I Can Travel Through Space

The author's writing is too confusing. There is no main line. Travel through the plot to gain abilities and practice martial arts. Then your main attack is to learn various martial arts. Isn't this a fool! Mainly practice 1. And it will definitely be cost-effective to choose to become an immortal in the end. After practicing, there must be a realistic plot, otherwise there will be no development, what is the point of such a running account.

This book was bearable in the beginning. After all, during the book shortage, it was enough to read it. However, the plot of the assassination was really disappointing. It was so poisonous that it was poisonous to death.

Write about Mao's reality. Very unpleasant to watch

Goldfinger is okay, but the plot is too bad. The poison has been tested and is being rescued...

How to say it! After reading dozens of chapters, I still don't know what the author wants to write. There is no main line or goal.

The writing is messy and I can't even use Golden Finger.

I don't want to read it from the beginning

This ability is quite incredible. If it is written well, it should be quite good. I like this ability very much. I hope the author will work harder and write this story well.

It's a little interesting at first, but then it's extremely poisonous.

What kind of competition is this? I can't bear to see the mess in the back. It's the same in the front. I've been in the world for a few years and I was beaten head-on by gangsters. The man in black almost killed me. Are you here to be funny? There's also the man in black. A woman's reaction is faster than yours and she blocks a knife for you. She can't even react. Her superpowers and martial arts are fake? And in the subsequent plot, where Duan Yu can get cheats and re-enter, and how can he stay there for several years without testing the time ratio after entering? It's still a mindless stroll ahead, and the timing of the plot is also messed up. In short, it gives people the feeling of being poisonous and mindless.

Seeing this Xingzilin, there is something I want to say. The protagonist threatened Quan Guanqing last time (don't talk nonsense). The problem is that you went up and threatened him. He didn't explain clearly what he said nonsense, and there is no evidence. Why should Qiao Feng believe you or not the old man in the gang? Just because I just met you and had a drink?

In the section of the station, it can be seen that Pig's Feet has unhealthy views and is also suffering from mental illness. The second early stage is too watery and meaningless for an online novel. Wouldn't it be better to go directly to the theme? I would like to ask the author, has this book been signed?

The story is good, but there are some loopholes in the logic. As a modern person, it is impossible to live in ancient times for 20 years at a time. Do you need to use shampoo when washing your hair? Do you want to brush your teeth? Also, writing about modern society is a bit toxic. It is recommended not to write about modern society.

I can silently ask why so many time-travel novels first travel to a world that is either Tian Long Ba Bu or The Legend of the Condor Heroes. I am a post-00s generation. I have not read Jin Yong's novels. I also believe that many post-00s generations have not read Jin Yong's novels. All we watch are TV series adapted from Jin Yong's novels.

When I read Chapter 9, I recommended Super Out of Control, but in Chapter 11, it really went into Super Out of Control. Am I a god?

This water is so deep, there is more water than the Pacific Ocean

The idea is good, but the writing is terrible! The plot is too watery

The protagonist who couldn't even defeat the sweeping monk in Tianlong Babu was beaten several times by a few gangsters. What are you doing? Make readers happy