On the Self-Cultivation of Feudal Towns

After reading this novel The Eunuch, I actually have a complicated heart. In fact, in terms of content and depth, the author's writing style is okay and the connotation is there, but the problem is that you ignore the protagonist. I feel that the protagonist should be invincible in the beginning, driving high and moving low, but our protagonist has almost no impact on the plot. An excellent protagonist should be the soul of the entire plot, or an important driving force, but the protagonist's presence in this novel is a bit low, which is uninteresting. I think about it and feel involved. Sometimes when you write about him, we realize: Wow, this guy is actually the protagonist. I recommend a book to the author: Becoming a Warlord in the Three Kingdoms (an earlier book). The protagonist of this book, take a look at yourself. His own protagonist In short, if the author is serious about shaping the protagonist, he still has the potential to become a god. After all, the author's background is definitely enough I hope the author can get out of the shadows as soon as possible and start a better book🤓

Well, let me talk about it here. If anyone thinks that a certain chapter of the author is too watery, please reply below. If it gets a lot of likes, I will update another chapter that day.

This book is so ugly, the readers reading it must be very handsome

The front part is okay, but the main character role in the back part is too little.

The overall feeling is a bit messy. It is written in several places and the characters are not described enough. It gives people the feeling that the theme can never be found. It may be that the author is not strong enough in writing. Either the writing is like a super god mechanic who builds players' power, or it uses the game system to farm normally. The main shortcoming is the chaotic rhythm.

See if it fits ♬︎*(๑ºั╰︎╯︎ºั๑)♡︎

Well, how should I put it? It doesn't look smooth enough and it's unclear who belongs to which force. It feels a bit chaotic. I hope it will be better in the future. My personal suggestion is to make each person's chapter a little longer and more sequential. Of course, this is just my personal suggestion.

By the way, how did this book fall into the game category? It feels like it can be traced back to fictional history.

The author is really good. Di Jian is following the template of Ban Chao and Jiang Wei. No matter how you look at it, you feel that this guy is about to become popular? I can't bear to read on This main plot has shadows of the Three Kingdoms and the late Song Dynasty. Maybe the protagonist's surname is Yang? I have to say, I feel that this novel was very successful. I kept reading until midnight and couldn't stop.

The moment the flying dragon rides on your face, you have already lost (resolute face).

The author's writing style is pretty good, but what the hell is your previous setting? The Grand Master is completely useless during battles. It was also said that this is a game and it was in closed beta, but it disappeared after a while. It's so confusing, author, you must not have written an outline. I just wrote it randomly, I wrote it wherever I thought.

Writing a book would be great if it were based on historical texts, but isn't this a game classification? And what are the previous settings used for? It appeared once before and then disappeared, so what's the point of writing it down?

It's okay, not intellectually depressing, not poisonous, but few people read it and don't have any recommendation votes. I feel like I'm going to pounce

The book is okay, but the author is obsessed with the setting. You have decided that in order to attract the female player protagonist to have an affair with King Zhao, you should continue. How can you change it? Scumbag

What's the point of those few players? It's better to just write an alternate history. Your game that looks like a mechanic has been closed to public beta. It's a game but not a game. I don't know what you want to express. The so-called panel of the protagonist looks useless.

The writing style is not very good, the writing is very messy, which makes people feel long-winded and streamlined. Moreover, the dialogue between the characters is very bland and a bit out of character. But there is nothing poisonous about it, so come on, author.

Author, you have so many typos that it gives me a headache.

"Wolf Gu" was used to describe a wolf's living habits in ancient times. It was a metaphor for a wolf always looking left and right and back when walking. Later, it was used to describe people's caution, suspicion, and evil intentions. "Hongkuang" refers to a person's straightforward and upright character. These two words are obviously derogatory and positive, so how can they be the same word? Do you have such a suspicious yet upright temperament? Wenwen: gentle and polite; Erya: elegant. Describes a person with a gentle attitude and gentle actions. ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

The writing is really good, but there are no readers to read it. The author can really give up and it is difficult to achieve results.

Author, it's a bit too confusing.

The author's writing style is very good

Come on, the writing is really good.

I was a little confused when I saw it, the turn was too fast.

Author, your writing style is really good. This book is just like a eunuch. It's mainly because it's too messy. Please think carefully about the next book and write down an outline. I will definitely come back to see you, hehe!

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