Life Detective

The writing quality is up to standard, the plot advancement is okay, and the creativity is average and slightly above average. The fantasy elements in the early stage are relatively lacking and slightly single. I hope to build a richer and grander world view in the middle and later stages. Personal opinions and accepting different viewpoints. Thanks.

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After the black-blooded man transformed, the male protagonist took a butcher's knife in his hand. It would take a while to kill him. If there were too many, he could only run away. However, an ordinary person who mistakenly entered the Strange Man Village for two years could fight the black-blooded man for two years with the wings of a statue until the male protagonist came to save him. Moreover, an ordinary person who had to deal with monsters in a different world for two years could assassinate the opponent and even be able to solve the problem of food and clothing. This logic is too strong 😅 Who is the protagonist of the book? And for Cliff to be so arrogant...

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It feels dry and has no sense of atmosphere. I can't quite understand the author's logic in many places. To write a Madonna-like protagonist, you need to have good writing skills and brainwash the readers. Otherwise, no one in today's world would want to be a good person. Since that sentence of the judge (you didn't hit me, why should you support me),

The status will be changed next week, and then the number of updates will be 6,000+ per day, and 10,000 will be updated after it is put on the shelves. (Posting just to urge my own laziness.)

I am a bit of a literary person, so I can write more detailed and tortuous descriptions of the mission process, and the writing is good. Investment has been made, author, come on!

Reciting poetry in every chapter makes me really embarrassed. The key is to sing nondescriptly

Risking his life, the reward is only 10 yuan of charity funds. The key is not his own. So disgusting.

Come on! If nothing else, just for your attitude, even if we don't have money, we have to give you a little support.

I think the author's character creation is a bit stiff emmm. It just feels a bit wrong no matter how you read it.

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Poisonous point 1. The author always gets dirty at the end. I don't know what the author's mood is? It embodies literary talent and artistic youth. But it's so dramatic that I want to take it in when reading the novel. Any inexplicable things in the text will affect the reading. Poisonous Point 2: The plot is meaningless, bland, and has no ups and downs. It's like, it's time to eat today, pour the water, stir-fry the vegetables, and it's over. . . No taste at all.

Are there any of you out there like me who subconsciously ignored the ellipsis when reading the introduction, thinking that it meant stopping an ordinary person holding a butcher knife?

Tijiang~ Is there a female protagonist in this book? (:[___]←Waiting for reply

It's from Douyin. I searched and found that I've also seen it? ? ?

Logic must be more important than writing

I saw it on Douyin before. I also left a message before, saying that I should put it on the bookshelf first and read it later when I have time. But I never had time and only read a few dozen pictures. Today I found out that it is finished. Let's order it all first.

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Dogs and birds are almost becoming protagonists🪖

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The creativity is okay, but the writing style needs to be improved. It feels like a running account. Come on.

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I just came across Douyin by chance, author, cheers

After watching the first two missions, I didn't know how the protagonist found Akito. I just saw the protagonist walking over and turning around.

I feel that the protagonist in the early stage is a bit naive. He suffers or is stupid in small things, which makes people look unhappy.

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It made me feel bad. It's very creative and well thought out, but the writing style is a bit poor. In terms of content, I completely feel that the author can't control it. He doesn't know business knowledge and hasn't checked the information. He wants to write the protagonist as if he has a huge amount of money but doesn't change his original intention. They say that it is easy to go from frugality to luxury and from luxury to luxury. It's hard to be frugal, but it's also true if you don't write well. Great masters don't become great in a day. In order to write a book, those authors don't know how to check the information for several months and integrate it into their own works. To put it bluntly, this is the same as the first thing you do when you have money is to buy forty Charades and drive them together.