The Dog-Licking Career of the Rich Second Generation

I was very interested in reading the beginning, and then continued reading without knowing what I was writing. Please write a good story!

I didn't read the book, so I just read the title and introduction. I just wanted to come over and say: Licking a dog will lead to a good death.

After reading the first few chapters, the idea is good, but the writing is a bit self-talk, the connections are not tight, the details are not appropriate, and the proportions are not distributed well, so it looks strange. However, the writing is passable. If the author can continue to improve, it will be no problem to become a contracted author in the future.

Why do I feel like I'm reading a pirated copy when I read the text? There are always missing words

It feels like there are always some lyrics, famous quotes and stories popping up. A little less would be better, but two or three in a chapter would be too much.

I haven't read the book, but I still want to shout out that "licking a dog will lead to a bad death".

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The subject matter written by the author is good, system flow, I like this subject matter very much, and the overall style is humorous, interesting, and very novel, which makes people look forward to the follow-up plot. Furthermore, there is the topic of dog licking. I especially want to know how the author will perfectly integrate the two words system and dog licking. In short, I like this novel very much, and I am looking forward to the next development of the plot 😁

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