The Top Student Courier

The author's choice of words in the article is very good, precise and appropriate, and he does not deliberately pile up rhetoric, which is really a great advantage in writing.

Total score: 90 Author: Mengfeng Type: Successful Inspiration Reviewer: Meet Number of words read: 100%, 330,000 General comment: Based on the background of the times, it is a model of popular online literature and art that is both close to reality and market adaptable. Introduction: A top-notch college student returns to his hometown to start a business, takes root in the most ordinary job, gradually realizes his ideals in life, and drives the development of his hometown. Detailed review: Title & introduction: 10/10 The title is concise and the memory point is clear. The combination of the elite-like common name of "student master" and the very down-to-earth industry of "courier" has formed a simple contrast; the introduction is a bit like a summary of the full text, basically explaining the key points of the full text. For practical classification, this kind of introduction is quite simple. Type: 5/5 It is not about being reborn and traveling back to a certain era to build castles in the air, nor is it about being possessed by the system and enjoying the benefits. A young college student uses his abundant energy and tireless enthusiasm to devote himself to his ideal career and achieve success. In the eyes of some people, this is probably the most realistic story that is unlike reality. Basic Skills: 13/15 The overall writing style is very adaptable to the current public needs. It is relaxed, humorous, free of wording and exquisite rhetoric, daily, and light comedy. These are text characteristics that are highly accepted by readers. After all, for online literature that needs to rely on the market to survive, high-brow and low-key will never be as popular as the Liba people. Opening: 8/10 I have a good grasp of the three golden chapters. The interview part of the second chapter introduces the structural techniques of first suppressing and then rising and setting up suspense points. The third chapter quickly enters the main plot with a fast pace. The only problem is the first chapter. The opening part about the band performance is a bit delayed, and its role in the development of the main plot is not clear. If it is forced to be read and understood, it is probably to introduce two female characters? To establish an initial character image? To point out the protagonist's guitar skills? It would be better to streamline the narrative, let the story start in the principal's office, and explain the whole story in a simple way. The deeds that highlight the characters' personalities can still appear, and the two beautiful characters that the author likes can still be introduced. Plot: 16/20 In addition to the main plot of entrepreneurship, the secondary plot surrounding the protagonist Qi Nian's life and personal life is also actively interspersed throughout the text to adjust the rhythm and reading experience. But for the time being, it seems that there are too many emotional lines, and it feels like the guest is taking over the show. The overall plot advancement is very good, with interlocking links and clear logic. The characters also effectively promote the plot, temporarily diluting the perception of a harem novel. The operation of withholding chapters also shows the author's intentions, but it is not enough to be too careful. Character design: 18/20 I prefer the image design of the protagonist Qi Nian. Apart from the hard indicators of appearance, education, and guitar playing, he is not a rigid academic. Although some young people are impatient, he is also very measured in his words and actions. This sense of sense of proportion is a kind of accomplishment that many novel characters and even young people lack. For example, when Tao Mu came to express her dissatisfaction, Qi Nian was relatively attentive and took good care of the relationship between Tao Mu and Tao Jin, which was an early plus point. However, from my female perspective, when it comes to emotional issues, Qi Nian has no obvious boundaries. To a certain extent, he is like a scumbag. Probably male readers will have different perceptions, so we won't discuss it in depth. Other characters are also handled more thoughtfully. When the author added a character profile for Thanos later in the article, I was very surprised, because few authors would complete the three-dimensional image of this kind of tool man. Similarly, although the aesthetics of many female characters in this article are highly consistent, fortunately, each has its own merits and shining points of personality and ability. They are not reduced to foils, which can be regarded as offsetting the masculinity. Creativity & Concept: 10/10 I think this year is a very special year for many online writers and followers. The reason is that online articles have begun to gradually improve their quality. Both the market and society need some relatively high-quality works that are in line with the current environment. This book is still a bit rough overall, but the content and presentation are worthy of discussion. Concerns about workers in the express delivery industry, which have many tasks, high pressure, and low social status, have always been a hot topic in society. This year, a courier boy riding an electric bicycle took to Chang'an Avenue. Contents such as college students returning to their hometowns to start businesses and build their hometowns are also things that are strongly supported by the current state. The discussion in the article on violent sorting in the express delivery industry, conflicts with property management, and following trends in Internet hot spots are also very in line with current social concerns. Although it contains some serious or even boring content, this article still makes good use of common routines, elements and techniques in online literature, giving it good market adaptability. Although it may not be appropriate to say this, but just like what is said in "Let the Bullets Fly", making money while standing is the best. I hope this article has a bright future. Subjective comments: 10/10 Recently I have been paying attention to some realistic novels. Except for those unrealistic realistic novels, many realistic novels have the problem of being too heavy on water, hostility, and craftsmanship. It's too watery, too bland, just like a running account. Although it's very true, it's not as exciting as my own life. Why am I wasting my time watching it? The anger is too strong, and there is darkness everywhere. If he is a shop assistant, he will look down upon others. If he is a person of status, he will form gangs and collude in corruption. If he is a good person, he will not get any good rewards. He does not know what the world owes him. Being cynical is considered mild, and antisocial personality is almost the same. Too much craftsmanship, bright and sad, and ignorant of the so-called metaphors, as if I am an outsider who has seen through the world of mortals, and everyone else is just a mediocre person drifting in the world. After being baptized by so many poisons, I naturally have a very good impression of this book. There is no need to be reincarnated and time travel, no blessing from the system, and no need to pretend to be deep and mature. If you think about life seriously and take words seriously, you can write realistic novels that are both popular and popular.

Your writing style is good in realistic genres. The humor here and there is a surprise. It's just too exaggerated sometimes. But the novels written by Mo Yan are even more exaggerated. The reader knows it is just a funny joke. As long as it doesn't interfere with the plot. Very good! I don't have any recommendation votes yet. If I have one, I will continue to support you.

Hey, was this inspiration from watching the news? It is said that many top students now go to deliver food and become courier boys after graduation.

Love it. As a bookworm for nearly ten years, I can say that I have read all types of books, especially the books written in the past two years, which are becoming more and more interesting. If nothing else, the "Three Golden Chapters" at the beginning of this book really attracted me. It is very plain, but has flavor, like a kind of magic.,,,, Well, I can't write it. It seems that I am not suitable for writing articles 😏

I read several chapters in a row and couldn't stop the rhythm. It was very interesting. It also contained knowledge about investment and marketing, and it also contained the words "I can't help but control my destiny". Like it👍

A long text can surprise readers with something unexpected within a few chapters, which will make the book more interesting.

The author is very good at telling stories! The writing style is humorous and the rhythm is well controlled! A rare and good article.

Only now do I realize that the publication time of the novel is synchronized with the real time. So cool! 👍

I always thought that the content of Double Eleven was about the hard work of doing express delivery. It turns out that there is a grand strategy hidden by the protagonist. The protagonist has always been very forbearing, but it turns out that he just wanted to explode at this time. Cool! Awesome👍!