The Dandy Is Too Invincible

Thirty years old, one of the top 50 in the world,,, the son of the county magistrate pretends to be 13 in front of senior officials! ! How dare you write it!

I can't understand the first chapter, and I feel like I'm going to be persuaded to quit. I suggest the author change it. The author first wrote that she became a fashionable girl, and then suddenly jumped to a young man or something. It's so confusing, and there is a problem with the connection 😡😡

What does the beginning of Chapter 40 mean? Baffling

This is such a mess. How about I change it? It's so messy that I couldn't stand the first chapter.

To be precise, it jumps too fast. Readers read very quickly and it is impossible to read word for word. Some of them cannot be seen and it is easy for people to understand. Narration and paragraphing are very important and it is a bit messy, so I thought, forget it, I am too lazy to type. My baby is still in class. I will talk about it later 😭