Reborn as a Bodybuilding Rich Man

He is a good author, it is rare to have such a big chapter

The beginning is okay. I would like to make the following suggestions: 1. One chapter is too many words. Three thousand words is equivalent to one chapter. Your chapter is worth five chapters to others. It is not as many as five chapters and three thousand words. It is very disadvantageous 2. When answering other people's questions, you claim to be very awkward. For example, when the teacher asked the protagonist why he was not a class leader, the protagonist replied: No reason, the students just don't want to be. For example: Me: "How many times do you update every day?" Author: "The author updates once a day." Of course there is no problem in saying this, but it will be a little awkward.

The introduction is fine, so just keep it for now. The author has written three books, and most of them have gone to the palace. Just take precautions.

The mag machine makes labor and management so embarrassed. Aren't you ashamed of plagiarizing so much? You will be invincible after rebirth. Virtue

A woman who makes such a joke can only be incompetent

Why is it that I have finished my investment and lost money?

Please correct the typos. I just opened a new book, so I'd better pay attention to it.