I Will Take Charge of Liangshan

There are too few Water Margin books, so when I found one, I was disappointed. I suggest that if the author is playing tricks, then you can write whatever you want. But if you want readers to like it and many people want to read it, you should read it from the perspective of a reader. First of all, the poem at the beginning of each chapter is really embarrassing. Furthermore, why don't mythical plots appear in other Water Margin novels? Have you ever thought about it? This is an uncontrollable factor that conflicts with the protagonist's fun factor and also conflicts with the historical aspect. The presence of mythological elements was a hallmark of novels ten years ago. Also, writing a novel is about telling a story. You have to tell the story clearly, not make it confusing. The plot of this book is a bit perfunctory, and there is no way to highlight the plot in the incident. You didn't pay close attention to the plot, but instead exposed this sect and that sect. What is Water Margin? It was a historical uprising, with green forests, but it was by no means a martial arts arena. Those who wrote about martial arts arena were disappointed. Even if you want to write, it will be later. If you don't focus on Water Margin at the beginning, then what else would you write about Water Margin? Isn't history interesting to him? Also, the first breaking point, the Wu Song incident, was very problematic and failed to solve the problem. This is a waste of effort.

Disclaimer: There is no Xianxia. As for the wordless heavenly book in the article. It's not a myth, it's science: Use a writing brush dipped in vinegar, lemon juice, tomato juice, onion juice, etc. To write on white paper. It will leave no trace after drying. These substances are the simplest secret writing potions. If you want to read the secret writing, just bake the paper on an alcohol lamp (or a charcoal stove), and the brown writing will appear quickly.

Xiao hope's writing level is not that high, and there may be many things that need to be corrected. After all, Xiao Xi only officially started to join the big family of writing online articles in May this year, so there are many things that need to be improved. Welcome all book friends to give you your pertinent suggestions and comments. Disclaimer: This book does not involve cultivating immortals, it is just a historical novel.

Visiting friends, I admire you for writing so much, boldly imagining and innovating, and learning. I hope you will pay more attention and leave valuable comments. Thank you

Congratulations, I didn't even say anything about opening a new book.

Author, I'm in trouble, can you give me a supporting role

Do you want to give me a reward? Although it is small, it is your heartfelt wish. Wait until my salary is paid next month.

Come on! (ง•̀_•́)ง, Don't give up (›´ω`‹)

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Is this a rebirth story, not a time travel story?

Why do you like to write about Ximen Qing recently? I've seen several copies].

Come on, I have been giving you recommendation votes these days. I wish you can reach the top as soon as possible ✊

Qidian finally has another book by Ximen Qing, stop being TJ!

The beginning of the chapter is really looking for death. It basically belongs to the brainless pig's trotter series. The relationship is so hard. Those who have a lot of money will be burned to death. They can't borrow a few crossbows even if they are bows. They bring a bunch of migrant workers to go up and kill Wu Song first. They also wait for others to kill him at home. Sand dollars 🐷

After reading 6 chapters, I withdrew 😅😅

The writing is nondescript! The writing is so poor.

Thank you for your great writing~~hu collection

What little poem did you write earlier? It's neither fish nor fowl, but it's still making drama.

Long time no see, take a stroll😊

In modern times, most parents would name their sons Ximen Qing?

Do you write full time? I saw that you were quarreling with your family, and I suspected that you were working full-time. I suggested that you write part-time for now.

I've been waiting for the update 🪖

Are you affected by the recent turmoil? I didn't continue writing.

It would be great if the content level was the same as the previous sentences.

Why are the Three Kingdoms so popular? Because the Three Kingdoms mostly wrote about Superman, why is this period of history in the Song Dynasty so exciting but no one reads it? Either it's a mediocre adaptation of the plot of the original work, how could it be better than the original work, or it goes straight to mythology!

Is this Ximenxue so rubbish? A man who had just been beaten to death suddenly became so powerful? What was the author thinking?

Small order support, happy new year 😊🌹

Taking in a foster sister and taking in an old and weak beggar is a poisonous madonna.