From Information Explosion to Spiritual Recovery

I finished reading all the updated chapters in one go last night, and I had some thoughts when I saw the individual chapters posted by the author. First of all, let's give the author a little encouragement. Writing a book is not easy. As a new author, if you can keep updating it for so long, it shows that you are a person who is passionate about writing and has great perseverance. I hope the author can persevere, as gold will always shine. Keep writing, and more and more people will love you. Secondly, let's talk about the areas where I feel doubtful after reading this article. The first point is that the protagonist wrote "Dragon". A good book does not mean that you can read it two or three times and write it down by remembering the main line of the story. It is important to have a wonderful story, but it is only the touching writing that can capture people's hearts. Jiang Nanda uses a lot of words to describe Lu Mingfei's inner activities, to enrich the image of this ordinary person who has no sense of existence and is ignored, and to discuss the fateful loneliness of the Dragon Clan. This is the main reason for the resonance and success of the Dragon Clan. The protagonist is not a genius with a photographic memory. As an ordinary person, it is difficult to even write down Lu Xun's prose that he has read countless times in the junior high school text, let alone a full-length novel? So when you see this, you will feel a little uncomfortable. The setting of the revolving lantern is very good. If this prop can be brought forward a little earlier, the logic of the whole article will be smoother. The second point is about songs. There are many categories of songs, such as ballads. As written in the article, a guitar can have a good singing effect. But many songs are not like this, such as current R&B, hip-hop, etc. Good music and good lyrics are not enough. Arrangement is also required, which is also a song that we often ignore, its accompaniment, harmony, etc. This is a technical job. The first few songs were okay, but it was a bit inconsistent when I saw the author only used guitar to accompany New Treasure Island and Pure Land. Simple arrangement is still easy to obtain, and computers also have arrangement software. It would be much better if the protagonist could use the computer to create songs. The third point is about dance. New Treasure Island and Pure Land are very popular, and even though I'm a half-nerd, I've watched them many times. But it doesn't mean that you can dance. Will all otakus learn to dance? Doubts The fourth point is about the pace of the article. It is a bit slow to write now that the protagonist is still in school. How can I put it, the anxiety that some protagonists feel about not going to college yet is like watching Conan and not graduating from elementary school after watching it for half a day. But it's not a big problem, the author just arranges it. Overall, this article is a pleasant one, so there is no need to worry about many parts. It is just a setting, just accept it forcefully. But I still hope that the author can refer to it and write the logic of the article better. After talking about the doubtful points, I still want to cheer up the author. The overall writing style of this article is very smooth, and the setting of Wenzhaogong is also very novel. The plot is compact and very enjoyable to watch. It's great as a relaxing read in your spare time from work. The description of the high school atmosphere is also very good, and the small details depicted, such as walking on the playground during evening self-study, and playing in the dormitory, are all very good. Being able to write one million words is a great thing in itself. I hope the author can keep writing. Come on!

It's so beautiful. I haven't read such a refreshing book in a long time. Recommended, please put it on the shelves. My monthly ticket is no longer enough.

Saw 165 abandoned books. In the essay competition, I copied the works of my previous life but there was nothing to copy, which made me feel very unhappy. I have always believed that it is best not to focus on Wenziao novels. Even if the protagonist obtains achievements from what he copied, it is as expected, and there is no sense of expectation. But if the work suffers setbacks, it can only be the protagonist's fault, and he will only feel unhappy The part where he obtained superpowers through the work was okay. Although those abilities seem to be fixed and cannot be changed magically, which is a bit boring, but considering that the book is more daily-oriented, it is acceptable But when it comes to this kind of literary plot, because it is a literary master, so when there are twists and turns in the plot, it is often the protagonist's own abilities that have problems, which makes the protagonist seem incompetent or childish. It seems uncomfortable, so I simply gave up the book.

The writing is very good, I plan to keep following it, but the updates are too slow.

The main failure of this book is the introduction. I can't understand what the author is thinking. The title of the book mentions the revival of spiritual energy, and the introduction also mentions entertainment. The final result is that those who want to see the revival of spiritual energy are dissuaded, and those who want to see entertainment will not click in at all. The author Gao ah, simply calls me doing it myself.

You are beaten by reality, you are questioned by others, you are surrounded by a lot of negative energy and have nowhere to vent. But you still have to remind yourself in your heart: Always remember who you are. You can be sad, you can be disappointed, you can even hide alone and secretly wipe your tears. But you can't stop, you can't admit defeat, and you can't get lost in the trivial and complicated reality. I hope you can be like the little nameless flower that grows in the cracks on the top of the mountain. Not beautiful or noble, but you can welcome the morning glow and wind and rain, the rising sun and the setting moon with your strong vitality and unique stubbornness. And I will always look forward to you like you, just like you look forward to your dreams sprouting and blooming.

Regarding the use of the system. First of all, I am curious whether the raw materials of the items in the system are replaceable in this era of spiritual recovery. Is there any force or species that threatens the protagonist in the second book? Secondly, if possible, should you consider transferring these items to the official hands through other channels, firstly to enhance the official strength, and secondly, in the future, the protagonist may use this to enter official protection. Finally, of course, author, you can just write according to your own ideas. I am just making a guess [after all, the protagonist still has the bullet of a tutor] One more thing, author, you don't want a eunuch! Don't stop updating, I, the student party, have invested all my book money for you this week! Believe it or not, I followed the Internet cable and beat you when you broke it [Dog Head] Yes, there is one more thing, does Shuqun have it?

