I Have a Hunting Knife

I'm really convinced. From the first chapter, I've been doing some inexplicable things. I haven't written the world view of the novel clearly even after reading it forty or fifty chapters. Don't you feel uncomfortable if I don't pretend to do it? It's such a mess.

Author, if your writing is very good now, just keep writing like this. But if you change your writing style and change it directly to cool writing, then new readers will not come but old readers will be driven away. I am afraid you will die suddenly!

After reading about 200 chapters, I feel that the author is getting more and more confusing as he writes, so I'll take it easy for now. The author's writing style tends to be more scene-based and fragmented, which is often seen in suspense or detective novels. Some people may find it difficult to understand or it may burn their brains, and they may regard the jungle knife as a gimmick. Just think of this book as a supernatural exploration text. You can understand it without thinking and turn left when you go out. Originally, I wanted to just say what I said above to give the author a lull, but around chapter 200 it started to get more and more awkward, especially when it came to the establishment of the Tiandihui. They really treated a queen and a red-dressed idiot as a fool, and it was very uncomfortable to drink water in a well for dozens of chapters and then fly to the palace to continue drinking water. This is also the author's first book. I won't say it's too ugly, but I'll give you a few suggestions: 1. The timeline and character power system are vague, so it's best to clarify them. The words "a long time" and "a long time" are used frequently in the article, making it seem like a lot of changes have taken place. In the end, only a few days or more passed, and I couldn't laugh or cry. The power level of the protagonist has not been explained clearly until Chapter 250. On the surface, there is an upgrade flow for fighting monsters. The Flame Palm upgrades one level after another but does not follow the level of the jungle knife. It feels like I just write whatever comes to my mind. If the protagonist is not powerful enough, it is artificially added. For example, when I was hunting owls, I thought Liu Chuanxi was awesome, but I ended up fighting him back and forth in the Jiang family. 2. The use of memes is too complex. First, find out who this book is for. It is best to specialize in several categories. It's very creative to deceive Hong Yi into a philosopher, but the text is mixed with too much philosophy, physics, movies, Chinese comics, and Japanese comics, and it is neither fish nor fowl, regardless of age. To put it more bluntly, at what age do people watch Zhou Xingxing's movies? At what age should you watch Death? How old are you looking at Ye Luoli? Anyway, when I saw a single researcher from my previous life drawing Ye Luoli's magic wand, I got goosebumps all over my body when I took one bite of My Little Pony. 3. The characters and plot arrangement should really be re-examined and made more popular. I believe there is a synopsis of the story, after all, we have been moving towards the imperial city, but the character arrangement is confusing and the roles change like a revolving door. Regardless of whether they are strong or weak, there is almost no one who can stay with the protagonist for 10 chapters except Shui Jing. Even after more than 200 chapters, you still don't know who the heroine is, or whether there is a heroine? In addition, this kind of prose-style writing is really awkward for online articles, and it makes it difficult for the author to write more than 1,000 chapters. Come on.

This novel does not have a clear line. Many times there is no connection between the protagonist from one place to another. It is like two separate stories. The story line is very confusing and makes it unclear what the protagonist is going to do. The characterization of the characters is also very weak, often passing by in one stroke. For the supporting characters, there are many characters worth describing, which usually rarely appear after the story is completed. The whole story revolves around the protagonist. The key is that the protagonist is not likeable. To be honest, I think the protagonist is completely mentally ill. He comes up with poems at every turn, as well as all kinds of modern vocabulary, and all kinds of trash talk. I feel really embarrassed when I read it, a bit like crazy, but he is really... Forget it, you should understand. The whole article gave me the impression that it was a thinly veiled novel. When writing about Gate of the Netherworld, Jihou, and Jiehua, I felt that the author wanted to write about a situation in which the world has changed dramatically, as well as a magnificent worldview, but I really couldn't see it. Everyone, including the protagonist, seems to be quite mentally retarded.

The book is well written, and the characterization and description of strange news are very successful. The logic is also good, giving people a strong sense of immersion.

The plot of this book was too raw <(｀^´)>, and I was persuaded to quit after reading about twenty chapters. It was too far for my taste. I believe the author can wait for readers who like this kind of plot to manually make it funny!

A book that I thought was pretty good at the beginning ended up falling apart in the end. There was no main plot, my mind jumped too fast, and I wrote wherever I thought. It's not too much to dig holes, but you have to fill them in, right? Can't we just leave it there and ignore it?

The book is actually quite good, the protagonist is not abusive, and the pace is very compact. Many book reviews are inexplicably critical. It is true that the writing of this novel is a bit messy, but it is understandable. This kind of weird genre is not easy to set up, not to mention that this book is innovative. Some details are indeed not handled well, but it is not a big problem. There are also people who post without reading the book seriously. Qidian should really learn from site B and finish the questions before posting. At least those people who are mindless can be deleted. Finally, the book is okay. The creativity and writing style are above the passing mark. The details are still a little flawed, and the world view is not very perfect. Basically, it is written with care, and it has already surpassed the starting point of 80% of the book

Xiancao, this book is not that bad. It is a little bit toxic in the early stage, but it becomes very enjoyable later on. The purely refreshing writing is still very good.

It feels like one sentence here and there, a mess.

Come on, author, it's not enough.

To be honest, I really like this title 😂😂 but... I really can't stand it, come on. Brother

The author's writing is too jumpy, suitable for writing Cthulhu type, but also a bit rigidly copied from ancient Chinese mythology. However, many of the philosophical issues written are indeed profound.

