I Can Eat Super Powers

Poison point 1: You only learn to practice Chinese martial arts, and you also position yourself as a mage. Are you going to be approached? I've been approached several times! ! ! 2 The plot of rescuing the sister. His sister was sealed into a painting and his classmates were asked to identify what the painting was. He explained in advance that his sister was in the painting, but his classmate still suspected that the protagonist did it? ? Are you out of your mind? 3 Is her sister really brainless for a treasure map? They've all been sealed once! Do you really want to show off your own strength? 4 I'm not going to read this now! It hurts the eyes. The writing is contradictory

Is the author a newbie? ? I've read more than a dozen chapters, and overall it's pretty good, but there are a few places where the plot is really awkward. I feel like the author needs to think carefully about it later.

Very good, why are there so few comments? Tag what you see

When I saw that sister, I gave up the book. What the hell?

It feels like everyone has a low IQ, and the protagonist and his sister are desperate to die. The protagonist is actually a bad guy, but he always thinks that he has a high IQ.

It was supposed to be a mindless and enjoyable read, but the author had to write some deceptive plots, which made it unenjoyable.

If the ability is not good enough, if a good level 11 ability is almost killed by various level 5 or 6 sneak attacks, it will be a fish eye. If it is a level 7 or 8, it will be a direct GG.

As a 15-year old bookworm, I originally thought that creation and innovation should be possible, but making devil clones and small copies felt like a big failure. The more I read, the more boring it became. Forget it, let's go! Bye😴😴

The plot and world view are good, but the writing of fighting and training moves is too poor, and there is no strong character at all. The name of the move must be there, otherwise everyone will be confused and don't know the strength. Hong Kong Manfeng can refer to it and make moves such as Vine Whip's Wanxiang Senluo, Shadow Clone that plays Shadow, Ice's Ice Spear, Ice Blizzard and other moves. However, people can imagine the fighting scene, otherwise there is only the system, saying he is powerful but not feeling it at all.

After reading a few chapters, someone killed him outside the city. After the fight, you didn't touch the body and said you didn't want to cause trouble. You killed everyone and you said you didn't want to cause trouble. Then you continued to barbecue. A woman came and asked him if he had seen a swordsman. The protagonist directly said, "I killed him?" You are just looking for something to smoke, this is not allowed to cause trouble, the woman said that is my enemy, thank you, and then wanted to eat barbecue, the protagonist gave it,? Do you believe what the other party says based on the protagonist's setting? Also, when you hid your strength during the hunter assessment at the beginning, and then unscrupulously grilled the freshly killed prey after leaving the city, and said that you were strong enough not to be afraid of attracting other beasts, then why did you hide your strength just now? If you just grilled the meat, someone would definitely expose it and say there was something wrong and cause trouble.

After reading Chapter 36, I didn't feel any better. The author's portrayal of the protagonist's character and description of the fight scenes made me uncomfortable. It was a bit interesting to see the protagonist upgrade his abilities, but when it came to the fight, people complained: when something was wrong, the enemy launched an attack, and the protagonist was injured before he could react. Angry! Use your ultimate move and the enemy will be sucked into you. If it's just once, it's fine. I've seen more than 30 chapters and every fighting scene has this routine. I feel like I've even taken off my pants. Just show me this 😅. Speaking of the character of the protagonist, I can understand that there must be many shortcomings when ordinary people suddenly get the golden finger. Author, you can describe it. I write about some protagonists who make a fool of themselves because they don't understand the situation, or some ridiculous things, and then let me see the protagonist's little progress, which can also enrich the protagonist's image in the minds of readers, but there is no such thing, there is no progress, the protagonist has always been stupid and bold, and has always been ordinary. As a reader, I put myself into the novel and felt very uncomfortable after imagining myself as the protagonist. I am an ordinary person myself, and I can still feel the feeling of incompetence and rage when reading your novel, which really makes me feel uncomfortable. Author, what you write is so cool! Here are three recommendation votes. I hope the author can improve in the future.

Why should I write it in a funny way?

There are too many loopholes, inconsistencies, and really many typos.

The previous writing was okay, but in the third high martial arts world, the style changed and the character began to twist.

In fact, the plot of the world of the demon host can be written less and it can be covered in one stroke. I came to see the pig's feet, not to see other people's. Also, can you not be too holy, don't require orphans to start the game, and can't be a nanny for your sister?

Who are you writing this book about? Always describe others at length. When writing "Devil Soul Eater", a story will have many chapters. You might as well just write one chapter or one segment to pass through it. If you write that many, it will only add thousands of strengthening energy. There is also the ability to gain quicksand. I always describe the sword and Liusha Emperor, but the protagonist just mentions watching a play at Xuantianmen? What do you want to do? None of the protagonists feel involved. As for the description of women, everyone knows that the protagonist has a cold personality, but they insist on emphasizing so many times that a man and a woman have nothing to do. You have enough water.

What **** is his sister? If his brother hadn't saved her, she would have died a long time ago. After being saved, it would be as if nothing happened. She would continue to die. I am the protagonist and her legs would be broken. What ****?

I can't stand it anymore, it's so poisonous, I'm almost poisoned to death. It doesn't matter if the writing is not good, but it doesn't work with so many poisonous points!

Nowadays, you can't write a novel if the main character doesn't have a sister, right? It's okay if you really have to write it, but don't write it in such a disgusting way, okay? What the hell, nothing

It felt okay and I could barely watch it, but the younger sister was a bit dissuaded, maybe because she was used to the beginning of the orphanage where her parents died.

As soon as you feel a little involved, you will be poisoned immediately. The inner activities of various characters, including the protagonist, are written in a mess. At first, I thought it would highlight how smart the protagonist is later, but it turns out that the protagonist is an idiot. I could have rushed there in one day to save my sister, but it took me four days to help a stranger I met along the way. What is outrageous is that I have emphasized several times that the protagonist and his sister have a very good relationship. The performance before and after entering the inner world for the second time and the performance in the prefecture after coming out, this protagonist is completely mentally ill, neither doing things as he wants nor doing as he wants.

It's a shame, I'm not in the mood to watch it. Halfway through, I felt that my mood was so complicated. I thought it was too painful to watch it. I've already bought it. I just wanted to ask if I can return the ones I haven't watched? Oh 😱

Have you ever noticed that the author particularly likes to go back in time? He does it almost every few chapters. I'm speechless.

I can resist other poisonous points, but the protagonist is obviously very high-level, so why do I always suffer in battles? And I don't understand anything and I keep making mistakes.

It's a bit long-winded. For old bookworms, you don't need to read it carefully, especially the explanation part, which will be very awkward. Also, I don't have any expectations for the plot. I can abandon it at any time when I find a good one. Maybe I can change the book after reading the latest chapter and feel good again.

I finished reading it. Although the author couldn't continue writing, it was pretty good.

I can't stand it anymore, it's too poisonous.

It's finally finished, and I've finished reading it!

Reading the introduction, I want to ask the protagonist if he can become invincible by simply crawling on the ground and eating dirt.

Wow, I was attracted by the title of the book. I haven't read it yet, but there are a lot of comments criticizing it. To be honest, according to my opinion, looking at the title of the book "I Can Eat Super Powers", the protagonist has a mutated stomach and can eat various foods to absorb his original abilities. For example, a wolf that can fireball has a certain probability of gaining the fireball ability after eating wolf meat. A bit like a book like Genetic Evolution Goldfinger. But looking at the introduction, it seems that you are not this type.