The Man Who Became a Superstar

After reading about 100 chapters, I would like to give some advice to the author 1: The explanation of the background is generally insufficient and unclear; 2: After reading about 100 chapters, the protagonist has no identity at first, and then his parents come out, they all belong to the big boss, and he comes out Extremely sudden; 3: Typos, wrong paragraphs, missing words; 4: There is no basis for plagiarism and citations in the article, just like writing whatever you want; 5: I don't know the background of song creation, or Jin Da's works, and all kinds of quotations are forcibly matched, nondescript.

I rarely write book reviews, but what the hell are you writing? If you come up with two good songs in a row, anyone with a brain will support it, right? Don't agents need brains? And what is that about the principal? ? ? It's so toxic, stop writing it, it's embarrassing. . Rub the IQs of all the characters and book friends on the ground.

I just want to give my opinion. There is no big problem with your setting. It's just that the description of the protagonist is a bit cowardly. The background is not explained well and the reading is confusing. There are some parts that can be written very wonderfully but are ignored. You should write the lyrics. If you don't write lyrics, you feel like you have lost your soul. You are afraid that others will say that you are poor at word count. You can write down the wonderful parts of the lyrics.

Watching this made me feel depressed and aggrieved.

I really don't want to say this anymore... I wanted to give up after reading dozens of chapters, but I still kept hope, hoping that the subsequent plot would be better than the previous one. Then I read more than a hundred chapters... But now I still want to give up... I really don't like that agent, and he interferes too much in the relationship between the protagonist and the two of them? Although she regards the heroine as her own daughter, there is no need to interfere like this, right? It makes the male protagonist embarrassed... Also, I know that the male protagonist just wants to be low-key, so he doesn't care about anything, but I still hope that the male protagonist can be more high-profile. After all, the previous two times have already made people feel high-profile, and it is useless to be low-key, right? It's fine to pamper your wife, but that's a little bit... The male protagonist's identity should be explained clearly at the beginning. It's really a bit confusing to figure it out bit by bit later. Also, when netizens say that the male protagonist is a waste, I think the male protagonist should come out and clarify. After all, a woman doesn't want her man to be a waste, but the male protagonist said that he should protect the female protagonist well. Is this still necessary? Then the heroine is too humble. I have never seen such a humble person in reality, but I have seen it in the book. Also, the author should pay more attention to omitted words and typos in the book. After all, if a word is omitted, the meaning expressed is not very obvious. Nowadays, Chinese culture is broad and profound. If a word is omitted, we will not be asked to guess what the missing word is, right? ! I hope the author can improve after seeing the comments from us readers, and work hard next time, come on! ↖(^ω^)↗

A million-word novel, with less than 50,000 recommendation votes, watch with caution; with less than 100,000 recommendation votes, you can read it; it's already a million words, but there are so few votes. I don't know why. 😰

"Procrastination, frustration" How to say it? After reading dozens of chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. ***It's an online novel. It's just a running account. What is the plot setting? A delayed batch. Both are married and have known each other for more than ten years. The heroine can be happy for a long time because of a little bit of care, I'm so drunk. Bullying me is an idiot. The script sets up a parallel world time travel. The protagonist was so evil before the time travel, but how did he become like this after the time travel? The author has no idea what the readers want. In dozens of chapters, he doesn't mention a single word about why the protagonist is dumped after he is an idiot chasing a girl. Why does the heroine chase the hero like a fool? Just like it? There is not enough reason! What is the concept of ten years? One has several decades. Also, if the male protagonist slaps others in the face, can it be more refreshing? Why don't they go teach? Purely disgusting. The male protagonist brings the culture of another world to this world. Anyone can choose music, movies, novels. It's totally possible to have a great time. It's been dozens of chapters, and I'm still feeling so aggrieved after reading it. Are the two friends of the male protagonist **? If not, then the male protagonist is **. Anyone can just grab a script and take it out, and they can win the grand prize in a matter of minutes. Isn't it great? What do our readers want to see? Can the plot stop being so protracted? Who the hell watches you teach children to learn music every day? Do you understand love? Do we want to see love? The male protagonist is the proud man of heaven, can he live his life without being so frustrated? ? ? Can you worry about money for dozens of chapters? ? ? The female protagonist is a star. She can just play some music and become famous in an instant. Wouldn't it be nice to raise a male protagonist? Why don't you feel aggrieved by setting up some bullshit agent to scold your agent every day? ? ? Can the slap-in-the-face plot be made more intense? What are you reading in the novel? Especially this type. If you don't show us a cool novel, you should write the romance in a more detailed way. There are about ten chapters and the heroine has only a few words. How to let people watch it. All the trivial matters of life. It's so annoying to see.

Time has been eaten by dogs. Is this writing method trying to go back to ancient times?

Three Golden Chapters, I only read Chapter 2, and a manager came, so I had to run away.

Even if the manager has a good relationship, he can't interfere in the relationship between two people. It's enough to be a bystander. Doing things like this in the middle doesn't look good.

It's better to get into the main story as soon as possible, help your wife, and don't talk too much, such as teaching things, and there are too many agent plots. It's a bit awkward to watch. I hope it can be improved.

