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Writing a book should make readers feel real, and authenticity will resonate. The first thing readers see is your story and language, and you hope to carefully judge the feasibility of the story, and don't have some silly plots. For example, in the first chapter, you know that you can't beat the inverse, but you still want to be a hero and send a text message to a good friend without caring about his plot. I thought he had some big tricks to defeat the inverse, but you ended up slapping him in the face. In addition, two good friends almost got killed, saying that the protagonist is young and immature? But you also clearly stated in your writing that the protagonist knows that he cannot beat Ni due to the gap between him and Ni, which seems awkward to me. The story is novel and good, but I hope some attention will be paid to the small details.

Come on, pen pal, voted 😏

Come on, it's already collected, let's visit each other's houses.

We have received it, we have received it from each other, and we have encouraged each other.

It's really well written, keep it up and wait for the update

I beg you, can you please update more? ! Every day is not enough! 🔨

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! 😭😭😭Thank you Ji Xiaoyi for your support, I am so happy that I can't even speak coherently!

Come on, believe in yourself😁

Already invested, come on, author, I don't want to be disappointed with whichever book I invest in 😭😭

My prairie dog screamed all morning, and I was so excited that I almost doubled the number. After thinking about it, I still held back. To be normal and normal, the most important thing is to write well. You see, I have received website shortcomings. Do you want to collect, recommend, and invest?

The opening is too big, and the settings in the early stage are too dense and too dense, giving people the feeling of reading science all the way, which makes the originally compact and smooth conflict plot boring. In the early stage, it is better to avoid large and continuous sections of setting science and focus on the plot.

I think it would be better/funny to let Xing Luo be the protagonist

It's very beautiful, why don't you write about it?

Talk about this IQ (｀Δ´)!

Open a new book in a while, I will be your helmsman then