Different World Collection and Construction

The writing style is lacking. Novel is written for readers, and Internet articles have been written for more than ten years, and readers have long been harsh and cunning. So, the first chapter has already dissuaded many people. (So the comma after it is not for show, but a pause to make you pay attention to the second half of the sentence.) I hope you can put preparation before starting a new work. If the writing is not good, you can learn and practice; if the plot is not good, change it and tell it to your parents, classmates, colleagues, and friends. A novel is written for people to read. The wider the age span of the work, the stronger the explanation ability.

Let's take a look at the authors who have already pirated their articles. They are indeed better than me.

Received! I will also put it on the shelves next month, let's work together! .

Already ordered and received. Great support~😁

The writing is great, I hope you can read mine

Recommend one vote to support, and then we will order from each other

First order increases popularity.

Very good, has been collected, keep up the good work!

The writing style is barely okay, but it is recommended to divide it into paragraphs. If they are connected together, it will be dry and affect reading. Some things that should be abbreviated should be written less. Also, is the protagonist playing a stand-alone game? And according to the early introduction, the protagonist can try to change the planet to restore the normal environment and then use the people on earth to create civilization and develop technology. This is the real development and production flow of alien civilization. However, the author's writing style may not be easy to hold up. It is recommended to add a reasonable, reliable and practical plug-in system for the protagonist. Come on, author,

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It's not interesting to watch, it's too boring