Not bad! I originally thought that newcomers should be given some tolerance when reading the book, but when I read it, I found that it was not necessary at all. There are no typos or sentences in the whole article, the plot flows very well, and this is the first time I have seen a article that combines spiritual recovery and rebirth entertainment. The only dissonance in the article is the laughter of "Kukukuku", which is somewhat out of place. (Although I also know why the author likes to use this voice, whisper it.) In fact, the author can feel a little bit of literary youth in the article, but it only adds color to the work. After all, who is a literature lover who doesn't have a little literary youth?

This book has a good idea, but there are too many poisonous points. I almost read it after reading only a few chapters. The poisonous point is 1. I got a space bag, but I didn't put anything in it, and I didn't even mention it. Poison point 2. Get an oral item that can enhance your strength. If you don't eat it right away, put it under your pillow and go to sleep... The author you write is a very dangerous world! Aren't you afraid of sudden death and the baby hasn't been used yet? ! This is opening up the halo of wisdom!

I feel that the author can only develop super powers around school. The Internet is really useless to him, and the advantages of being a time traveler are not very good.

I get annoyed when I see songs being sold, especially when a notebook is full of songs, and then they are asked to be danced by others. In the end, each song costs tens of thousands of yuan and the copyright is sold to others, especially for classic songs.

There is another big poisonous point in the first few chapters, poisonous point 3. After more than twenty years of life experience in the previous life, the character and IQ have been forcibly degraded to the level of an indigenous high school student. ... Poison point 4. Even if you were an otaku in your previous life, you should know that many platforms on the Internet can quickly develop your popularity, right? Did you draw comics without thinking about submitting them, so you just stayed in the class to gain popularity? ! Since I remember so many things and have written poems, why not publish them? Even if you post it on Tieba or Weibo, your past popularity won't still be with dozens of people, right? ... This kind of protagonist who has mastered the golden finger of heaven is literally crippled by the author. Author, are you not afraid that others will learn from your creativity and write a better one? Aren't you afraid of making a wedding dress?

I took a look at the table of contents and saw that Two Hundred Pictures was still participating in the sports meeting in high school. I didn't want to read it for a moment. After reading 30 chapters, I felt that the author was so good! A blessed superpower can be exchanged for 100, and a love guru can be exchanged for 100 million! What do you mean? Anyway, it's whatever the author says it is! There is no logic to refer to! And a 30-year-old person who has experienced several years of severe beatings in the society is like this when reading an essay? Even if you randomly pick up a healthy 24-year-old otaku from society, it won't be like this! Garbage settings!

I would like to give the author some suggestions, maybe write more supernatural plots. The current plot is almost entirely entertainment. The systematic and extraordinary parts are almost optional. You can write more about the protagonist using his abilities to show off, such as participating in some youth superpower competition. Or save people or something. Then slowly guide others to guess the protagonist's abilities and so on. Of course, your own ideas as the author will take the lead.

Ordinary people play basketball with practitioners and win, well, pig's feet are indeed cowhide

Good news, more than ten chapters and a day has not passed yet.

You are more updated.

I just want to say Where is the update?

What is this written about? Is there really anyone who laughs like Kukuku in real life? There are also all kinds of classic disgusting villains in the book that make me vomit. If you don't know how to portray the villain, don't write about it. The protagonist is also written like a little kid, as if he was transported from elementary school to high school instead of later to high school. If the official organization catches you, you will cry. Are you serious? No wonder the protagonist's nickname is Ni'er

Check the comment section from time to time

🕐Part of the plot is too stiff and exaggerated

Too much poison. . . . Forget it, old bookworm

The author's writing style is really not good, but his creativity is good The writing style is a mess

After going back in time, my personality also regressed? Adults in their 20s are not like this even if they are a homebody. Does the author like to read Japanese comics for high school students?

It doesn't look good, it's all popular. What looks good is not popular

Overall it's okay, but some data processing is not good, and the importance of spiritual power is not highlighted. The protagonist can use it regardless of BCD level abilities.

Moderate, no sense of expectation, little poison!

Come on, author, keep at it.

The most enjoyable book I've ever read is the one where the protagonist says that labor and management don't care whether you are the King of Heaven or the Queen of Heaven. He wants Labor and Management's song to cost 5 million a song. You just sing it, and the rest is mine.

I saw a lot of people complaining about the onomatopoeia of "Kukuku" laughter, and some even felt embarrassed and abandoned the book because of this kind of laughter. Let me talk about it here. This laughter is actually not my original creation, but stolen from my favorite author: The Great God of Human Arsenal. I think "Kukuku's" smile is a very warm and down-to-earth feeling, and it's not like there is phlegm stuck in the throat~ I really recommend that those who have not read Zuoku's novels take a look at "The Age of Countercurrent Innocence" and "Above the Dome". Whether it is the visual sense, the vividness of the characters, the ups and downs of the plot and the tension, they are all excellent. If you really think about it, the only shortcoming of Zuoku is that it does not like to cater to readers at all. Hahaha, otherwise, he would have become a platinum master by now (after all, he is the first author I know who took the initiative to ask the editor to recommend less, which is too willful). Ah, by the way, he is still an author who cannot publish updates, (resentment from the update-chasing party~) Ah, I accidentally went astray. In short, the laughter of "Kukuku" is really not that there is phlegm stuck in the throat. If you taste it carefully, I actually think it is quite interesting. Finally, everyone come to the book club! There is a girl in the group! There is a girl in the group! There is a girl in the group!