Take the Red Building to the Red Building

Judging from what the author has written up to this point, the plot is a bit vicious and the protagonist is a bit circuitous. (The review of this book is only a personal one-sided and subjective point of view) First of all, the protagonist Jia Huan is a time traveler. No matter how easy-going his character is, I am sure that he and his surroundings must be disharmonious and disharmonious in the early stages (due to the difference in life philosophy and life value). In the author's writing, Jia Huan can obey the rules, legal principles, and morals of the times to a certain extent, and integrate into the class environment of ancient clans. I think the author's writing is very good, and he does not forcefully depress the characters in Red Mansions. Secondly, when Jia Huan was raped, I personally felt that his behavior was very consistent with the status of an unpopular bastard. He did not forcefully slap him in the face, but later used other roundabout methods to prove his innocence. But is the protagonist too pedantic? As a time traveler, what is different about him? When he obeys the rules and etiquette, is he using etiquette and law to protect himself? How could he have so much contact with Qin Keqing after being kicked out of Jia's house? Although the writing is very vague, it is not difficult to see Qin's special feelings for Jia. This point is very poisonous. Furthermore, Jia Huan's family affection for Jia Zheng is a little too awkward, which is very awkward. The protagonist is a time traveler. Even if it is said to be a fantasy, he still wants to take away the grace of karma and rebirth, but is he still being led by the Rongguo Mansion? What is the difference between this and walking from the bow to the stern of a broken ship? In the end, he started to lose his temper. He was still so patient and gave in. He really had no temper at all.

The protagonist's character is really seriously ill...

It was so poisonous that the protagonist was released. There were too many typos. . . I originally thought there would be many changes in traveling through the Red Mansions with this Dream of Red Mansions. However, except for Qin Keqing who did not die in the plot after reading the book, the others were still bound by the cannibalism. However, the author has a good grasp of the depressive feeling of cannibalism. I was kicked out of the house again and again. Although I was on the list, I was not even as good as a disciple. Seeing that everyone else is responding to everyone's call, here I am alone. In the end, she was deceived into marrying her. My aunt was very proud of herself, but she looked around but was helpless. It was so realistic that no one other than the chess player could break the game.

Is the author black for the sake of Lin Daiyu? Every time I write it, it's inexplicable and abrupt. Have you ever been emotionally hurt? It felt like - Xiao Li was walking on the road, saw his colleague Lao Wang, and said hello, "Hello!" Lao Wang was secretly angry when he heard this, thinking that at least I entered the work earlier than you, and my age is also here, but he didn't even call me "you"? ! When I went back, I became more and more angry and couldn't sleep at night. I went to the company the next day and was very depressed. I met Xiao Li again. As soon as I heard him say hello "you", I finally couldn't hold back my anger and stabbed him with a knife. Poor Xiao Li died before he could say "Okay", but Lao Wang suddenly felt better... If you have mental problems, seek medical treatment as soon as possible.

Although this Jia Huan Guo is extremely aggrieved, it is indeed more in line with his identity. First of all, he is a concubine, and his biological mother, Aunt Zhao, may not be a good concubine. . . In ancient times, "concubines were bought and sold". To put it bluntly, Jia Huan's background was the biggest "stain". From the perspective of that era, without talking about the equality of everyone, it can be said that it is inevitable that he will be suppressed. His "mother" is Mrs. Wang, who naturally suppresses him, and he has almost no room for resistance. If he is very motivated, he will naturally be suppressed by Mrs. Wang. Mrs. Wang is afraid that he will block Baoyu's way, and there is nothing to say about educating Jia Huan to help Baoyu. It is impossible for Mrs. Wang (the mistress) to think this way. You cannot expect the original pair to have a concubine to have a child. At present, it seems that Jia Huan was destitute and forced to leave the house, but in fact. . Really down and out. Unless he is super powerful, then Mrs. Wang and the others will be done with it, being trampled on and exposed in various ways. At the same time, he has a good reputation assessment method so that he can erase the stigma of molesting his mother and maidservant. Of course, I hope that the author's Jia Huan can make progress (in civil and military affairs, not business). The status of merchants in ancient times is really unimaginably low. There are too few businessmen who are respected by others and live in peace until death.

