The Song Dynasty Has No Boundaries

The author's writing is very good, the plot is compact, and it also shows the protagonist's skill, ability and resourcefulness. But there are some places that feel inconsistent. For example, when the protagonist enters the officialdom, I feel that the author's writing skills are declining a bit. For example, the protagonist relies too much on the Snake Slave. Although the Snake Slave now has the Stockholm buff, it is recommended to add a few words to show that the protagonist is still using psychological means to ensure that the buff has not been eliminated. After all, the Snake Slave is a spy. If she does not continue to use psychological suggestion and other means, it may not be possible to guarantee whether her loyalty will weaken over time. Of course, if the author has other arrangements for the snake slave, you can ignore this suggestion. However, at this stage, I feel that the protagonist is too wary of the Snake Slave and involves her in too many things, such as following rice merchants and discussing Sima Guang with him. If the author wants to show that the protagonist is smart enough, he can write a psychological description to complete the protagonist's thinking instead of discussing with the snake slave. In addition, the protagonist relies too much on snake slaves, which are not very visible means, such as tracking and leading people. The main reason is that the protagonist has no power now, but he has such a method. If it is spread, the emperor and other civil servants will have a bad impression of the protagonist. The most important thing is that if a political opponent or something conducts an in-depth investigation and discovers the identity of the snake slave, it will easily become a flaw for the protagonist. Then there are a few places... It feels like the novel is deliberately cool, and some characters are too simple. For example, several supporting characters who are opposite to the protagonist will be completely killed if they oppose each other. They are very similar to the vicious supporting characters in some brainless novels. Although they have IQs, political matters are quite complicated. There are no permanent enemies and no permanent friends. They are all driven by interests. If these enemies do not have a very reasonable reason, it would be very strange to simply oppose the protagonist. I hope the author can improve it in the future and try his best to flesh out the main characters. Secondly, the author makes it clearer about the protagonist's policies, such as the recently updated bidding law, the specific implementation of the policies, and how they are beneficial, because if we just describe how the emperor and Wang Anshi feel about it, we readers, emmm, to be honest, those who have read too many historical articles may feel that this general policy is too primitive.

There are many reversals in the process of rescuing the tiger head, but it feels a little too fast. Although there are no errors in the logic, maybe because the pipeline thread is very accessible, the reversals are dense and the pace is a little faster. But this is not a flaw. Ming Yue's mentality changed a little faster, and her defection was a little faster, but considering that she was an outcast, she had nowhere else to turn to except the protagonist, and it made sense to have sports and exchanges that could enhance her relationship. Perhaps the sense of dissonance is because the author is a male and may not be able to understand women in a deeper way. If Mingyue doesn't serve as an important female supporting character in the future, there's no problem in living things so quickly. Anyway, looking at the current situation, most of the snake slaves will help the protagonist handle it like secretaries. The following is my sincere suggestion: I hope the author can go further in writing about intrigues. At this stage, I feel like everyone has read "Anti-Sutra", which is full of conspiracies and plots, and the characters are also sinister. But in fact, conspiracy should be more effective most of the time, and it is more in line with the style of some big guys in this era. I can't tell you exactly what Yangmou is, how to use it, and how to write it. I just have the impression and feeling, which is probably similar to the feeling of lightness and ease in the Ming Dynasty. The author may refer to the Ming Dynasty or something. As for Sima Guang, I think so. This man is indeed a genius, and he also has real talent and practical knowledge. After all, the person who wrote a book like Zizhi Tongjian can't be too bad, but he is a bit like Zhao Kuo, who talks about military affairs on paper, has made mistakes in economic management, diplomatic strategy, and talent promotion. Therefore, it is normal for the author to set Sima Guang as the antagonist of the protagonist. However, at present, I feel that because the author has not written much, the characters except for the protagonist and Wang Anshi tend to be flat. However, the author also has many advantages, such as being refreshing, plotting, and controlling the rhythm. I still hope that the author can work hard to write, improve himself while writing, and deeply explore and write the characters of each historical figure, instead of blindly writing them as clowns, so that our readers can have a deeper appreciation of the style of that era and the charm of the novel.

Why do I feel like I dominate the world?

The hero returns with honor in the cold wind. Do you really understand history? It makes people laugh their teeth out.

The characters in the book are not absolutely good or bad, they just have different positions. Good book.

The Song Dynasty is really disgusting. The Song Dynasty and the Qing Dynasty are simply two pieces of shit in Chinese history.

It is not easy to write well about Wang Anshi's reform period. I hope the author can work hard! The writing so far is still very good.

It can be seen that the author has made full preparations to write this novel. The road to becoming a god must be very difficult. I support the author greatly!

I was afraid of paying money if I lost, and I also lost money if I won, so I didn't have to fight if I had to pay. As a result, I became a shy person.

Every book is a eunuch, three books in a row. The author remembers to register a new author's pen name next time he opens a book.

The book is still a bit thin. I read it in one sitting. If it doesn't work, I have to hold it in until I gain weight before reading it.

May I ask if you will rebel? If you don't, I really don't want to be embarrassed.

I read the book in silence. If you read the book review when you see it has not been updated, please leave a message. . . He left quietly again. .

It's a very good book, the author works hard, don't stop updating it!

I like the protagonist very much and have an affinity with him. It is written very seriously and I will always support it.

I haven't read the book yet, so I read the book reviews first. The overall reviews are pretty good, but what's wrong with the poor first order? There's so much quarrel in the book review section, but no one has ordered it? The level of quarreling is quite high, but sometimes the time doesn't match up, and it doesn't make sense to compare the Southern Song Dynasty and the Northern Song Dynasty. Also, the author didn't say anything after refining the few posts, which I feel is one of the reasons for the poor first order. Of course, I'm looking forward to the quarrel after subscribing, it should be exciting.

The author pays attention to details everywhere in the article, which shows his intention and skill.

Personally, I feel that the protagonist's aura is not enough. In other words, can you help him get a few more? Give it to me by the way.

Damn, this is such a beautifully written book, I sincerely give you a thumbs up.

There is no rule that I can only have more than 4,000 words per day before I put it on the shelves! Can there be more?

What a great book, it's really fascinating. I think the author mastered the psychological endurance of the task very well.

Please make it faster. I have finished reading it again. It is very exciting. I hope the author will write better next time. I believe the author is great

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When you are struggling, you don't want to struggle with the plot. Come on, author, I will persevere and at the same time hope that your plot will become more and more exciting. I don't want to be weird, just beautiful.

This book is okay, quite compact.

I just want to know if Renzong has any descendants in this book