Eternal Wonders

The overall feeling is okay, everything is supernatural. The first three constructions can be done, and the big concept of the world is slowly reduced to the station. But there is a problem, that is, the language is not particularly smooth in some places, or it may be a bit complicated. I suggest you sort it out and pay attention to it later. There are other things I wrote directly in this chapter, you can read them yourself. Only personal opinion, come on, I will continue to pay attention!

I haven't read it yet, but I still want to say that you have even written the text of the plot with so many words. Is it difficult to come up with chapter names? How can you attract readers without chapter titles? I didn't bother to click in to see it at all**.

Creation is not easy, please support me 🌹

1. Chapter names... There are no chapter names. How can you attract readers? 2. The Silver Alliance spawned too early, and it was ineffective. It's not as good as the ones Zhang Tui brought were actually living people. 3. This channel is already cool, so just generate it for love. If you want to adapt it, you have to buy it out! 4. Don't pay the IQ tax. Communicate more with people in the author's circle, and then you can avoid many pitfalls. 5. The collection of Silver Alliance will drop drastically in the next two days, so be mentally prepared. PS: I made a post seriously. Because there is no chapter name, I didn't even click to read the text. Will others click to read it?

That's 5,000 yuan spent, you're rich!

Can the author get his money back in this way...

Well... Come on. I'm a hard-working hustler. 🙂

The one who got bombed by Bai Yin, I thought he was the boss.

Boss, give yourself a reward of 10,000. . . Really rich

The author rewards himself, it's really a waste of money to burn

Oops, I'll go and blow someone up for ten thousand dollars. The author is awesome.

Because there is no title, I don't know what is written in each chapter. I insisted on reading four chapters. I was confused and couldn't get the pain point.

I really admire your perseverance... This book is like this and you are still updating it! Just work hard, all I can do is give you recommendations every day...

What's wrong with this book? Why are the results so bad? Has it offended anyone?

... I didn't even notice that your book was finished. I thought it was still loading. I ordered it all for free. It should be almost a full order. I didn't notice that I bought the latest chapter anyway. The full order I promised in the early stage of this book should be regarded as fulfilled. In the end, I have to complain, this book is really short...

Well, the new book was completely gone even before it hit the shelves...