in exchange for top talents. Is this too pretentious for the protagonist?

Madam, madam... Eunuch...? 😂

Blackening...

The writing is too confusing. I can't think of where it is, and the logic is confusing.

As for the light novel, I'll keep it for now. I feel pretty good after reading the introduction. Come on, author, Mahou Soju... Ah no, why did I think of tentacles?

From the introduction, it shouldn't be about starting a harem after becoming a hundred people, but I still have to ask because I'm a little scared. It is heresy to transform into a lily and open a harem. (σ;*Д*)σDeath penalty! And I want to join the group, hehehehe. O(＊＾▽＾＊)o♪

Oh my god, could the author divide it into more paragraphs? This is so painful to watch.

What can I say about this book? It's really uncomfortable to read. You must read this book slowly, otherwise you won't understand it.

I read half of it a long time ago and thought the description was pretty good. After a long time, I came over to finish the remaining half.

After reading the reviews, I decided to give it a try

Brother author, do you have any problems with your socio-economic system? One copper ≈ 1rmb, one gold ≈ 1000rmb. In the middle chapters, I think you have already converted 1 gold ≈ 1rmb.