The protagonist's work is too complex, can you handle it? You actually went to teach. Did you ask for leave every three days? Without being scolded by parents, there is no main line that is messed up. I have been working around for a while, not knowing what I want to do. Either you play entertainment, or you play education. Rambling.

Betting and fighting every day, getting slapped in the face every day. Like a middle schooler. Celebrities don't need to mess around with their virtues. Anyone who is not good at being famous is like a ghost. There are a few fools, and the fools are all cold.

Brother, it's not that I won't help you, but there is something wrong with your writing style. I can't stand it anymore, so leave! !

This is a book that I just came across. I should have searched for it before. Maybe it was because of the author's overly pretentious introduction, so I didn't read it at the time, nor did I save it. Due to the lack of books recently, I didn't bother with the introduction and just collected and read the articles. After reading the previous opening chapter, it is true that the book has many poisonous points. The protagonist of the book is a person who has been reborn. In his previous life, he was an all-around artist and a highly accomplished artist. This life is considered a love affair. I devote ten years to the one I love, and then become decadent and self-destructive. Fortunately, I have been loved by my true love for ten years. I am extremely lucky, and I swear to guard this luck. But here comes the embarrassing point. The mindless broker conflicts are so toxic that it really makes people speechless. The author might as well take it in and think about it. Even if you were busy with your acting career in your previous life and had no time to enjoy life, as an artist who was once at the top, you can change your lifestyle, try a new life, and be questioned by others, but your basic dignity is absolutely impossible to lose. I know clearly that the lover I swore to protect in this life is from the entertainment industry, and I am also a figure who is familiar with the rules of the entertainment industry, but the first thing I think of is not how to help my lover, but to muddle along and let others unscrupulously belittle and slander myself. As the saying goes, if a person has no faith, he will not be established. In reality, there are indeed many people who make a fortune in silence, and there are also people who live a low-key life. But these people must be recognized by people in their own circle of making a fortune or living a low-key life. It is impossible to be unknown in all circles, and it is impossible to be useless in the eyes of everyone. If that's the case, this person may not be alive in this world, or he may be a waste.

The protagonist was a superstar before time travel, but became a bitch after time travel. He took it for granted that he was scolded, which is unscientific. When the author sets up the character's experience, his character is finalized. In the story, if the author violates the reader's understanding of the character, the reading will be awkward and the book will collapse.

Is this an agent, better than her mother? So disgusting

I was wondering how the labor and management had the patience to read Chapter 94. I felt like I was out of my mind.

It's not just as long as you have a good work. Public relations are also very, very important. If you slap someone in the face, your reputation will be so bad that the movie theaters won't show your movie. You will be slapped in the face. The acting skills are much better, and there are a few who are really popular. There is no means at all, it is just a nonsense, and the propaganda and entertainment orientation are very important. Who in the entertainment industry relies solely on their works, without any means at all.

I was disgusted when the heroine called the hero brother. During the period, the manager acted like a clown and ran away. I couldn't hold on anymore.

You have used your practical actions to tell Qidian authors and readers what three chapters of persuasion means. You are great and you are a role model. I don't read for pleasure, not for abuse!

See the choir for a bet! ! ! ! I really can't stand it anymore, so childish! ! !

It's in the headlines every day, even if you hit a child, it's not that excessive even if you entertain yourself to death, right? Shennong is dead

It's so uncomfortable that I have to complain about it. I read more than a dozen chapters and it was awkward from beginning to end! You said that in the original world, a star who won awards and won awards and was almost an all-around star was already a superstar at this stage. However, after time travel, he met this Teddy-like manager at the beginning. He started yelling and scolding you, and you were as obedient as a dog, with the demeanor of a superstar. Well, you are feeding the dog, and you have also set up that the protagonist has never had a soft meal from the beginning to the end, not to mention that the heroine is attached to it. Although the heroine is very good, you can be kicked in the face like a scum by this Teddy manager. It turns out that the life of people in this world is screwed up. And the teaching part is the most embarrassing. It's forced to pretend. I really can't stand it, so I gave up.

I endured the poison and read more than ten chapters. Just this agent, I didn't know that the male and female protagonists have become servants of the agent, with all kinds of cynicism and all kinds of wanton belittlement. The male protagonist doesn't want to change either. Just go with the flow. The male protagonist comes here and wants to love a female protagonist who loves him. He went off to teach fools before he even got to the first chapter. That's right, he was a fool.

It's not suitable to write about celebrities. You're suitable to write about the son-in-law who comes to your door, or the mother-in-law who scolds the street. It's a good entertainment. If you let a big star's agent yell at the big star's man, are you sure it's something a serious person does?

Today's fast food literature is really hard to swallow. I'll be full after reading a few chapters.

Brother, do you want to watch it? Brother: Don't look! Are brothers poisonous? Brother: Poison!

It's really crappy and the writing is extremely poor. If you want to write about entertainment, you should at least understand the current entertainment industry first.

I can't bear it anymore... Comrade, hold on, even if one of me falls, there will still be thousands of you, me and him.