Take Off My Aviation Age

First, I am very glad that I did not subscribe to this novel in bulk, because I never feel that listing data in large pages is work. I am not a military fan myself. Regarding military themes, my interest is focused on storytelling. Second, you are too verbose. In one of your chapters, there are only a few lines of dialogue about the plot of the story. The rest is all long, verbose, and noisy information, and it has not been processed. After so many chapters, I extracted the story structure and story line, and found that there was no structure or logic, it just suddenly appeared out of nowhere, and then you copied the information and added a few lines of character dialogue, and you were done. There is no foreshadowing, so when you paraphrase the information, you need to add a lot of repetition because you didn't write it down at all. Third, disgusting. In the flagship of a major country, there is still an appropriate ratio between your professionalism and storytelling. Although in the later period, some of the political and business supporting characters became homogeneous and became mentally retarded, they were still watchable. But here, there are no longer a bunch of mentally retarded people, and everyone is not mentally retarded, from China to foreign countries, from high-level people to grassroots. Fourth, I think you need to figure out the outline and the ratio of information to story. You, the author, now have one point of story and nine points of information, and occasionally give half a point from the story to the mentally retarded. As a non-military fan who reads stories broadly but not deeply, this is my feeling: After reading nearly forty chapters of You, I feel sorry for my book coins.

Tengfei invented a new technology, and then was slapped in the face by peers and experts, saying that this technology did not exist abroad. It all looks like this.

This is a history book, and the logic is inconsistent and cannot be self-consistent. It is reborn and breaks through industrial chips, civil aviation and aerospace development, etc., But it has no impact on the historical process of becoming a military, technological, and technological power. According to logic, so many breakthroughs should bring a strong acceleration to the country, whether it is GDP or other aspects. In addition, Everyone reads books to make up for the country's past regrets and grievances. This book describes the creation of a huge state-owned enterprise that has made countless technological breakthroughs. It has minimal impact on the navy, air force and army. Personally, I feel that this book is worse than novice novels such as Spark and the Rise of Aviation. This book is rubbish in the early stage and unfinished in the later stage.

Sorry, I don't want to give you a ticket

The following plots will maintain this level. I believe we are not far away from becoming a god. Come on.

Author, Plane No. 20 Is about to come out. In the book, was Plane No. 10 First flown in 1990? How many years will it be in mass production and how many years will it be put into service?

Kneeling at the truth, disgusting readers. I can't stand the last few chapters at all.

After reading a few chapters! There is a saying: pick up the chopsticks to eat, put down the chopsticks to curse! Can such an ungrateful person really do this?

The author traveled through time and went to find Bai Fumei's wife

Do you have any imaginary drawings of carrier-based aircraft? Diamond wing YF-23?

It's a bit too early, right? It's decided that the final assembly workshop will be handed over to him in the future?

It's getting more and more clumsy, and it's become a popular science article. I don't want to read it.

Test poison for helpCan I watch it? I am looking for a passionate technical article about revitalizing national defense science and technology, with no routines and no official fights. After reading a few chapters about sharing dormitory technical disputes and assigning responsibilities, it feels like a cliché. Isn't it good to focus on technological progress and revitalizing national defense? To expose these people who engage in officialdom, can't we just read official articles? Can anyone tell me whether it is a purely technical article, or whether it is a cunning and infighting between palace officials and palace officials to show off their writing? If this is the case, I will not read it!

The plot is very good, but the characters are a bit awkward to get along with. Come on

Oops, that's not enough, author!

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This book has a wrong outlook. Stealing the fruits of labor is so indifferent, but the protagonist is as indifferent as a virgin. If I change a few words in your book and publish it, will you be generous and say, it doesn't matter. Do you take intellectual property rights seriously? What kind of ideas are you instilling in people? If everyone works like the protagonist and gets no reward, and others take the credit, who will work hard?

The author, no matter how much you have objections to the company where Pigfoot works, it will not hinder the normal development of the company, right? After all, it is a state-owned enterprise. If there is no need to spend foreign exchange, even if the performance is a little weaker, it will choose domestic products. What's more, the company's products are as good as or even better than similar international products. The domestic demand for the modified version of the Y-7 (replaced with the Pig's Foot Company engine) is absolutely huge, not only for military use, but also for civilian use. In the 1980s and 1990s, there was a severe shortage of foreign exchange, and I wanted to break it up and use it for medical equipment. The company was not much weaker than foreign countries, not to mention saving foreign exchange, and the same was true for gas turbine power generation. What's more, at that time, there were still many people who opposed the reform, and factory contracting was not necessarily good. There should be only a small number of people who had objections to pig's feet, and the opinions were not very big (the aviation and military industry is highly professional, unlike the paper industry. In 1988, the People's Daily published a commentary article "Thoughts of the defeat of Ma Shengli". In the novel, it should be 1987 or 1988, and it has already begun to emerge), Author, you wrote too seriously. After this, some research institutes and military factories should be merged into the Pig's Foot Company to make up for the company's foundation and strengthen the company's capabilities in engine manufacturing, aircraft R&D and manufacturing, missile R&D and manufacturing, etc.

