Farming by All People

The setting is very good, but can it be less affectionate? There are only 5 people at the footbath to rescue?

I gave you a recommendation and canceled it. Goodbye.

In fact, this book is quite good, but there are two problems. The first point is that it has strayed away from the core. Farming is just farming, and the key lines are not clearly grasped. The second point is that the various plot connections are too anxious. You must slow down and don't think about where to write. There must be foreshadowing. The emotional drama is very messy, the plot is messy, and the rhythm is also messy! I will rewrite my next book using this formula. I think if you can control these two points in your writing, you will definitely be able to write it well!

When will the protagonist stop licking those women? It doesn't help the protagonist at all.

There is a reason why this book is not popular. It was the first time I saw a novel about a pig's feet in a coma for a year. When I read this, I was very depressed! It's a great subject for a novel. Can't you always be the first person? Forcibly pull the pig's feet down, and come to catch up again,! Then show off and get slapped in the face!

The idea is good, the beginning is good, but what the hell is going on from the third chapter? Spending more than two chapters explaining the background? You only have two chapters into this plot! As a result, it took me almost three chapters to explain the background that could be explained very clearly in just a few sentences? The explanation is so exaggerated? Is the aura of forced pretense so obvious? Author, are you sure these first five chapters were written by one person? The first two chapters are 8 points, and the third to fifth chapters are 2 points. It cannot be higher.

This one-year coma ruined this novel

I thought it was quite good after reading it. I suggest changing the beginning. In addition, the woman posted it a bit too fast. In the end, the whale destroying Japan is really poisonous. . .

You just farm the land, but suddenly your farming becomes fantasy. Fantasy is fantasy. The masses have just begun to practice cultivation and are destroying the country. Are you jumping too fast? ? ?

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After reading the introduction, I thought it was a farming novel. After reading the novel... This book has nothing to do with the introduction.

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To be honest, the subject matter is very good, very novel, and interesting, but can you please stop licking it, work on your land with peace of mind, or develop other branches, don't write about women, or just one.

I thought the protagonist had a golden finger. . ? ? ? Not even? ? ?

I can't stand the free chapters anymore

There are too many nonsense words, so I can't concentrate on writing about farming space! Do you want to return it to him and go to the training camp?

It has deviated from the main line. The name is farming.

It's a newbie, so the writing is inevitably immature, and the details are worthy of scrutiny. Your collection recommendations are the greatest encouragement! Special thanks to Shui Yisihan for his great guidance! 🙂

I was in a coma for a year and this novel was basically ruined. It was fine with you for a month or two, but in reality I was in a coma for a year. There are too many people behind the high end.

It's a bit weird, I can't see it.

Some parts are too toxic. I even looked at the writing date. I was surprised that the author still wrote like this nineteen years ago. I hope the author will change it. If the subject matter was not good, I would not be able to persist

Sorry, my poison resistance is still low 💀💀💀

The ending was a bit unexpected. However, I still think this book is well written. Especially the emotional aspects, and those few copies are also very well written, but I don't understand why the author can't keep going. It's a pity.

The writing is quite good, although it is a bit immature, but it is already a rare good article. At least there's a certain freshness to it. Secondly, the writing is smoother and the story structure is more reasonable. It is a good book worth recommending. The author works hard to update and support all orders.

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