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This book looks good so far But it seems that the author is still gradually improving the settings It can be seen from the previous changes to the old chapter settings But I hope that the settings in the future can be stabilized and the outline is improved At least do not change the old chapters frequently (referring to three chapters ago) But it does not mean that it cannot be changed. After all, the quality of the previous chapters is very important to attract new readers Anyway, keep going

New author, welcome your criticisms and corrections.

After reading a few chapters, I really couldn't grasp the protagonist's own worldview, let alone how to lick the girl. The protagonist didn't have a plan when he went to ruin other people's marriages, and it was a fatal thing. From here, I can see that the protagonist is an unintelligent person. He is very likely to die if he doesn't have to appear in person. He has to do it by himself. He can set fire to the supporting character's house, bribe the children with candied haws to hand out notes, and dig holes on their way to welcome the bride the night before. I remember ancient times. There's a curfew, right? It shouldn't be difficult to dig a hole with the protagonist's cultivation. If the protagonist had been more ruthless, he would have killed a servant of their house the day before, dumped it in a conspicuous place, and ran away. I don't believe they would get married on this unlucky day the next day. There are many more things I don't want to talk about. Why did the supporting character attack the protagonist even though he surrendered? Is he a fool? I think it's obviously not the case. He couldn't beat either the woman or the protagonist, and he only had one hidden weapon, and he didn't hit the woman with the highest cultivation level first, but only hit the protagonist. The secret period was so special, and the woman blocked it inexplicably. She could obviously knock the protagonist away or block it, but she still had some other weapon in her hand. Don't tell me that she couldn't. She was obviously four levels behind. Just to have a relationship with the protagonist, or to highlight the woman's **? I won't list all the more exciting things later But I still wish the author to write better and better, come on

It's baffling to see 🤔🤔

It's really deserted, there's not even a single person to troll me. 😓

It's really silly. A very good subject is written into a silly article, forcing the young lady to be poisoned. Is it interesting? Obviously we just need to follow the process of finding family members for improving our realm, right? Why do you want to find a young lady who feeds you poison? You want to write a book to death and write about a eunuch, haha

When I saw someone like it, I came back and took a look. Unexpectedly, the author seemed confused. I thought people who jumped on the street only understood why they were fighting on the street. . Your writing style is average, and the story structure is hard to comment on because I have only read a dozen chapters. The most discouraging thing is the character design. I just discarded the eldest lady's string. It's 2019. Characters can no longer be simple symbols. Use details to add your own existence to the characters. Don't write in such a dry manner. dbq, although it has some top-down perspective, it is roughly like this

Direct eunuch? Or do you want to re-open a book as you said before? {"NickName":"ChiyuanRUSH","UserId":314036097}

Can the eldest lady of the Chen family die?

Well, as you said yourself, the characters are not fleshed out enough. After the release of Monk Temple, the chapters read as if the style has changed, and the writing is still relatively immature. Write well and just practice your writing skills. The most important thing is that the plot should not give others the feeling of a running account, with appropriate ups and downs.

It's not surprising after reading a single chapter of yours. I just said that I was baffled by it and always felt like something was missing. 🙂🙂🙂Writing is still good, keep up the good work!

I haven't read it yet, but please give the author a big boost, hahahaha

What's wrong with not updating? Are you planning to open a new book?

Although I haven't read it yet, I found that the author's attitude is really good

Is there a female protagonist? Will there be a harem? Will it be the Holy Mother? Did you kneel and lick?

Is this a world similar to The Matrix?

The eldest lady's part is extremely poisonous. Say goodbye.

The protagonist's IQ is too low. He has to get himself involved in trouble. He will die from poison.