It's so annoying to watch! The protagonist was in such a salty state in the 1980s, I really wanted to scold him! What the hell? Have skills, but don't know how to actively participate,! You worked so hard in your last life, but you want to enjoy life in this life? Don't even look at what time it is! Even if you were in the 21st century, I wouldn't say anything to you. You don't know how to help the country in an era that is so far behind, and you still have such an attitude!

The most recent chapter from the beginning of this book, the author's writing style is 666. However, as a loyal fan, I would like to make some suggestions to the author. Can you write some important technological breakthroughs, related people, and the process of events in more detail? After all, scientific research results are the product of accumulated experience and chance through countless trials and errors. The writing is grand, and I look forward to a follow-up that can be imagined. Once again, I would like to express my special thanks to the author for writing such a good book and making me addicted to it. Come on, author, come on, my great China, I hope this country I deeply love will become stronger and stronger

Each chapter has 1,000 more words, and the number of votes is definitely more than this 🙂. If you want votes, please write quickly 😡. Each chapter is so short, your vote is gone 😏

Author, Tengfei hurry up and merge with other helicopter-related companies! In reality, helicopters and fixed-wing aircraft are not always merged into AVIC. In the book, AVIC does not want the helicopter business. (It is recommended that Shenyang Aircraft Corporation Limited, Shanghai Aircraft Corporation Limited, etc. Merge into AVIC. Why do you feel that Chengdu Aircraft Corporation Limited, Xicheng Aircraft Corporation Limited, Guizhou Aircraft Corporation Limited, and Hongfei Aircraft Corporation Ltd. Are all related to Ascendas Aircraft Corporation? Tengfei changed its name to China Ascendas Corporation, or Tengfei for short, and gave it a Chinese name)

Author, can state-owned military enterprises be eaten up by foreign capital? That's ridiculous, let alone the important aerospace industry! It's not like it's abroad, the Chinese government will definitely not allow it. The writing is far from reality! This is a big logical pit!

After reading dozens of chapters, it seems quite disgusting to set the protagonist as a salty fish character.

Chapter 102 is good 😁😁😁 Otherwise this uncle would be too annoying. I suggest that the author should have some faith when writing about people in this book, and don't always think that everyone only cares about themselves. The reason why Navel Orange's book is good is not only because of the vivid images, but mainly because there are villains and gentlemen in his works. There are too many villains in your empire, and they always pretend to be cool and slap in the face. It is really speechless, as if everyone only cares about themselves. People at that time should be relatively pure, and not everyone only cares about their own little thoughts.

I have seen more than 700 chapters, and the further back I read, the more troubled I become. In the early 1990s, it had grown to tens of billions and had a lot of core technologies. However, it was still looked down upon by people abroad and at home. It was almost 1,000 chapters. Has this always been the routine?

Is it possible that the author has noticed the problem of the audience, and those who are willing to click in to read are all hoping to write about the take-off aviation era, but what the author wrote, the first eighty or so chapters, the protagonist is all kinds of salted fish, waiting to die, offending people, causing trouble, but also adds a little bit of pretentiousness and slap in the face. In the end, even the father-in-law is about to fall, and the protagonist runs to Factory 23, looking like he is finally going to be a good man. But the readers have long since run away. What readers want to see is the protagonist using future knowledge to drive the development of my country's aviation, rather than a realistic salted fish. After reading this, they are very angry and can only say that the author deserves to be thrown into the street.

Even if you took the best engineer who is currently working on fighter jets and sent him to the past, he would not be able to build a fighter jet. Fighters are the work of countless engineers who have spent generations. A fighter has 10 subsystems, thousands of parts, thousands of engineers, and tens of thousands of senior technicians. The materials used in fighter jets could not be produced before. This requires the promotion of the entire society. No one can do anything, unless you are God.

I came from the flagship of a big country. The flagship is a bit too pretentious. I hope this book will be well written.

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