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Even if the author doesn't like Daiyu, there is no need to criticize her so much. In the play, Baochai and Xiangyun slandered Daiyu, but Daiyu has not slandered anyone else. I'm not a fan

Although I don't really support Lin Daiyu's misfortune, it's enough to see a bunch of people having to read and understand Dream of Red Mansions. Love is pure and so on. If you understand it like this, Cao Cao is afraid that he will laugh out of the coffin board. Although Cao Gong describes Bao Dai with fond memories, what is Cao Gong's own age, identity and background? Free love and private giving and receiving? Why don't you see why every time I write about Baochai's character, he always has a general sense of propriety, but when it comes to Lin Daiyu, he becomes sharp-tongued? Didn't you really have some ideas in mind when Mr. Cao wrote it? Besides, is it really true that A Dream of Red Mansions is just a garden drama with palaces and houses fighting? If this is really the case, why are the Four Great Masters a ghost? Why not just watch The Legend of Mi Yue and The Legend of Zhen Huan and Bu Bu Jingxin? The entire Dream of Red Mansions describes the rise and fall of the Jia family in the feudal era. It reflects Cao Cao's own confusion and regret about the past. Pure love? What a pure P. Is it the main line that each one of them really becomes a youth idol? Is it okay if the author is Cao Xueqin and not Qiong Yao? Why is it that there are strange gods and gods in the beginning of the book, and from beginning to end the plot is full of negative thoughts about fate and destiny? Have you become the author of reading comprehension before you have even read it? Why did Jia Baoyu become a monk? It was Jia Baoyu who was brought in by Cao Gong. He knew that he had escaped and was unable to change the ending of grief and self-blame. Dream of Red Mansions In Dream of Red Mansions, Cao Gong saw a tall building built in his home, saw guests at a banquet at home, and finally saw the building in his home collapse. It was a dream of glory and wealth. How could the content in this book be the theme of the love intrigues between maids, mothers-in-law, young ladies and daughters-in-law in the backyard? Even if we use modern thinking to interpret and do reading comprehension, it is still feudal ethics and cannibalism. The central idea should be self-reliance and self-reliance and hard work. What the hell is love and love so entangled? No matter which party Baochai and Daiyu belong to, don't talk about anything all day long. The two heroines are both feudal women. Whether it is Daiyu's new thoughts on modern women or Baochai's general knowledge and vision, it is all nonsense. Do you think you are a young lady? Put it on Bao Dai one by one? Why don't you think about your identity in reality? Why don't they think that no matter how good the maids around them are, they can only fill a house? Is it interesting to raise it too high? Suitable? Daiyu is true to her innocence, but in the final analysis she is clever, but she lacks vision and spirit. She only waits for the day when she and her brother Bao will stay together forever to express their friendship. As for other people, when has she taken care of them? If you meet someone you don't like, it's good enough not to say a few sarcastic words. Baochai's knowledge is generally true, but she is independent-minded and purposeful from beginning to end. She also attaches great importance to etiquette and rules, and has the style of a lady in the feudal era. Don't expect her to have any innate ideas about human rights and equality for everyone?

A pig's feet are mixed with a dog's, even though they are bruised and scarred, they still kneel and lick them, and their heads are green and have nothing left. The one who kisses him will die without a burial place, and the one who hurts him will enjoy his efforts. Late comers should be careful. I was in danger of being poisoned to death. Thanks to many years of poisoning experience, I can barely survive and am in the process of detoxification. . .

