Disaster Is Always Ten Steps Behind Me

It's good-looking and I like the characters very much. I just registered my starting number and I will give you my third-level recommendation ticket when I wait.

Let me tell you my thoughts. The writing is quite good and the setting is interesting, but the pace is too tight. At the same time, a lot of words are spent describing the supporting characters, but there are not many scenes for those supporting characters. Somewhat deformed. If you still want to maintain such a tight rhythm, it is best to reduce the proportion of unimportant characters. If you still want to describe the supporting characters, lengthen the tempo.

The writing is quite good, but the updates are short and weak. I like it very much.

If you really want to give up, please click on the finished coins 😅, we can also earn some starting coins 😒

Say hello to me, what was originally a very good book fell apart like this, alas 😐

Have the authors at Qidian never seen women in real life? Many descriptions of women's characters are messy. Just look at the women in the first two chapters who would be beaten in the real world.

Give the author a piece of advice, a serious one. It is recommended that the author find a girlfriend, or have more contact with girls, and carefully understand the psychology of women. Most of the women in this book are so disgusting. I have never met many such disgusting women in my life.

The author may have been selected by the system to travel through the book, become the protagonist, meet Bai Fumei, join the Holy Land, and then reach the pinnacle of life. After the author becomes the master of the world and returns to reality, it should be updated.

I feel like this time traveler is worse than the soul of the original owner.

Everything else is okay, but the masked one in the competition shocked me. First of all, I made a bet with your teacher that you would be the champion. Who knows who you are when you are masked? Even if you can say it in private, then your four teammates don't know who you are. Your four teammates are not life-and-death friends with you. They are not familiar with you. You are hiding something like a chicken feather. I'm really convinced.

Notice from Dianniang: She has become a eunuch and her investment failed.

I suggest the author delete the posts that talk about eunuchs, as this will cause newbies to look at the posts and then leave.

The opening of a single chapter is so impactful. After reading one or two chapters, a cute brother emerges and my scalp goes numb.

I think the author may be gone.

If you write so well, you still have to go to the palace.

Got into trouble? It hasn't been updated in a week

The author can't handle the female characters and their relationships well, like a newcomer.

Come on, the author, you can't be a eunuch anymore. Although the result is not good, the writing is really good.

Just update, five recommendations a day, two or three monthly passes, see how many chapters you can get me to subscribe to.

Reading this title reminded me of a Korean movie, where a man was afraid and hiding on a bridge. Disaster was always one step away from him. In the end, everyone on the bridge died, and he was the only one left.