After Being Defeated by the Demon King, I Became Her Minion

I don't want to read this book when I see the ideological stamp. The protagonist is controlled 😰, so those book reviews are wrong to say that the protagonist is raped. It is normal for the protagonist's subconscious to be controlled and do things for the devil. 😥

The name of this article is "I traveled through time and became a brave man. When I invaded the Demon King's Castle, I was stunned by the thirteen loli demon kings and was unable to move. I was defeated without any resistance and was willingly brainwashed to become her minion."

As long as the title of the book is long enough, no one will think that I am not a light novel

The author's comedy style is quite similar to Uncle Tong's. It's really ok. I'll order all of them for the time being. I hope I don't want TJ.

Well, I have read about 80 chapters of this book. The beginning of this book is indeed very attractive, and the setting is very interesting. The settings of the demon king's subordinates who are lazy and pretending to be dead, the protagonist who is forced to work, and the warrior who is dead in the dark are very interesting. Then... Emmm, the author's writing style is not to my liking, and it tends to be a little too fantasy-like, which makes it seem unsettling. It's not very humorous and joyful. I originally thought that the direction of this book would be to write about silly daily life, such as killing some brave men on weekdays, leisurely daily life in the hotel, and some silly things happening with these lazy demon king's subordinates, and then write about the development of demon girls, the cultivation of the favorability of hell dog girls and maids, and the relationship between demons. Wang's strategy, but the author always intersperses some events in the plot, but these events actually seem relatively boring... Going to the city to replenish supplies, entering the black market, meeting the adventure team and so on are a bit boring, which just gave me a... Dry feeling, but I guess the author didn't really want to write about Japan in the first place. Normally, I still focus on adventure. Of course, I don't mean to ask the author to change his writing style or writing method. This is just a matter of my personal preference. I just put forward my own opinions on the plot and writing style of this book. I still hope that the performance of this book will get better and better. It is such an interesting subject matter. It is a pity that the recommendation vote has been cast.

Personally, I felt that the first few chapters were not very good, especially when I became the demon king's subordinate, it was particularly difficult to accept. It might be easier to accept it another way. For example, this brave man is poor and looking for a place to work. He found this hotel and became a staff member of this hotel. Due to the accidental death of the owner's hand, he became the hotel owner. Later I learned that this hotel serves the devil. Although I don't want to do anything, I can only endure the humiliation and bear the burden in order not to eat dirt. The Demon King gave him a list. Every time he successfully stopped a brave man, he would be given how much money to pay or what benefits he would be able to enjoy. Or the hero wants to go back, but there is no way. The devil gives him the ability to go back, but he has to help her achieve a certain goal before he can go back. Then the hero keeps cheating other heroes for this goal. It is easier to accept this starting setting. What you say is brainwashing, especially subconsciously changing other people's thoughts. This is particularly unpleasant to people who have a sense of substitution.

The key to the story is the people. Human growth, relationships between people. The protagonist becomes a hotel owner, and the plot that really attracts readers is the story of the boss and his employees. After all, the passing tourists are background versions, mostly disposable supporting characters. The relationship between the protagonist, the Demon King, and the Demon King's subordinates will progress slowly, which will make it uninteresting. You can't support a book just by making jokes.

A rare good book written in the first person, with a daily style, suitable for relaxing.

The devil is the protagonist, right? The first-person person in the article is a puppet, a human traitor. Is this worthy of being the protagonist?

There is a sense of narrative that I never expected. It's very fresh, but if it keeps doing this it will make people tired. I suggest the author try to improve the quality without changing the style.

Your book was actually recommended by Qidian Data. Please support it. To be honest, I am increasingly confused about these cancers in Qidian. I tell them to quit as soon as I see the first person, just to gain a sense of presence.

Well, even if I die, I still have to say something Destroyer race high!

Although I think Satania is more suitable

Cerberus Three-Headed Dog

Trial reading post. . After reading more than 20 chapters, let me share my opinion I have no desire to read anymore. There is only one reason: Unreasonable. . . I don't care if the protagonist is in first person, or if he betrays humanity, or if he kills a girl. In other words, this might be better and more attractive. But there are too many taken-for-granted settings in the book, and light novels are not like this either. Perhaps it is the same as those Japanese novels that we always say are ten years behind. The specific reasons are as follows: 1. If the devil is a woman and doesn't squirt, it's a bit hard to figure out if you are poor. As a result, the brave man is poor and does not understand. As a time traveler, you have gained strength and killed a lot of wild monsters. You can make money just by selling some materials. Not to mention that the country still restricts you when you sell things? ! If you can't resell it, you can let others sell it. The benefits are eternal. This is the biggest failure; 2. Excluding several aspects, the protagonist's IQ and EQ are all online, and the author's writing skills are also good. But the progression of the plot is too natural, because the hero wants to fight the devil, so he fights the devil. Because the Demon King was short of money, he took the brave man he had just defeated to make money. . Life is not life, money is not money. Conflict of interest? 3. The style is obviously fresh and joyful. It's a depressing story to write. There are foreshadowings of tragedy everywhere As I said in this chapter, it might be better to publish this article in Japan. Lao Bai probably won't be able to accept it for many people.

Brother, I started watching it in junior high school, and now I have graduated from high school.

I feel like the protagonist's outlook on life is extremely incorrect. If this is interpreted as the imprint of the mind, but just by looking at what the protagonist does, there is no turning back. The whole plot feels a bit nondescript. (Derogatory) The protagonist gives people the feeling of being a BZ and still building an archway.

You, other people's protagonists use happiness to cover up tragedy, you are a tragedy, you don't play jokes at the wrong time, you only pretend to be the protagonist and cook in front of you, and you are all from the protagonist group, but you still use the first person, just be a tool person, and you keep emphasizing that the protagonist is a waste (in the protagonist group) Ning is helping me quit my book addiction, thank you Ning Le. Alas, magic is obviously very plastic. In the second set, the magic tricks can be crazy. The protagonist only knows Masaka. Come on, you are, holy shit, awesome. What is this? Is it like this? That's it. Damn you, wait for me to take a nap, wake up and you will be a fucking idiot.

To promote the peaceful development of humans and demons

To be honest, this is a light novel that is not very popular, and it is still in the first person. Just wait for death, there is no hope (ー_ー)!!

A moment of relaxation can lead to a whole life (sad) Let's wait until we finish the postgraduate entrance examination.

Is the author still around? Are you planning to write a book? This feels like it could be made into a comic First person, I think it looks good

It's over again, is it because of something?

He pretended to be dead for a few days and then disappeared again.

I watched it a long time ago, and I really like the slow first-person narration style, but I kept saving it because of the slow updates. I didn't expect it to be cut after so long. I hope the author will adjust well and see more interesting stories.

I remember that the author said before that he would come back and update after taking the postgraduate entrance examination. Although the novel is a bit disappointing, I am more concerned about whether the author has successfully passed the postgraduate entrance examination? Will you consider writing another book in the future? Finally, I wish the author good luck in the future!

When will the new book come out? I really like your writing style, but I would like to make a small suggestion. Don't give too many foreshadowings. Your foreshadowings are many and deep, especially if you explain them when you are still older, it will give people a feeling of being foggy and cumbersome 😊😊