A brief discussion of the mistakes made by the author: 1. The writing is too cruel. After all, online articles are cheap fast-moving consumer goods. Most of the consumer groups are tortured to death by study and life. After finally finding some entertainment, they are tortured by the author. Why will people pay to read it? Cheap or not! 2. Bao Dai is paired with non-Jia Baoyu as the protagonist. Come on, few of the Red Mansions fans want to make up for Bao Dai's failure. People with that kind of thinking rarely read Red Mansions fan novels, or even online novels. They are all eager to dance in the square, play chess, fish and go to a senior college. I dare to say this, no matter which platform, any Red Mansion fan fiction written by someone other than Jia Baoyu as the protagonist Bao Dai will not do well. In fact, this is the case so far. 3. Heilin Daiyu. Among online novels that focus on Red Mansions, the one that should not be guilty of the most is Heilin Daiyu. This was chosen by the market. You can hack Jia Mu, Jia She and his wife, Jia Zheng and his wife, Jia Zhen and his wife, Jia Lian, Wang Xifeng, Sanchun, Xue Baochai and so on. If Lin Daiyu is hacked, her grades will be very poor. No matter how good the story is or how good the writing is, the effect will be twice the result but half the effort. Why? Because you are reading a Red Mansion fanfiction, when many people read it, they will subconsciously bring in the beautified Sister Lin in their hearts. Looking at the comments, it seems that Jia Baoyu is going to become a monk, and the protagonist helped Jia Baoyu set up a fort to overthrow Lin Daiyu. Isn't this chasing away guests? Well, originally because there were few people who wrote and read, the only remaining fans of Red Mansion have also been driven away. It's no wonder that we can get good results. You are too late to cut!

When I saw Qin Keqing having an affair with my father-in-law, I was so angry that my internal organs ached and my body trembled.

There are too many stories about Red Mansions, and the more I read them, the less interesting they become. In the future, whoever reads the Red Mansions who won't feel aggrieved, remember to tell me about the great stories about Red Mansions.

Only a perverted masochist would read this book. You are almost a eunuch, classmate, you are still in school, right? You have not been beaten by society, and the plot is childish and ridiculous.

After reading Chapter 81, let me share my personal opinion. The plot of this book is okay, and the characters do not deviate too much. But the timeline is very unreasonable. The plot follows the events of the original work, but does not consider the time interval. It looks very awkward and unreasonable. Also, the plot develops very quickly, which is an advantage, but it is also true that the plot advances too fast, and there are many bugs and minor flaws. For example, when building the Grand View Garden, Lin Ruhai did not die. Logically speaking, the Rongning family did not have the money to build the garden. It is midnight at the third quarter of the Chou Zheng period, but the rest of the book is written in the afternoon. The time is a little unclear, and it seems confusing. Also, the Xue family should move out of Lixiang Garden at that time and so on. If you don't think too much about these, just watching the plot is still good. If the author can write more carefully and polish it more, the results should be better. Come on, author!

I originally thought it was okay, but the more I looked at it, the more flaws it had, including typos and mechanical repetition, and now the plot is starting to **

Did the author forget about the golden finger? Such a large personal space

The most amazing thing is that I can show the book to the people of the Jia family. What happened is that Jia Huan leaked his personal belongings. Isn't it an obvious curse that he couldn't have children?

If you copy Zhao Yi's poems, you will be considered a madman. What if you are labeled as Mi Heng? It is not as good as Gong Zizhen's. Whether it is the patriotic sentiments of Autumn Heart Like the Sea and the Waves, or the eclectic spirit of promoting talents, it is a very good script.

I have not finished reading Dream of Red Mansions. This novel makes me more and more disgusted with Lin Daiyu and Jia Baoyu. How can I read Dream of Red Mansions in the future? Did the author over-interpret the two main characters?

To be honest. Depressing and boring, too many private goods. Watching a fan of Red Mansion can make people feel uncomfortable, and that's enough. It's not as good as the recently watched Aristocrat in Red Mansions, at least the romance and emotional details were brilliantly depicted.

The protagonist went to beat Mrs. Wang, but only said harsh words without giving any evidence. . . Isn't it a bit illogical? . . 🤫🤫🤫

There are so many books on Red Mansions, but they are all scientific examinations, and there are no martial arts students. Those who have read martial arts are basically cheating.