Detective Conan: Only Love and Sorrow

The plot moves too fast and there is no story development at all. So, author, you need to work harder. I have experienced this as a newbie, so don't be too discouraged. If you want to write a good new book, it is best to abandon the book. If you write it for fun, that's up to you. I advise you not to put too much energy here. Accumulating a lot of experience can help you break through the realm of newcomers.

The author's idea is quite good, but the progress is too fast. You can write more cases, and then write emotional ones, interspersed with writing, of course! The premise is that the author does not enter the palace

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Eunuch, eunuch, there is a eunuch!

The first killer? No agility at all?

Yes! Come on, you can read more novels of the same type and find out your feelings.

The pace is so fast😅💦💦

The protagonist should infiltrate the dark organization