If it were put on the modern day and everyone in the world knew about it on Xinwen Network, Weird would have blown himself up.

Without telling you how good your writing is, let me ask you how much the book has to do with jungle knives. The title of your book, "I Have a Jungling Knife", is not to mention the main plot, but at least it is a main item. The jungle knife written in the early stage did not have a strong sense of existence, and it disappeared in the later stage. What you wrote might as well be titled "I Come to Another World to Create a Path". The protagonist's main plot is to do this, and then give him a talent, gain deduction ability, or purify and absorb resentment. We came here looking for the hunting knife, but it turned out that the hunting knife was missing, and we didn't see much use for it. We couldn't even pick up the golden finger. You still blame us for talking about you. I didn't read it carefully. I thought your writing was good at first, but then it became more and more biased. Who can say that about you?

Among all the big guys who say this book is not good, can you recommend one that you think will work for me, a newbie, and let me take a look? Let me see what you say is good, oh! By the way, don't recommend trivial stories. The plot should be clear and logical. The main character and supporting characters should have online IQs. Kill decisively but not brainlessly. Don't become a bitch when you meet a girl. The benefits flow best. Let me, a 13-year-old novelist, take a look at the books that the big guys usually read.

As an old bookworm, let me express my opinion I don't know if you really understand it or if you pretend to understand it, you are all blowing rainbow farts here. Anyway, I have read more than a hundred chapters and I still don't understand what is written? The whole story is written around the protagonist. The supporting characters are all tool men with no IQ, they are a mess and don't tell the right story.

It did not write about the awesomeness of the jungle knife. Instead, it was inexplicably hunted down like a lost dog from the beginning. This is very frustrating.

What the author wrote is poisonous. In that deserted village, the protagonist has a second-level jungle knife on his body, but the protagonist pats the shoulders of the three "ghosts" (temporarily called them), which should cause damage to the "ghosts". The author also said in the previous chapter that the second-level jungle knife causes magic damage to "enemies" or ghosts within a certain range! (Everyone who plays moba should know this) No matter whether the "wild monster" attacks you or not, it will cause indiscriminate damage as long as it is within the range.

No one says anything, I'll come to the sofa! The author has done a great job! It's a pity that this month's investment has been used up.

The description of the anecdote is very good, but the character description is too poor. At first, I thought he was a knight, with principles, bottom line, and IQ! Later I discovered that logic is messed up, principles are non-existent, and IQ is based on comparison! I saw him abandon the book after entering the palace. It was really unsightly! Why is there such a thing as the main god space in the Bronze Gate? Just ask if someone comes! Kill the worthless aliens! Why are you letting people in? You're looking for weirdos everywhere and now they're coming to your door, why don't you go and cut them down? Let's not talk about Hong Yi for now. The woman who repaired the Jiu Zhang Machine slashed your face with a knife. How could you still be talking and laughing! Return to heaven and earth? After entering the palace, I couldn't help but hurry up and see the stone tablet! Don't even know what you are doing? He also helped others deal with troubles, but they still wanted to kill him, and even looked at the stone tablets and asked for help! Why is our time travel guy starting to fear the imperial power, or is he demonstrating the author's IQ in this idiot-like way?

I feel like the author is probably a bit of a licker, always making the protagonist behave uncharacteristically and have psychological activities.

The rest of this book is very good, but any random enemy can pull the protagonist into a fantasy world, which is disgusting to read.

The classic stream-of-consciousness writing method, where you write whatever comes to mind, there is no main line, the plot is confusing, and it will never come back to its full circle. A book that most people can understand!

I have been a bookworm for more than ten years and I can't understand it. I really don't understand it. As for the plot of entering the mountain, someone can explain it to me... This book is written in a specious way, giving Xiaobai an inexplicable pretentious feeling... If you talk about weirdness, whether it is the restraint type, the Lord of Mysteries, or the traditional ghost type, I have a house of horrors. Who can be so messed up? You said that you talk about martial arts being weird, where are the demons, and Da Feng is beating the clock, who would be so messed up? How many chapters are said in the comments that they can't understand it, but I didn't understand 8+2. So many people said they couldn't understand it. So what's the problem?

Like to overpower the protagonist? Give the protagonist a life-threatening situation to suppress development, and say otherwise it will collapse later? I am complacent about how good my plot is, but in fact it makes no sense. It seems that if I don't compare it to Long Aotian... Reading is not a torture. If you want results, just dream! 😤

Hey, brothers, I was short of books and found this book. I read through it. There are more than 300 chapters. The first part is good, but the second part is getting more and more confusing. Maybe I didn't read it carefully. The pace is too tight. There is no normal place in the world. The protagonist goes wherever he goes. It's all hallucinations. There are all kinds of text shocks. Sometimes I really can't remember where it is. Oh my god, I really get more and more confused as I read it. Anyway, the only impression I have is that they are constantly fighting. It must be well written. The descriptions are all good, but they are not connected. The main line is not clear. It is like downloading a copy all the time. It is very tiring to read.

I abandoned this book when the protagonist was forcibly imprisoned for three years and his strength was reduced. Is this the same as the book I read back then? After reading more than 6,000 chapters, the protagonist died and was reborn in a new universe, and then got the same poison step by step. I abandoned the book instantly.

Is the protagonist a eunuch? No heroine? Became a eunuch after traveling through time? Sister Queen Luoyu won't accept it?

The overall rhythm is like a supernatural novel, and the protagonist is pushed along by the plot in various confusions, encountering a ghost here and a demon there. People like me who come here to pursue martial arts and become immortals are really disappointed.