I Have a System Space

Come on, I hope you will be on the throne of God

The book is good, and the writing is okay, but some details need to be improved: the protagonist is a time traveler, and he traveled through time after his predecessor became a loser. The article does not mention that the protagonist's character is affected by his predecessor, but many of the protagonist's behaviors are not what a time traveler should have. For example, the predecessor's father drove the protagonist away and let him live an ordinary life. Ran is very angry. This is very unreasonable. Even if the protagonist is not happy (after all, he has just traveled through time and is not familiar with anyone, plus he has Goldfinger, why don't he find a strange place to develop and wait to be troubled by the villains in the tribe?) The protagonist will not be angry at least. After all, he is not the protagonist's biological father, just the father of this body.

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I just laughed. It's a miracle that the protagonist's family can still survive to this day. Gu Yang was obviously sent by the Mu family to seize power. There are so many people in the ancient clan supporting it. Do you want the Mu tribe to annex him quickly?

The ten chapters are all poorly written, cliche, useless, slap-in-the-face flow, dry, tasteless, and toxic.

You said it was bloody or not, but you were assassinated! Maybe it was his father who did it! How could he perform so well than anyone else? ! ! This is not seeking death! The problem is that you are still looking for death, and the protagonist is an adult! And the murderer actually didn't take action...

It's a pity that this type of book might have been popular three years ago, but now it's all a cliché. Let's put it this way, it seems that every protagonist of this type will have deep hatred, especially the internal fighting in the family. In the end, the protagonist will forgive them like a holy mother. Haha, I'm tired of seeing this ending. It's simply terrible. Most people who abandoned the book also gave up after seeing this. I was like this before.

Not bad. Come on, the author, 👍👍👍

Apart from the fact that it makes people confused about bloodline level and cultivation level, it is still a good book. Anyway, it is good to read when there is a book shortage.

The start was too bloody.

Logically speaking, the protagonist and the original owner's father parted ways when they met for the first time, so your subsequent logic is very inconsistent! Can the father of the original owner be the same as his own father? Just admit it when you say you recognize your father? Why do you want to return to the clan? The world is so big, any excuse is just a cover-up, especially when the protagonist himself is in the wild and has the ability to be independent! The three forgivenesses are what a young person possesses? Everything has a standard. If you cross the line and you want to forgive, others will think that you have evil intentions and ulterior motives! The four patriarchs have worked hard for the clan. Even if others give up on the growth of their eldest son, will others bully him and make him commit suicide? The strength of the Five Ancient Clan is so different that the Mu Clan still comes to get married? Picture what? Isn't it normal to intermarry with some kind of snake clan? So under normal logic, the protagonist has an adventure and develops outside, and the ancient tribe is destroyed. He remembers some old feelings, takes revenge, and begins the journey of hegemony! It is recommended that authors write an outline before writing a book, so that logical errors can be appropriately reduced.

Recommended every day, good luck to the author