Jidao Xuanjun

Author, come on＾0＾~You can do it

I haven't even finished one chapter yet. I don't know what the author was thinking. Isn't it possible to write about a maid or a maid without a sister or a beautiful neighbor at the beginning of the book? This beautiful neighbor, whose parents disappeared at the beginning, lives in the protagonist's house. Please give up. Now readers are disgusted with this, and you still want to challenge it. Well

This book is so beautifully written, I have read over 100 of them, and I am addicted to it. In today's fast-paced society, I have long been in a book shortage, but this book can make me completely forget myself. If I hadn't experienced it myself, I would really be unbelievable. This book does not stick to forms and routines, its imagination is astonishing, and its writing is excellent. It is actually a novel that needs to be read carefully and carefully. I give this novel 8 points! Come on author!

Brainless white text, Long Aotian stallion, extremely poisonous

I felt very silly after reading the first few chapters. A small force is arresting people everywhere to make elixirs, and even the government dare not take care of it. Are you telling me that the country has not been destroyed? ? ?

For a bookworm of eight years, writing novels also requires careful attention. The plug-in is unconditional and you can practice it at the beginning (nb, then what is the use of your background? You might as well use the background of global high-level martial arts). You can't practice half of the skills (forced to persuade him to quit). He ran to the danger zone with Duan Qing on his back (forced explanation, fearing that she would die). The most important thing is that the realm combat power is unreasonable and the scene is unreasonable (Valley of the Evil). In a word, it is full of loopholes and extremely poisonous.

See Chapter 4! Such a brainless arrangement for the villain to blatantly capture a person from the town to practice martial arts? Aren't ordinary people as a group (on the verge of extinction) yet?

A bunch of trash, pretending to be the descendants of Yan and Huang. Where has the spirit of the ancestors who tasted hundreds of herbs gone? Leave it to me here, I will come back later to write a follow-up review. 🤫

I think the reason why your book is not popular must be because of your blindness and poor practice. You also have a long tail. Why don't you go to heaven?

Many plots are inexplicable! The character of the protagonist is somewhat unclear

Fortunately, the plot was okay, but after watching it, I felt it was too cliche. Chapter 50 abandoned

It looks good, come on＾0＾~＾0＾~＾0＾~, keep it up

The world setting is very problematic! There are ghosts and monsters everywhere, but ordinary people can't find martial arts secrets.

In Chapter 100, I gave up my physical body and started cultivating again. Then was it all water the year before?

Rubbish, I can't write without women, idiot

I have read fifty chapters and the author is getting better and better.

It's a bit messy. Personally, I prefer this simple and clear golden finger, which can reduce ten skills with one effort. Too messy. I've read more than 50 chapters and I don't quite understand it.

Come on🪖

The more you write, the better. The latter part is pretty good.

🤭Did the author offend someone? Why are there so many trolls? This book is quite interesting after reading the previous one. Why are there so many trolls?

Where to make shame Chapter 70 is charged

Well written and worth reading.

This book feels like something is wrong and I can't express it. It should be very straightforward. The sense of immersion is poor. When I read it, I always feel that there are flaws and I don't understand the specific flaws. I like to add some text, but I don't know why I always feel impatient and impatient when I read this book and can't read calmly.

It's not a Yakuza style at all, it's boring as hell

IQ, people will not run away if they escape from the herbs

The author does not interact with the reader. . . Like a robot

Ren Ren can also overcome other poisonous points. The key is his master. When he sees the beautiful woman going to help, he just doesn't go. This logic is simple, then you are even better as a master! Why don't you come? The officials in this book not only fail to protect people, but also help evil cultivators to arrest people in an open and honest manner. How many people can watch this?

The humans here are actually made of clay. If they want to practice cultivation, they will turn into monsters. I can't see it.

The front is okay, but I don't know what I'm writing from the back. I'm making elixirs and formations, but there are so many reasons.